Wow. I don't usually read the longer stories on here, but yours caught my attention instantly. It's so well written and it kept me on the edge for the whole thing. Well done! :)

Had me tense and at the edge of my seat. Not only was it a great fanfic I found it a very enjoyable piece of fiction overall. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. :D

I just read the whole story today, don't know how I missed it before!... This was amazing, there are so many good things in this story that I don't know where to start... I've been reading and writing fanfiction for more than 10 years and I know how difficult it is to write a truly suspenseful story, but you did it, and an unrelenting pace too.

On a more specific note, I loved the fact that Gustav was the one to save the day, I didn't see it coming, and that image of him leaning against the doorway, bleeding and shaking, but with the gun in his hand...God! I think I fell a little in love with him at that moment.

Anyway, thank for a wonderfull story and I look foward to seeing more of your writting.

Haha wow that was simply MIND BLOWING! I seriously freakin loved it... i was on the edge of my seat the WHOLE time!! and ooh that ending was cute as hell :P You're amazing!!!

I LOVED IT! I was like OMG what's gonna happen next!? It's great :)

I love this story! It was one of the few horror stories that I actually felt a little nervous while reading. ;) Maybe because I was reading it anytime between 1-5AM (bad sleeping habits). It was pretty exciting to read. I can't wait for the sequel!

*amused by the ending*

Your writting a sequal? *-* *not sure if you ment this one*

Loved it to the end~ ^^

Author's Response: I figured, you know, sixteen chapters of drama and suspense and horror, I had to have a little fluff in the end. Glad you enjoyed. I am writing a sequel, or rather I have plans to write one. I'm currently working on an entirely different story, but once that's finished I'm coming back to this universe, because I'm far from done playing in it. Thank you for reading this to the very end!

HOW YOU GET THAT MUCH TENSION IN THERE WITHOUT IT EXPLODIN IS BEYOND ME!!!O.O TOM!!! *squeaks and runs about* NEXT NEXT CHAP!

Orrr, I can't believe that it's actually over. But there's going to be a sequel, so I'm rather buzzing.
I swear to God, I've never had a fic make my heart pump as much as this one did. You knew how to do all the right things and say all the right things. Or, write them rather.
I was so excited to see this updated, but then I remembered that it was the last one and I really didn't want to open it, since the longer I left it unread, the longer the story would still be unfinished. Or that's how it works in my mind at least.
What you did with the last two chapters was incredible, I’m not comparing this to a movie, but, you know when everything is coming to an end? That’s exactly the feeling I got.


Bill. I loved almost nearly everything about him.
I don't think I could find something that I didn't. I'd have to look fucking hard to find something that I didn't actually.
His adorable cuteness and vulnerability made the story something great. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that it would be shit if he wasn't like that, but, in my eyes it was perfect and so befitting. That vulnerability brought out aspects of the others that you don't normally get to see, since the situation never calls for it.
I'm so glad that you had him feel bad for the vacation being his idea, I think I would have been slightly disappointed if he didn't. I know that he had no idea that anything was going to happen but if he didn't feel some remorse, then I'd be bitching to you to go back and change it.
Don't take that badly, I only ever bitch to authors whom I adore, since I hate anything to happen to their stories. Thank God I never bitched to you.

But other than that side, I loved how he was strong when he needed to be. And how he didn’t need to be cared for all the time, even if he was since Tom was so protective.
The mix that you created between the both of them (needy Bill and strong Bill) worked so well, better than I can get into words actually.


Tom. Oh my fucking God. You wrote the Tom that I love above all others. Strong, protective, calm, angry, loving, gentle and caring all in one. There is no better combination in my eyes. That’s how I myself write him and that’s how I adore when others write him.
On that subject of how he acted, you don’t know how wonderful it is that you didn’t write him as bored and nonchalant of the whole situation. I know that some authors, normally ones who’ve never written him before, give him that kind of attitude, which completely spoils him.
How he was with Bill melted my heart over and over again. With that though, the fact he did manage to get frustrated with Bill, only ever so slightly, and even though it was rarely voiced (like being slightly miffed about the man a the window incident) worked so well.
And him getting angry at the others over how they treat Bill melted my heart even more so.


Gustav.Although he and Georg weren’t the centre if attention, his calm and in control nature fit this story perfectly, more than perfectly. Saying that, the fact he did manage to get scared and worried with the rest of them is something that I’m glad you never forgot (I’m not saying that you would, since I know that you’re an amazingly adapt author, I just compare everyone, no matter who they are, to other writers on the site).
The thing I most admire you for with Gustav however is for once, he was the hero, not one of the fucking twins, no matter how much I love them both, they’re always the heroes, they’re always the centre of attention and they’re always the victims. And how he wasn’t magically fine immediately after a head injury, albeit a month later.


Georg.His comic relief, even if it wasn’t always prominent, it made reading it a whole lot easier (a break from the angst that is).
He made me laugh so much more than the others, even though there weren’t a lot of times to laugh there were far more than I expected.
I know I’m repeating myself on starting sentences, but there are only so many ways that I can.
The fact Georg, more so than the others, got annoyed and frustrated with Bill was such a prefect thing to write in. There is nothing I hate more than when there is something traumatic going on and there isn’t one character that ever gets angry with another. It’s such a rookie mistake.
At the end, when he was all worried over Gustav and motherly was so fucking mint! I never aww over something between the G’s, well I do, but not when they’re not in a relationship. Ooo, how about them two getting together in the sequel? Only if you want them to that is.
There’s more that I’m wanting to say on Geo, but it’s not coming out.



The setting worked so well, I could imagine myself there with them, watching them rather. The fear that must have been pumping through their veins was pumping through mine after I’d read it, on more than one occasion I was too scared to go downstairs, no matter how childish that sounds. I’ve never been able to handle things happening to someone by someone they can’t see or hear well.

If you don’t read all of this I understand, I know it’s very lengthy.
It was so sweet of you to mention me in the final notes, I actually blushed. Thank you, your words were so kind.

With your last review response, the one concerning bribary, there is really no need, honestly, although very sweet, more than sweet, I don’t need it. I’m more than happy to make you banners and leave reviews.

Speaking of banners, the one you mentioned wanting earlier, do you want to tell me what you want now so I can start working on it, so it’s as best as it can be? If so, e-mail me (my e-mail address is on my profile) and I’ll really try to get it how you want.

I’m so glad that I started to read this, it’s been a fucking amazing read!

Author's Response: WOW, EPIC review. *honored* First and foremost, thank you for being the number one drive behind me finishing this, especially when there were times I wanted to take an extended break *mumbledeletionmumble*. You were phenominal motivation and YOU are a huge reason this story was such a sucess. I don't think I can thank you enough for making my first TH fanfic such a memorable experience. I have very little free time, but your reviews and very helpful comments always made me want to spend that time writing. And in that regard, you made me a better writer, telling me what worked and where the best interactions between characters were happening. You are more than I ever expected to get out of a little fanfic.rnrnAs for my next story, I would be honored, more than honored, if you would make the banner. The story is a little different, I'm taking a step into the fantasy world for a moment, trying to work TH in realistically to a setting that is far from logical, but I think it's working out well so far. I'd actually like to send you the first chapter ahead of time and let you know some stuff about the world I've painstakingly created, so you can get a feel for what you'll be making a banner for. I'll e-mail you once midterms are over and I have time to dedicate to the story.rnrnAh, so I really can't thank you enough for all you contributed to this story and how welcomed you made me feel here. You are the BEST.

oh gods.. I'm surprised they all didn't about jump out of their skins at the fan-girl shrieks. and running again, at least not from psycho nut bags this time... Looking forward to the sequel!

Author's Response: lol, really, what's more scary, a psycho with a hatchet or fangirls? Tough choice, I'd say. Thank you so much!