Date: 10/21/08 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 17
Man, I hope you'll post another story soon, because I think you're a really good author and I'm going to read it, no matter what it's about!
You're really good at writing this kind of stuff though! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you for your compliment! I'm already hard at work on another story, and I hope to start posting it soon.
Date: 10/21/08 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wow... this epilogue is so fitting. The guy isn't dead, is he? Will he be in the sequel? When the screaming started I thought that was him coming with an ax or something. XD The last line is perfection, and I truly adore this story (enough to add it to my favorites, clearly). I can't wait for the sequel. You did such an amazing job. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy this lived up to expectations and people enjoyed all my hard work, and thanks for sticking around until the very end. Be on the lookout for the sequel.
Date: 10/21/08 09:39 am Title: Chapter 16
Go Gustav! And Bill "if all else fails break something"
after that I don't think I'd want to Hear the word vacation
Date: 10/19/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
*collapses from sheer relief*
Date: 10/19/08 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
AWWWWW Gusti saved the day XD you had me freaking out for bit -_-
excited for the epilogue =)
Date: 10/19/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
AWESOME!!!!!!!
I'm waiting for the epilogue
Date: 10/19/08 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
I know Tom wasn't going to be dead. :) You led us to believe that Bill had been killed in an earlier chapter ("falling into unconsciousness and sudden death"), but he wasn't exactly dead. Although, I figured Tom had fired his gun and the kick was what had knocked him over. Guess I was pretty close, huh? Clumsy Tom!
I like that the officer gave them hot chocolate and a blanket. :) So glad they all made it out okay...
Date: 10/19/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
YEY!!!! Love the ending! Gustav to the rescue! Can't wait for the epilogue :D
Author's Response: lol. Georg may be my favorite, but Gustav is so the big hero in my book. Epilogue to follow in a few short days.
Date: 10/19/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 16
Thank God I went to check on this story. Because I didn't get my email update that you updated because you deleted. Its okay. I'm just SO HAPPY you posted the chapter. The cliffhanger killed me.
Author's Response: *sigh* That's one of the things I was most upset with when I stupidly hit the wrong button to delete. I was worried about all the people who wouldn't get the notification of when I'd finally gotten a new chapter up. I'm VERY happy you went and looked for it. Don't forget to hang around for the epilogue.
Date: 10/19/08 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
(Oh my god... I just submitted the longest and most awesome review and my internet connection was off. I can't fucking believe this. :@)
Anyway. I'm glad I waited with reading this, otherwise I would've died several times already from the suspense. It's very, very well written, and I adore those little paragraphs you threw in about Bill and Tom; what they mean to each other and what roles they have. This reminded me of both Wilderness (I think that's what it was called) and the Texas Chainsaw Massacre. Also, Cabin Fever was one hell of a scary movie. XD In the second chapter, I believe, you mentioned something about the Gs being excluded, and I couldn't agree more. Especially in fiction (at least when twincest is concerned). I love how you wrote big brother!Tom and all of the dialogue was so very realistic. What else... *ponders* Well, I love this, it scared the fucking shit out of me, and I've been watching horror movies since I was five years old. XD I can't wait for the epilogue. And possibly super-fluffy sequel? ;-)
They have got to make a movie out of this. I'd buy ten copies, at the very least. =)
Author's Response: Why thank you! I think I did an okay job for this being my first TH fanfic. I tried to remain true to the actual people that Tom, Bill, Georg and Gustav are, but very much remain aware that I'm writing them in a fictional manner. rnrnReally, thank you for leaving such a wonderful review and letting me know all the wonderful things you liked. A sequel is really not out of the question, but I doubt it would be fluffy--fluff will come in the epilogue, but I bet that's all I'll be able to do. I admit, I'm not a huge fluff fan and I don't write it especially well.rnrnAh, so do stick around for the epilogue and any possible sequal that might spawn, and thank you so much!
Date: 10/19/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
aww its over :( I'll miss this so much!
yayy for an epilogue!!! :D
Author's Response: Awww, don't worry, a sequel is still very possible, especially with the way I've written the epilogue.
Date: 10/19/08 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 16
PHEW! What a ride this has been. And YAY, Tomi is ok :)) I'm so glad they all made it. Right the way through, things have been so damn dangerous that I was certain at least one of them wouldn't get home. But they did!
* is very happy *
Looking forward to the epilogue. X
Author's Response: lol, I was being such a brat teasing everyone with killing one of the boys, even though I knew I was never going to do it. I promise fluffy love in the epilogue!
Date: 10/19/08 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
Orr! I'm so glad that nothing happened to them.
Nothing too bad rather, too bad being death.
No matter what, there's nothing more that I love than a protective, sweet older brother Tom. I love the platonic kisses he gives Bill. They just make me go ga-ga.
This whole fic has in fact.
This feels weird to read now, having been deleted then re-posted. Not weird bad, I don't think. Oh I don't know, it just feels odd.
Tbh, I think that I should have had Gustav in a superhero's costume on the banner. That's all I could think of whenever they said he saved the day.
I can't wait for the epilogue, hopefully it'll be long and fluffy as fuck? *crosses fingers*
After that, I'll leave a proper long review. Nothing small, and it'll have what I liked and dislike about the characters, the settings and everything that you did well.
I'm itching to do that now, since this was just so fucking good, but I only ever do it for the final chapter.
Depending on what the epilogue is going to be like, I really think you should write a sequel. Because this was so fucking amazing, I can only imagine what a sequel would be like. I don't think I'd be bothered what was in it, be it their next vacation, what happens there, or a story, only about five chapters long, about what happens after they get back. Like, how the public and press react to everything.
I loved Tom so fucking much in this! He was so amazing! I know I've said this a million times, but how you've wrote him just makes me weak at the knees.
Not to mention how you've done Bill.
God, I want to write more, but I've got a ton of things to do, and my hand's hurting.
So excited, yet sad, for the ending.
Author's Response: Bah, I'm glad you enjoyed this, because I'm still seething over the deletion. I really feel like I screwed up the flow of the story and the building suspense, not to mention this chapter should have been out days ago. *sigh*rnrnI absolutely can't wait for your overall impression, because you, more than anyone else, really give a very clear picutre of what worked and what didn't, where scenes and interactions between people were awkward and so on and so forth.rnrnA sequel ... to be honest, while I was writing this the thought never crossed my mind, and then I wrote the epilogue and I was like ... okay, maybe. Ah, so stick around to see how I've set myself up for a possible sequel in the epilogue and I promise lots of fluff, because these boys sure do deserve some fluff.
Date: 10/18/08 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh my I went into quite a panic when I thought this was gone. I'm really glad it was just a simple mistake and that you're not gone! That would have been sad. I'm sorry you lost everything though.
Date: 10/18/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 15
Again, the evil cliff hanger! I can't take this again :P
I'm going to eat pizza and look at some smexy pictures of Bill and Tom, and when I get back the new chapter better be up or... There's pretty much nothing I can do about it LOL!
Congragulations on getting this all back up so fast!
Date: 10/18/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh god. This brings back memories of begging you not to kill Tomi! Eeek
Just to make sure -
PLEASE DON'T KILL TOM! lol
* is excited to know the next chapter is almost here *
Date: 10/18/08 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww, that response was so cute! Sorry about reviewing twice but I've no other way of saying thanks
You won't need to resort to bribary...but good things can come of it, good things for me that it :) The end! As if! PLEASE say it's gonna be fluffy!
Author's Response: No bribary? I insist. Should you continue to make wonderful banners for me, I'm more than willing to sneak you chapters early, or perhaps even write something just for you. I promise fluff in the epilogue, with a hint of danger. I'm working hard already on a new story, but I am seriously considering a sequel and if something comes of the ideas I'm throwing around in my head, then it will be written, and hopefully before finals role around, because I'm nothing but a lump of coal then and christmas/winter break is one big mini-vacation where I don't want to do anything.
Date: 10/18/08 09:36 am Title: Chapter 10
It's so sad to see this story going out and all the reviews you have lost. For anyone who is new to this fic - it had tons!
I know as soon as we 'catch up' all your reviewers will be back :)
X
Author's Response: I admit, while I try not to judge a story by its reviews, but a person would have to be lying to admit they don't like the number that goes along with all their hard work. To see 100+ disapear was ... horrible. But they're not coming back, that's life, it sucks and I'm already moving on. Ah, and btw, I'm really getting these chapters up as fast as possible. I should be done and have the new one posted (sixteen) by today.
Date: 10/18/08 09:18 am Title: Chapter 10
even on the second read this fic is creepy as hell...
Date: 10/18/08 12:12 am Title: Chapter 9
what was the last chapter you posted before it got deleted?
Author's Response: Fifteen was the last. I'll upload sixteen as soon as I get caught up.