Date: 09/01/11 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oooh God I love this story!!! I do hope you update it soon!!!!
Date: 01/04/11 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
i think this is so sweet. what if, at the tour promotion thing the next day, tom and bill go into "matti withdrawel" and are down in the dumps and not in a good mood and david asks whats wrong and they say they they met a girl and they haven't been away from her since they met and david says that they can take her on their tourbuss with them if they want and then you can have all sorts of gun with that!
Author's Response: That is an excellent idea!
Date: 09/18/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh my god... I canīt breath. That was... so hot, so real, so awesome. I pictured every detail, I saw it right in front of me. I love the way you write, I donīt know what else to say:)
Date: 08/06/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter 13
Holy Jesus *_______* I swear this is one of my deepest fantasies *_____*
where do you get all that imagination? O_O haha *_____*
towards the end the story was just even more ahhh *____* I have to admit, I didn't quite like the fact that Bill was being rejected at the beginning but things change so well *_____*
I just love the scene with the fruit salad...omg I was so gonna pass out *_________*
Date: 08/05/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG what are they going to do with her? xD hahaha! MY GOD THIS IS EVERY FAN DREAM *____* having the Kaulitz twins at your feet...omg I'm gonna pass away if I read the next chapters x___x
Date: 04/10/10 07:11 am Title: Chapter 13
You're just amazing. I would love just some more chapters ^^
xXx Steffi
Date: 12/08/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG! I absolutely love this story...Not just for the sexual content but the plot is great. Hope to see more soon.
Date: 07/29/09 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
lmao. DON'T COME IN MY ROOM WHEN I'M FUCKING!!! hahahaaa
Date: 07/11/09 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 13
hahahahahaha....that had to be the horniest story i have ever read!!
=D damn...it sounds like you're very experienced in this field lol
i dont even know wut to really say...i was just shocked at everything that was happening...*falls out of chair laughing* *wheezing* =D
Date: 06/18/09 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 13
aww it's super good! Update soon! It's so great!!
Date: 05/27/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really good writing! I am going to read the 2nd chapter now ;)
Date: 05/05/09 06:10 am Title: Chapter 13
so awesome!! hhahahhaha but Bill seems to just be barely mature and Tom too far ... oh well it was soo nice to read it
Date: 04/11/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
wow,that was soooooooooooooooo hot!!!!
Date: 03/24/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was the hotest thing in the history of H O T! :X
Date: 01/30/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh WOW
hahaha !
bill is so funny !
he's just calmly watching everything
as if watching a movie
haha !
i like this a lot !
(:
Date: 01/17/09 01:45 am Title: Chapter 13
Bill and Matti began to rush around the racks, obediently followed by Tom who just held out his arms to carry every item they threw at him. – I can totally picture this!!
Tom shouted after her. "Bra and panty sets first please!" – boys! *shakes head*
Wait a minute her shoes match her knickers but not her clothes? *shakes head* naughty Bill!
He pushed forward and Matti was ready, catching his spunk on her tongue before letting it trickle down her throat. She caught the next pulse on her tongue again, this time pushing it out of her mouth so it dribbled down her chin. – OMG she’s a porn star!
"Is everything OK in there?" The shop owner repeated. "Can I get you anything?" – ha ha ha they’ve been caught!
"No. Thanks. We've got everything we need right here." - *giggles and shakes head*
Date: 01/17/09 01:39 am Title: Chapter 12
"It's not a problem! Just wear the dress and we'll make the first stop somewhere to buy you some new clothes!" – FUN SHOPPING!!!
Bill frowned then grinned. "Of course! Well, let me drive then! You always drive! I can drive too you know Matti! I'm very good at it!" - *nods* yes Bill I’m sure you are!
Tom groaned again as he watched the finger slowly disappear inside her. – Ha ha she’s made for them…she’s so evil!!
Bill could see that Matti was close to coming, and from the corner of his eye he could see that Tom was too. In a panic he shoved his jeans and boxers down over his hips and tugged furiously on his cock. "Wait! Wait for me!" - *giggles* oh Bill you are adorable!!
Tyres – does tires have a y in UK English?
Date: 01/17/09 01:32 am Title: Chapter 11
Bill and Tom were sitting at the kitchen table, chatting, as she walked in. – uh-oh they’ve been plotting haven’t they?
She looked from one innocent, smiling face to the other, nodded suspiciously, then tucked in to a delicious bowl of fresh fruit salad. – hum?! *looks suspiciously doubtful*
Food play huh?! *arched eyebrows*
Bill clapped his hands. "Come on Matti! It's breakfast time!" - *blinks*
As she lay, savouring the sensation, it occurred to her that last night they had all been pretty much stoned and drunk for most of the evening. But this morning they were sober. Stone cold sober. And it didn’t make any difference. – obviously not that stoned or drunk! Enough that it was just the push over into what they would have done already as we are here now!
One finger from each of them, pushing in and out, they started to stretch her open, exploring inside her, each one touching a different part of her insides. She opened her legs wider and raised her hips up trying to get more. Tom slipped another finger in and she cried out for more as they fucked her cunt with their hands – NICE!!! *shudders* *says in a monotone* No let me rephrase that. Oh my fucking god that is so hot I can’t believe it. *pants*
"Now Bill. NOW." He shouted at his brother and Bill lost control, crying out as he thrust finally and deeply inside her, filling her with his hot come. - *shudders* OMG there tag teaming her!
She looked from one twin to the other. "So, what else have you been plotting?" – yeah seriously!
Date: 01/17/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter 10
Tom woke slowly, remembered where he was, and rolled over to put his arms around Matti. But she wasn't there. This woke him fully and he sat up quickly, pulled on a t-shirt and ran out the room. – awh are they going to miss her when she’s gone…are they going to keep her as their “personal assistant”?
Now we've got our own place maybe we can get a puppy – sure Bill you can have a puppy!
Bill was failing to hide a massive erection - *snickers*
"Please Matti, fuck me!" He whispered hoarsely, ready to beg if he had to. - *nods* yes please make him beg!
"Tom... Tom, I want Bill to lick my clit while you're fucking me..."
Yet again Tom was in such ecstasy fucking Matti that he didn't care what she asked for. He knew that she knew he'd do anything she asked. Anything. – Yum I live for a submissive Tom!
DUDE she’s going to be sooo full of come by the end of this she could be a sperm bank! Ha ha ha