Date: 10/16/08 08:28 am Title: Chapter 1
hehehe... i'm so, SO happy that you made a sequel.
I'm simply gleeful after reading this. Thanx =)
Author's Response: *squee* I'm SO happy you read my sequel. And I'm glad it made you gleeful ;) I hope to do so again some time in the future!
Date: 10/16/08 06:44 am Title: Chapter 1
maybe not JUST as much (im a pervert. i dont even have an exuse, except for my raging 19 yr old hormones) but its really sweeet. so sweet infact i want asequel! i love the closing line. they're staring at a sock, wondering what the hell is going on . *lol*
Author's Response: :D It's OK to have raging hormones. I do, too ^.^ Just as long as it amused you even a little, I'm good. I'm not sure about a sequel, but I do like writing Bill/Bu a lot, so if a plot bunny strikes, who am I to say no? And the feedback I've been getting makes me feel really good. I didn't think people would like my writing, but now that i have a few supporters I'm thinkin' there might be more in the future! I want to tackle an actual series, but first I have to have a good idea, and I'm a little scared to balance that many characters, but I think I can :) THANKYOUSOMUCH!
Date: 10/16/08 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I have no energy for a detailed review, forgive me. But. You write kinda gud. *__*
I do so love cocky!Bushido and his little smirk. -pets Bu-
Some favorite lines:
He wanted a shower, clean clothes, and two cans of hairspray, in that order. Heehee, Bill.
“If you’d wanted to leave me a memento, Bill, you could’ve at least left me the briefs.” Heehee, Bushido.
Outside, Georg, Tom and Gustav stared at a lone black sock lying in front of Bill’s door. Hehehehehe.
Very, very nice. :)
Author's Response: It just now dawned on my that you're the author of the Enslaved series, so I'm kind of in a puddle right now. You could've reviewed and just said "hey, it was good. kthxbye." and I would've been bouncing off the walls. I'm really glad you liked Bu's line about the memento. It just seemed like what he would say XD I'm glad you enjoy, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/16/08 04:49 am Title: Chapter 1
"Outside, Georg, Tom and Gustav stared at a lone black sock lying in front of Bill’s door."
BWAHAHAHAHA!!! Hilarious! how the hell did the sock end up outside? Maybe i need to read more carefuly...
I like it!Bill's attempt at freeing himself from bushido's hold on the bed was so funny.
Thanks for the sequel^_^
Author's Response: :) silly Bushido! he left that sock when Bill pulled him into the room so quickly XD I don't think I actually said that, though. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed Bill's adventure getting out of bed, and thanks x 100 for reviewing. They're my drug ^__^
Date: 10/16/08 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I laughed though half of this. Your Bill was very amusing.
Author's Response: CurseALot!Bill is my favorite. He has mad stealth skillz *coughcough*rnrnGlad you enjoyed it ^.^