Date: 12/05/10 09:24 pm Title: Jealous? Pfft....
That was a really cute story. I can so imagine Bill getting all jealous, I know I would.
Date: 11/27/08 07:18 pm Title: Jealous? Pfft....
haha that was amazin!
Author's Response: Thanks! I tried my best :D
Date: 10/15/08 02:37 pm Title: Jealous? Pfft....
haha loved it b better if it had some of tha good stuff lolz
Author's Response: If you've read any of my other stories, you'll know how bad I am at writing that stuff... And also, twincest still makes me a little uncomfortable, so combine those two factors and you wouldn't like it LOL! rnrnBut hey, you liked what you read right? :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/15/08 01:31 pm Title: Jealous? Pfft....
Bill beating Tom with a magazine is my favorite mental image ever right now. :)
Author's Response: LOL! Glad I could provide you with that. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 10/15/08 11:29 am Title: Jealous? Pfft....
You are such a meaner!! How dare you end it right there. *throws things at you*
Author's Response: C'mon T, you can use you're imagination, I know you can ;)
Date: 10/15/08 10:59 am Title: Jealous? Pfft....
I liked this good job
Author's Response: Thanks :D Glad you liked it!
Date: 10/15/08 10:55 am Title: Jealous? Pfft....
Love the magazine beating, lol and Bill in the backseat, but why is Tom's Escalade in New York? Great story other than that little confusion. :)
Author's Response: Sorry about that, I wasn't even thinking about Tom's car being in NY, but hey, that's why they call it fiction right? rnrnGlad you liked it anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 10/15/08 10:00 am Title: Jealous? Pfft....
I liked the story..it was funny how bill went straight for the backseat of toms car. I was slightly confused about how his car got to nyc? But other than that it was a awesome story
Author's Response: Yeah, that never occured to me :P Maybe it would've been better to set it in Germany, but whatever, that's why it's called fiction right?rnrnGlad you liked it besides the car flaw :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/15/08 09:50 am Title: Jealous? Pfft....
Haha!! that was sweet. Jealous!Bill is so fun to read, i couldn't help but smile till the last word. However,i think it lacked some more details? I had the impression that everything was runing too fast and before i know it, it was over. But, for your first twincest, this is very good, i love to have a light read sometimes ^_^
Author's Response: Sorry that it was so short, I only had like an hour to write it before I had to watch SVU, so... I could've worked on it a bit more, but I was lazy LOL!rnrnGlad you liked it anyways though, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/15/08 09:22 am Title: Jealous? Pfft....
Rawr ^^,