Date: 03/09/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was hot and oddly sweet. XD I'll take oddly sweet ;) Thanks for the review love.
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Date: 01/23/09 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOLY FUCK!!!!!! This positively oooozed sex appeal!!
Author's Response:
XD.
Billshido usually does.
Thanks a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed reading. Mmm, boysex.
Date: 10/30/08 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, wow. That was exciting, you know, if I may dare. ,) Maybe because Bushido is older that Bill, or something, I don't know, honestly...
But it surely was a very interesting one-shot, I loved it so much. :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) I also like the fact that Bushido is so much older than Bill. Does that make me pervy? Psht, as if I care >__>rnI hope you read the sequel!
Date: 10/18/08 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1
That was good, very nice.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I appreciate it!
Date: 10/15/08 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice--I only like Bill/Bushido when it's done in a certain way, and I liked this a lot. Bushido was a little bit of a giver at first, which helps, and I also liked they detail with which you described the whole encounter.
This line "Bill could only think of the hand that wrapped around his left thigh - still draped over a muscular shoulder - and of the lips that pressed slow, relaxed kisses on the inside," really got me, very hot! I hope you post more fics soon!
Author's Response: You just made my day. I love "Change of Plans" and when I saw a review from you, I hadn't even started reading because I was squee-ing :DrnrnI feel so encouraged to write more now. ^___^rnThank you!
Date: 10/15/08 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really enjoyed your story.
Now i'm still debating with myself if the end was uber-awesome or uber-frustrating... impresive, no matter what =)
Author's Response: =))rnIt was both. Don't worry about choosing XDrnThank you so much. I feel so encouraged now :)
Date: 10/15/08 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1
wehw! that was a good read^_^ , and hot too! i chuckled at the end! this screams for a sequel, girl!
Author's Response: A sequel, ehh? You're not the only one to mention that. I honestly hadn't thought of one, but it would be fun to write more about Bill's reaction (erm - he was a lil' drunk XD. maybe he'll try to sneak out of bed, eh?) and I really would like the chance to develop my own characterization of Bushido. rnThanks for reading :DDD
Date: 10/15/08 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1
This is very good! Bill/Bushido is my favourite pairing and your writing is so good! I would love to see what happens next.. would Bill regret it?
Author's Response: I'm totally thinking about writing a sequel now that has Bill's reaction to the whole thing. rnOh, the temptation!rnI'm so glad you liked the fic. Bushido FTW!rnI 'preciate ya!
Date: 10/15/08 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful. Yes, very hot because of the smut and Billshido in general, but somehow very beautiful, too. Delicate. Or something. n___n;
Author's Response: BILLSHIDO FTW! rnI'm glad you got that the "delicate" vibe got across to you. Smut is good, but it's always nice to have that undertone of something more :)rnDanke, pineacus!
Date: 10/15/08 05:56 am Title: Chapter 1
heh heh loved it especially the fact that Bushido was being so gentle and especially loved the end -grins-
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the end! At first I almost felt like it would be a cop out, but it just seemed to fit, you know? rn:DrnI'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 10/15/08 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1
positive of course
and i need a sequell for this fast
Author's Response: A sequel? It's interesting you mention that. I've been thinking of what Bill's reaction would be, and it would be hella fun to charactize Bushido (or shall we call him Anis? XD)rnI might need to get crackin' on that, and thank joo for the review!
Date: 10/15/08 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Oops, and forgot to mention: the little r11; really threw me off while reading. I think they were the cause of a symbol you used that changed itself into code or something. -vague hand gesture- Either way, they were distracting, and should be kicked to the curb. :D
Author's Response: Oooh, I see it now. *runs off to edit*
Date: 10/15/08 01:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey Miss Anchor lady,
I generally don't review PWPs, mainly because well-written ones leave me drooling on my keyboard in a puddle of incoherence, but seeing as this is your first fanfic ever (and honestly, I would have never guessed that to be the case) and it was a Billshido, I just had to.
-drools-
I'll be honest, when I first saw it on the Recent page, I read it expecting it to be another mediocre attempt at sex between Bill and some-other-man (because in most PWPs like this, Bushido normally has no characterization at all, unless you count the size of his dick) and I was very pleasantly surprised to see this: 'Bushido’s kisses were like his features; sharp and angular, yet irresistibly soft.'
Yep, got me from the get go. And then it degenerated into a spiral of smut, which haha you don't hear me complaining but I really did live for the little Bu-lines, especially this one: “Relax, baby.” Hands stroked over his hips. “Let me take you.” *__*
Oh, and then this line: "When he awoke the next morning, curled on his left side, blanketed by cotton and human flesh," He stayed. X3
As far as PWPs go, it was hot. As far as Billshido goes, it was lovely, and I hope you write more. We're in severe need of it. :) Great work.
Ella
Author's Response: I don't know why I love Bill/Bushido so much, but I just do. A couple of days ago I spent a few HOURS just looking for/reading Billshido, and once I'd read all I could find, I definitely felt the need to write one. rnI really appreciate you taking the time to read it. I know I'm a new author and since it is just a PWP AND has Bushido in it, I knew there wouldn't be too many people reading.rnrnI appreciate the feedback very much :)
Date: 10/15/08 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh lordy. *takes a deep breath*
You are amazing. I generally don't read fanfic by authors I don't know well, but... I'm SO glad I read this. That was HOT.
Author's Response: I appreciate that. I am *definitely* an unknown, so it's nice to hear you liked it :)
Date: 10/15/08 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
This was hazy hot, and the end amused me quite a bit for some reason. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thank you :)rnrnAnd hey, if it amuses you, I'm OK with that XD