Date: 06/26/09 03:41 pm Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
hahahahha the fireeplace xD
love it (:
Date: 11/07/08 10:10 am Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
heehee im going to review ALL of your stories...it's now my life goal!
Author's Response: Wowzers!! I have an Obsessed fan!!! OOh OOh!! Can you be my offical GROUPIEE???? PWEASE???!!!! <3
Date: 10/18/08 06:44 pm Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
lol. pretty cool. i personally don't like the idea of them being so young but everything else was sweet. :)
Author's Response: Well, love effects people in different way, it's not like (in my mind) they would do it offten. But it's what Lottie(who I wrote it for) wanted, and what she want's hshe get's!! But thank you!! you made me smile!! <3
Date: 10/15/08 04:19 am Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
might wanna get a beta^_^
Author's Response: I have a beta, but it's the same person as who the story was for, and I didn't want to ruin the surprise... So this one went unbeta'd. Donke, Liebe. <3
Date: 10/14/08 06:08 pm Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
Nice smuttie smut xP But aren't they quite...developed being only thirteen? I mean, they seem a lot older. But well, just my opinion.
Author's Response: Hee Hee thanks, That's how Lottie wanted it, so that's how Lottie got it. This is REALLY not my norm.
Date: 10/14/08 05:59 pm Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
It was totally hot but a cute romantic setting. I liked it.
Author's Response: Awww thanks hun-eh!! Probably the most uplifting out of all of these reviews... :)
Date: 10/14/08 05:50 pm Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
YEP, sexy and hot, made me horny as a...horny dog? (no, seriously, horny as a dog with the heat). If that was your goal...well, mission accomplished :D
However, this is a mistake I think "messaged the whole". Isn't it massaged the hole? Not to sound picky, just helping here.
Author's Response: Hee Hee, that was my goal. O.O I'll go fix that now!!! i'm not that good at english, sorry. Thank you!!! <3rn
Date: 10/14/08 03:51 pm Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
Well, as for the idea: I liked it. As for the writing: I kinda liked it. I see you have potential, but didn't use all your abilites in this story according to me: it was too straight forward, when you could've gone much longer on each part of it, and let the reader enjoy it fully (because, I say it again, the plot was brilliant), and those mistakes killed it; if I were you, I'd take a beta for the first times you post, and then, when you've learned your mistakes, leave it to your own fingers ;) These are just suggestion, you can as well as cannot follow them, but as a reader and author I feel the need to give you my point of view ;) okay? I hope you'll write more of, and like, this.
Author's Response: Well thank you SO much. This was written in fourty minutes, and that's all the time I had to write it, it was like a personal challange. I have a beta person, and unfourtunatly it was the person I was writting it for, and I didn't wasnt to ruin the surprise. :), but I'll have Lottie Beta it after she's read it, and then repost it. I love the fact that you would give me suggestiions to help me out, and I see what your feeling, I sometimes do the same. So thank you VERY much Silvia, you helped a lot. :)
Date: 10/14/08 03:09 pm Title: Spongebob Boxers are better off the Body.
It was really nice! You need to write more! :D
And even if I don't know ShatterToPieces (though I'd like to) Hip Hip Hurray!! for her!! And for you too sweety!! :)
Author's Response: Awe Hun-eh thank you!!! SO MUCH!!! (loves on Lottie)