Date: 07/19/10 08:33 am Title: Fallen Again
I was SO glad to see an update for this fic ! Really cute chapter, I like both of their character! And I really wish Tom is The one that Bill is waiting for :)
Can't wait to read more !
Date: 07/19/10 04:16 am Title: Fallen Again
aweeee moreee please
Date: 07/19/10 03:35 am Title: Fallen Again
this hasn't been updated in so long i forgot what it was about, but that meant i got to read it all over again!
Date: 07/19/10 02:40 am Title: Fallen Again
They had tried sleeping together once," i had wondered about that
Yeah, I’m planning on kidnapping him from his apartment in exactly one hour, so he better get his ass into gear if he wants to spend that hour making himself pretty in front of the mirror.” i somehow knew he was talking about bill even before he made it obvious. Hes such a smart ass lol
I’m done, “ he laughed in surprise. “I’m done, and he’s not even here yet.” why do i get the felling thats a first? lol
“Bill,” Andreas said, voice shaking in laughter. “And where’s your bag?” he puts everything in the bag the forgets to grab the bag? oh bill lol
" and then you introduce me to your wife and your two kids.” good grief.
Tom snorted. “Do I look like the kind of person who’s had time to produce two kids?” um... do you want an HONEST answer? lol
awww poor bill. Did the guy lead him on or was bill just neive?
Bills got the wedding and kids planned? i say once more 'hes such a girly girl' lol
HE BOUGHT HIM - I ean BROUGHT him to- A STUDIO! lol
Date: 07/19/10 02:19 am Title: Fallen Again
Hm Bill reminds me of one of my friends. She's had her wedding planned since she was 8? hahaha
Date: 07/19/10 02:18 am Title: Chrushing on you
" he’s gorgeous. Try to keep this one, okay" lol
“Kind eyes,” Bill snorted. “And you’re calling me a cheese ball.” lol i remember when people would call me that. i would call them 'duho-duho's' in response.
Bill’s jaw dropped in awe. “Wow, it’s so pretty!" i can just picture him saying that with his voice jumping an octave up lol
So you don’t mind if I take Tom to my room and start working on stuff? ok that sounds suspicious even to me.
“Just as long as you keep your door open,” good anser.
"Would he have posters or pictures? What color wall did he have? What kind of bed… " how do you start with something as innocent as posters and end up on bed? guess im not the only one with a dirty mind.
"Bill always had a thing for handsome guys with guitars. It just… it looked good. " ya dont say. I go to a whole school full of them.... yeah baby... yeah
Date: 07/19/10 01:49 am Title: "It's impressive"
"If he wanted to be a star he had to get used people wanting to kiss him, " I doubt you get used to that when its THOUSANDS.
"Nice to meet you, Mr. Jost" .... Would you thin I was a complete idiot if I told you David jost reminds me of jack frost?He does.....
"Dave Roth and Peter Hoffman" Roth. Jost and Hoffman sounds like some kind of super group.... you know like BellBivDeoe?
"i was willing to pray and i didnt even belivev in god" i wondered if bill was a Christian .... you know i just saw an episode of family guy here brian started pray - he doesnt belivev in god either but he thought the world was ending.
“I already can’t say no to you, I should be worried.” very.
"flicking his lip ring with his tongue" good grief. That was ten seconds of a video yet its SOOOO em-famous. lol
"Tom’s piercing graced the corner of his mouth and he licked at it curiously, loving the way Tom groaned and tried to pull him closer." Hot.....!
"Tom had to be one of the hottest guys Bill had been with. He had dreadlocks. " Fuck yeah baby. I learned that lesson with the island boys -jamaica woop woop!
"He sighed again and hugged one of the pillows on the couch to his chest. " such a girly girl.
"And what was it... Roberto?" dont call my name,dont call my name.....
i think andis a lil jealous......
Date: 07/19/10 01:18 am Title: "No friggin' way!"
h, my God, you’re so gay.” “Says the one with the 500 euro Gucci bag.” i like this guy. hes sassy.
“Over here, princess.”.... hes sassy too lol
Some rap-song blasted through the vehicle .
“What?” Tom said defensively. ' That a boy! lol
“Just making sure I don’t have to fight anyone for you.” i am likeing tom more and more.
Tom scoffed. “How can you be a star if you can’t even listen to your own voice?” poppy cock. most singers dont listen to their own voice on recordings. They go by how they sound while their singing. I should know. i go to a music school and im a singer myself
Date: 07/19/10 12:52 am Title: "Call me!"
“How does he compare to a certain pirate we all know?" oh i just knew it was coming lol.
"and I bet his dreads are cleaner.” AWW SHIT! I FORGOT JACK PARROW HAD DREADS... is THAT why Bill wanted a man that has them?
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"Bill seemed too shocked to speak, only stared at his friend, his mouth hanging open." you man the way im staring at the computer right now?
“Hey, honey, how are you?” i had my screen scrolled in a way i couldnt see the next line but only one wird came to mind. TOM =)
Bill sighed internally. “Hi, mom.” well #opps
“So you’re sure you don’t want me to fill your fridge?” ok i know its his mother but it still seams like such a suggestive question.... or maybe im just dirty minded..... i think toms getting to me. lol
“Then who else do we know who owns a car?” TOM DOES ;)
Date: 07/19/10 12:37 am Title: Swoon
UGH! im soo sorry. i wrote this whole long bunch f comments for this chapter but when i tried to send it the site had longged me out so it didnt post =(. I might just do it over 2marrow but incase i forget just know that i loved it. (id feel bad leaving you with no clue what i though)
Date: 07/19/10 12:28 am Title: Fallen Again
I'm very glad to see another chapter. The studio part is very exciting for Bill. Not the part where Tom says he'll never settle down. Have hope though Bill, your charms will win him over! Keep up the great work!!
Date: 07/18/10 11:55 pm Title: Fallen Again
aweee, yay :D
Date: 07/18/10 11:39 pm Title: The Phone Call
*i didnt get to finnish reading it earlir so ths is just the last of the comments*
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“How do you know he’s not fifty with a big beer belly?” ok you know their best friends lol
“Like, real dreadlocks!” nope. no he doesnt thei fake. glued into his head. he's actually just got waves under there.
"... Jack's hotter." oh how right you are. lol
Date: 07/18/10 09:51 pm Title: Fallen Again
That was so sweet. :3 I like lovable, cute Tom...and poor Bill. He's so innocent and clueless. But God knows he'll never change. xD
Date: 07/18/10 07:17 pm Title: Fallen Again
Awww poor bill but at the same time yay for bill! XD I just pictured bill in the studio...sexy >.
Date: 07/18/10 07:14 pm Title: The Phone Call
WARNING- i do comments instead of 'reviews'. They tend to be rather long so if they annoy you tell me and ill stop.....
Pirates of the Caribbean? Nice.
Bills right. I grew up with jamaicans and dreads are SOOO sexy.
I wonder why people fail to realize that dreads are JUST HAIR. people CLEAN THEM. shesh
'The dress was pretty it was just very....Orange' lmao that means ugly. lol why do girls ask guys if they look fat? havnt they ever seen the snickers commercial?
Tom can think bill weird all he wants he still has hung up yet. He has to find something intresting about him.
"what do you look like?" they sound like there in sped dating. lol
"Ka-ching! " how bad is it that my brain actually made that noise when i read that? lol
Date: 07/18/10 06:01 pm Title: Fallen Again
naw, i feal bad 'bout bill... :( i suck at making comments but i just wanted you to know i was reading :)
Author's Response: aww, thank you for reading and reviewing! It really means a lot :D
Date: 07/18/10 04:26 pm Title: Fallen Again
sooooo freaking adorable!!!!
Author's Response: Thank yooou! :D
Date: 07/18/10 03:14 pm Title: Fallen Again
Awhhh, yeah! you updated this :D Tom is soo nice! poor Billy though! Stupid Tom not settling down.
Date: 07/18/10 02:22 pm Title: Fallen Again
Yayyyyy update!!
That was SO sweet of Tomi :')
I love love LOVE how the story is progressing! Can't wait for the next update!! x