Date: 10/13/08 08:12 am Title: The Phone Call
Looking good, loved the idea of meeting over the phone :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 10/13/08 07:36 am Title: The Phone Call
Jack's definitely hotter.
And this story has suuuuch a good start! I cannot wait for more. Good job!
Author's Response: Yes, he is ^^ Thank you!! :D
Date: 10/13/08 05:51 am Title: The Phone Call
I wish some random hot guy would call my phone. It'd be amazin!
Loved it! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, don't we all. Thanks!
Date: 10/13/08 05:13 am Title: The Phone Call
Oh my goodness, this is great! xP Aww, I need more. ^^ Nothing more to add ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad you like it!
Date: 10/13/08 05:10 am Title: The Phone Call
:):):) I love this~
more soon?
Author's Response: Yup ^^ Chapter two is finished, I just wanna see the response first :P
Date: 10/13/08 05:06 am Title: The Phone Call
Haha, kind of funny =p you have a good flow in your dialogues, which makes it easy to follow and read. Keep up the great work =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate that :))
Date: 10/13/08 05:04 am Title: The Phone Call
Jack is definitely hotter
Author's Response: Definitely.
Date: 10/13/08 05:04 am Title: The Phone Call
Aww! LOL
that was so sweet!
Author's Response: xD Thanks!