Date: 01/20/11 01:11 pm Title: Caught
I really need an update on this!!!! Love it!
Date: 12/29/10 02:06 pm Title: Caught
o.O
continuala que me mueroooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!1
esta demasiado buenaaaaaaaaaaaa
Date: 12/29/10 01:20 pm Title: Fallen Again
lo amooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
lo amo lo amo lo amo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Date: 12/21/10 02:31 pm Title: Caught
I just found this story (and refound Tokio hotel) and it's amazing.. I hope you'll update soon :)
Date: 12/20/10 11:47 pm Title: Caught
hALlOoO !!^^
oh god! .... your fic is great .... ! *-* ♥
I love ... your writing ... ^ ^
I hope ..... to upload new chapter ... soon! ^ ^
well ... I say goodbye
bye! ^ ^
Pd. my English is not very good ... u.u! ... I speak Spanish ... jajaj ... X.X! ... sorry ... for spelling errors...
XiAIoOOo ! =3 ♥
Date: 12/18/10 01:09 am Title: Caught
Aww this is sweet :) I'm really looking forward to following this story!
Date: 10/28/10 08:37 am Title: Caught
OMGGGGGG! Is this finished cos if it's not you need to finish it ....it's amazing
Date: 10/27/10 02:48 pm Title: The Phone Call
ohhh, I can't wait to read the next chapteeeeer, I hope you upload soon!
Date: 10/16/10 12:57 pm Title: The Phone Call
awwww, this story is absolutly amazing, last chapter was sooo hot, Tom's dad is great xDDD
I was reading the story in spanish (i'm from spain) but I couldn't wait and I came here to read... I think I'm learning a lot of english, even when the most are words about sex and things like that xDD that's culture, too!!!!
thanks so much for this story, is one of my favourites! keep writing!
take care ;)
Date: 10/05/10 01:08 pm Title: Caught
As soon as I clicked on the 'submit' button for my latest review I wondered...
You really can't blame me for writhing patience like patient! English is not my mother language, I'm allowed to screw up sometimes (or half of the time). Ugh ><
Back to the story. I'm not in such a good mood any more, for obvious reasons, like; this is the last chapter that's online. And just like Bill, I'm impatient (notice how that's with a -t and not with -ce, no wonder I messed up), but I wouldn't stalk you or something to post a next chapter.
(Though, you have only yourself and your writhing talent to blame if that would happen to you.)
Bill's desire to love and beloved is so realistic, it almost made me cry. You just writhe this way that makes it easy to empathize (I hoped I chose the right word there).
Can't wait for more,
xx
Date: 10/05/10 12:49 pm Title: Fallen Again
Aahh, I feel sorry for Bill.
I guess he finally found Tom's flaw, everybody has one, nobody's perfect. But time can change things, right? Tom will fall so deeply in love for Bill that, when the time is there, the only thing Bill needs to do is pout! O=)
I hope Bill has some patient...
Date: 10/05/10 11:48 am Title: "It's impressive"
I feel kinda stupid about this:
"the songs, just a tiny bit of altering here and there needed to be done"
I really am going to feel embarrassed if you changed the leer into mehr intentional, would be totally me to ramble about a fault that isn't wrong xD
Anyway. How many songs do they need to hear before he gets this record deal?
And I believe Andreas is getting jealous... (or maybe he is just being a real good friend, if that's the case, I want him to be my best friend too! O=)
Author's Response: HAHAHA no it wasn't intentional, I know what the lyrics are and now I'm just embarrassed that I got them wrong xD What the hell. IN MY DEFENSE I just quickly googled it and didn't read through them. Memo to self: don't trust random lyric sites. Thanks for the heads up xD
Date: 10/05/10 11:32 am Title: "No friggin' way!"
Super Tom, your rescuer in every emergency! (also delivers pizza)
xD I'm sorry, that was kinda lame, can't help myself.
First thing to say:
Das Fenster öffnet sich nicht mehr, hier drin ist's vol von dir und leer.
(Full off you and nothing, or emptiness which should be the original translation.) You wrote 'mehr' ;)
Okay, back to the chapter. I was kinda scared Tom would feel offended. 'Cause Bill said something like "I wouldn't have called if..." and I thought he would take it like: "I wouldn't have called you back after our date but I really need a ride", which wasn't what Bill meant at all, but it kind off sounded like that. Luckily, Tom knows better (all ready ;)).
xx
Date: 10/05/10 11:04 am Title: Swoon
Even I am swooning! I am going to complement you on the fact you made my insides go warm-and-funny-feeling because of this sweet (and also funny ;)) chapter.
Andreas might talk to much, though. Maybe he should stop screaming in Bill's mind. But then again, it's probably better that they didn't kissed yet. Make it more exiting, (some how).
I'm not sure what you think about critic - I don't want to sound like I know it better than you do, because I'm sure I'm not. But most authors like to write best and have their stories perfect, so with that in my mind I'm telling you I almost felt over the sentences in which Bill tries to close the door. I know what you mean by it - or I believe I do - but just maybe you want to place some commas or something to make it read nicer?
Anyway, awesome chapter, I'm on to the next one =D
Date: 10/05/10 10:41 am Title: The Phone Call
Go Jack-team! Andreas has no style. Okay, maybe some... I mean, it's not like Orlando is ugly, but, seriously? He just disappears next to Johnny on the screen.
But that's totally off topic =P I was going to review on your story. Which I LOVE. All ready.
I fallow #185 and today is the day I though, what more stories does this brokenmirror-person has?
I didn't need to seek long, the first one under #185 was this one and all ready my unconsciousness told me: read.
So I - like the good girl I am - read. And love. I like your humor, and the... - shit, language barrier - lightness?
It's just, simple, and funny, and kind of playful or something. Even though its the idea is simple you still managed to find a original way to hook them up, and keep your story interesting. If you don't mind me (seriously, I'm sorry if I creep you out, if only a little, by this kind of weird review) I'm going to read the next chapter =)
Date: 10/01/10 11:47 pm Title: Caught
that last line killed me!! (in a good way!) i hope they will secks soon that chapi was uber hott!
Date: 09/25/10 10:14 pm Title: Caught
hola!!!! ^^
posiblemente te preguntes...español otra vez??? jeje es mi lengua como ya te lo dije y aclarandote algunas cosas, no soy de españa, soy de Bolivia, esta ubicado al sur de america, soy latinoamericana XD... pero ese no es el punto... ya sabes q tu historia me encanta!!!! ^^ me pone a suspirar como toda una quinceañera (para q entiendas mejor aqui las chicas celebramos nuestros 15 años no los 16 y se puede decir quienceañera a una chica que siempre tiene esa expresion de estar enamorada XD), en fin! me encanta como escribes, como es la trama de la historia, como te captura... es simplemente genial!!!!...^^ me alegra el dia el leer tu fic... continua pronto si????!!! no nos dejes abandonadas XD
Date: 09/24/10 02:48 pm Title: Caught
Woot :D
So glad you updated! Favorite chapter so far :D
Date: 09/23/10 08:54 pm Title: Caught
wsahahaha omg, when tom did sånn der, when they made out, and bill put his hands bak seg for støtte så fikk jeg et sånt mentalt bilde av han lente seg rett på en varm plate XD i was almost skuffa fordi du ikke skreiv det! but then.... kom faren da! jeg skvatt nesten når noen bare bynte å snakke om pizzaen! oh my god do you have any idea how much it hurts to laugh with halsbetennelse? x'D
litt bra at bill ikke fikk den opp igjen. og tom bare åhh :( MEN VI KAN JO FORTSATT SPISE PIZZA :D boyish tom x'D
herreegud men skjønner bill da! SE FOR DEG O___O jeg syns tilogmed det er flaut å klemme venner foran foreldrene mine jeg ._. gæægfffh x'D
waah great chapter XD
Date: 09/22/10 11:29 pm Title: Caught
This is a really cute story! I'm enjoying it a lot. :)