Date: 11/18/08 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1
This was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read, not only here but anywhere. My eyes are all watery which is kind of embarrissing since I'm at work and people are now looking at me funny :) It's not my favorite pairing but since I just finished a pwp with the same pairing myself I can't really complain :)
Author's Response: Not that I love making you teary and embarrassed at work, but I do love the words you've given me here. Thank you so, so much. This really means a lot to me. I will definitely look for the pwp, as I love this pairing, and I really did enjoy "A Little Piece of Heaven". Thanks again! :)
Date: 11/16/08 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1
This gave me shivers. LOVED it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that, thank you! :)
Date: 11/03/08 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so intimate and beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm happy you liked it :)
Date: 10/25/08 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
oooh... i love it. i swear, i think this is my favorite of all of your stories. so beautifully written. Can i be your first official fangirl? lol
Author's Response: Girl, you seriously just made me blush *and* go tell my husband about your review! I told him you always leave such flattering reviews, and how I appreciate them so much. Then I realized I really should be telling you that. :D
Thank you so very much for this. It was a very difficult thing to write, but I love how it came out. I'm glad you do, too. :)
Date: 10/14/08 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Although it makes me cry
And although it makes me weep
I can’t help but love your writing
It’s so emotional, so deep
You make my body tremble
You touch me in a way
And my heart can’t help but listen
To what your fingers say
I hate it, that you make me like
This pairing that you’re writing
To me it’s wrong, but when it’s you
I have to stop the fighting
I can’t escape your Hagen
Although I hate his hair
He’s just so sweet when from your fingers
This big and cuddly bear
So darling keep on writing
This poetry of yours
And I will read the pairing
Crying though, of course
Author's Response: Lucy, my darling girl! Honey, you make me smile like no other, I swear. I can't believe you wrote me a poem as a review! I've never seen anyone do that before. Ever. I read it at least twelve times already this morning! lol
Girl, I know you don't like this pairing, so knowing that you come to read it anyway, just because it's me writing it, makes me so very happy. Thank you so much for your beautiful words.
I know you're having a tough time right now, so take care of yourself. Get some sleep. lol And no more crying, okay? *hands you a tissue*
Date: 10/14/08 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I usually don't reply to a review in a review, but your mention of Billshido made me -flail- so I had to.
First, HAHAHAHAHAHA to the ' I wouldn't want to do something that couldn't live up to the example you all have set.' Ohh... it actually hurt, I laughed so hard. Muse and Maj definitely would have the market cornered on Billshido if there was a market for it. Unfortunately, there is a severe shortage in good Billshido and if I'd known a writer of your talent was willing to write it, I would have poked and prodded you into doing so a long, long time ago.
...-poke-
...-prod-
I agree with the building of a connection as opposed to the twinly bond that already exists between the twins (though at times that's just as much fun to play with) and I think you could do Billshido as much justice as you do Biorg. :) In the meantime though, I'll happily read and enjoy whatever you decide to provide us with.
Much love,
Ella
Author's Response: Ella,
Thank you. I can think of a thousand things that I would say, but I'm afraid I would ramble and blubber and flail and not make a damn bit of sense. So just a few things...
Oh my yes, there is a definite lack of Good Billshido. While I see more and more being written, there's not much of it I want to read. I truly believe that you, Little Muse and Majestrix have set the bar so high, when I read Billshido by someone else, it pales in comparison. Not that it's not out there, it's just hard to find. That said, intimidated as I am, I'm sure I will do it.
The poking and prodding helped get my head in that direction though, because I've only ever been specifically asked to write twincest and more Biorg. I truly admire your writing so much that your belief in my ability to write Billshido well helps give me the confidence to try it. So I thank you again.
Yet again, you have succeeded in making my day. :)
*hugs*
Mel
Date: 10/13/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holly shit girl, that was so sweet and poetic!!! The interaction between Bill and Georg was just beautiful, you said it all without saying too much and that's freaking hard...kudos to you babe!! And god I loved this part "Your beauty is in the way you love me, holding me so close that all I can breathe is you. All I ever want to breathe is you." It was so romantic and beautifully written hon, it made me go "awwwww" IRL LOL If this is the beginning of the fic I just cannot wait to read the rest of it!!! Loved it!! *hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you so much, girl! I'm so glad you liked it. No, it's not the beginning of a longer fic, it's just a peek into a beautiful moment in their lives.
I like that line a lot, too. You know my husband; I understand the sentiment completely.
Thanks for reading this, honey! I so appreciate it *Hugs!*
Date: 10/13/08 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was crazy sweet.
I really loved it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you so much for letting me know, I do appreciate it. :)
Date: 10/13/08 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG! That was absolutely gorgeous!!!! *sigh*
Author's Response: Ah, I knew you would like it, girl! I hoped you would see it at work today and it would make you happy :)
Date: 10/13/08 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW!! Beautifully written. This is so sweet. :3
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 10/13/08 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful in its simplicity. You did the first person and POV change justice, and I loved the characterizations despite the fact that I'm not the biggest fan of Georg. You do write some of the best Georg/Bill I've ever read, and I think if you wrote some more (I'm not being subtle at all, am I?) you really could get me hooked on the pairing ;)
Great work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. This is the first time I've written in first person, so I hoped it worked well and was consistent. I also wanted to make their POV's obviously different in language and in tone, but still keep the romantic feel I hoped to create. It's great to know when something works, especially when it is something as experimental as this was for me. Thank you so much for the feedback!
I do plan to write more Bill/Georg. I adore them together, but my motivation with them is more than that.
It's not something that was addressed in this because it didn't need to be (that's not what it was about), but I like the idea of having to give the characters an opportunity to build a connection and to work to solidify that connection. That's not something you really have to worry about with the twins.
The only other pairing I love more than Bill/Georg is Bill/Bushido. Maybe someday I will give that a shot, but you, Little Muse and Majestrix really have the market covered there. Frankly, I wouldn't want to do something that couldn't live up to the example you all have set.
I'm sorry, I just rambled all over my reply and probably told you a whole lot that doesn't mean much. When it comes down to it, thank you. You made my day.
Date: 10/13/08 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1
but you got a sweetness and depth of feeling that reads wonderfully. those two are so cute...
Author's Response: Oh, good, that's what I was hoping came across. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reviewing :)
Date: 10/13/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
That was so incredibly sweet!
I was delighted to see a new Biorg-story and then I was even more delighted to see that it was written by you.
I liked it so much! Amazingly poetic, sensual and erotic. I loved the middle part very much and I really liked the change in the pov.
That was wonderfully conducted; thank you so much for putting a smile on my face on this grey autumn morning!!!
Author's Response: You're so welcome! I'm glad you liked it so much. You give such great reviews, letting me know what you liked, what worked, and I do appreciate that. And you know, you really made me smile, and I thank you.
Date: 10/13/08 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1
awwwwww, that was so sweet!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you! :)