Date: 09/05/13 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
You. Are. Genius.
Author's Response: And you are much too kind! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Date: 10/03/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pure magic and beauty....thatīs what this story is.
Interesting thing, what sort of mind processes your stories always evoke in me....I always tend to think first how badly a story like that could have been screwed up if handled with less care and brilliance....meaning you seem to challenge yourself when picking up a topic, a writing style, an angle of expressing emotional charge and you manage to balance it all with utter brilliance. I often think that equilibrium is the key to a successful story. Balancing it all so that result seems to be seamless.
God, I wish more fan fiction was written like this; in subtle, creative, almost dreamy-like, gentle way capturing the essence of two people getting together. It was so hot but also very delicate. You painted the scenes by using velvet brush of your words. The whole piece was amazing but the middle part just took my breath away (literally).
I totally understand that the middle section might have been tough to write. The result was gorgeous. *sigh*
Author's Response: Yet again, you've left me a review that I've had to come back and look at over and over. Don't get me wrong; that's not a bad thing, at all! I'm incredibly pleased and honored that you found so much beauty in this story. I've written over sixty stories for two fandoms and this is my favorite, so it means a great deal to me when someone reads it and enjoys it. I wish I had more amazing words than 'thank you' to express my gratitude, but really, I don't. So thank you. I appreciate it. :D
Date: 03/17/10 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very emotional and touching. So pretty!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/17/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok I luv this. I am a Biorg fan and think this is to wonderful. Soft and sweet/ very romantic and not over sexed... wonderful job
Author's Response: Aw wonderful! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you! :D
Date: 03/14/10 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg girl, I love this every time I read it - it makes my stomach do knots and I get that breathless feeling when Georg is touching him so softly. I can't tell you how beautiful this is to me!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Just thank you. Because this little fic means an awful lot to me, and for it to touch you that much just pleases me no end. <3
Date: 01/10/10 12:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Magnificently written, so inspirring! I just feel ashamed on how I manage to write after I read this...It still amazes me how you could describe such a furtive act in the sweetest of words!
Congratulations, Amazing one-shot
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :D
Date: 01/06/10 06:39 am Title: Chapter 1
...My hand hovers, aching to touch you again, aching to slide down your skin, so pale, so soft... - this line makes me so...frustrated! (in a good way) coz its like, something i can see... but cant really touch
...I know they say I’m beautiful. All I can do is look at you and think how blind they all must be, because you are the most beautiful man I’ve ever seen... - aaaaawwwwww *melting*
i love the way u first write in georg's pov then switched it to bill's in the end, really brings in the feel - short and oh so sweet ^___^
Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing this story and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much. :D
Date: 11/04/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
*-* That was so beautiful, I'm astounded... And jealous ;__;
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm really glad you liked it that much. :D
Date: 08/31/09 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1
That was probably the best spent minutes of my day, reading this. Wow, I'm stunned. So beautiful, so damn beautiful that I wanna melt :'D If you don't continue, I'm going to haunt you for the rest of your life, this was amazing
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! I'm thrilled you liked it so much! It's just a oneshot, though, so it won't be continued, I'm sorry. But thank you again, so much. :D
Date: 08/30/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
love it so much! this is so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/23/09 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that's way to beautiful. I'm kind of jealous of them; I wish someone loved me that way.
Author's Response: I do hope you find it some day! Thank you so much. :D
Date: 08/16/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
A terrible cliche what I'm going to say but fuck if I ever meant it more than now: it's so beautiful it makes you wanna cry.
Author's Response: I'm not even sure you know how much it means to hear that. Thank you so, so much. <3
Date: 08/10/09 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
*de-lurks*
Late review is late... but omg.
*_*
No words, just pure
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I appreciate that you de-lurked to tell me; it really means a lot. :)
Date: 12/21/08 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I truly liked it. I'm not so used to this pairing, Bill/Georg; maybe I'm far too addicted to twincest (mea culpa!), but sometimes I'm really in the mood for a Bill/Georg, lol. Bill being a very girlish boy and Georg being... well, almost his opposite (despite his long hair, I could not tell you how much I love his hair!), the pairing is pretty amazing and, why not?, funny to picture into your mind. ^-^
I liked the point of view changing, too. Honestly, in the beginning, I couldn't help wondering whose it was - just wanted to guess it before finding out by reading. I failed, xD. It was the summary that betrayed me, because when I read it I said, 'it's Bill talking'. And it was! The multifarious POVs were amazing to read, such an original idea, :). One thing... and this is not your fault, it's mine. Since I wasn't able to figure out yet who was actually talking, I mainly wondered who the speaker could be while reading, but this stubborn attitude of mine just managed to distract me; though, during a second (proper) reading, I let myself go and enjoy the story.
'Cause I did enjoy it! It was such a peaceful one-shot to read, lol. Their relationship felt very sweet and delicate, likely because of a lack of action, but it's a PWP/Lemon, so it's supposed to be like this, lol. But let me say I liked it very much, and to me it was something more (even a little bit) than a PWP/Lemon: I smiled all the time, and considering the fact that I've been shaking (yes, I'm still shaking :D), I can really say this story is going straight to my list of favorites, lol. I know I'm an incurable romantic, lol.
What else could I add? It was so well written, so nice, so lovely, and so all the romantic adjectives of this world! Thanks for writing it ;)
Kiss kiss.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, really! I'm very glad you went back to read it over again. I think it does sink in a little more the second time.
I'm glad you enjoyed the POV change. That was a little harder to write than I expected, but mostly because I wanted to be sure that the feelings came through for both, but the tone and voice were different. But my favorite part to write, and the hardest to write, was the middle.
This is the only story I've written that I go back to read once in a while, because I really can't believe that I wrote it. I love it, and I'm so very happy that you do, too. Thank you again! <3
Date: 12/16/08 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1
*happy sigh* :)
This is gorgeous. I love the way it's structured, with the POVs separated by a scene of fragmented dialogue and physical sensations (loved how you wrote that bit by the way). It works as a shorter story - it has a moment in time quality that I like, especially with the use of present tense.
The love felt by each of them is so real and so beautiful, and I love the way it shifts from Georg doing the watching in the beginning to Bill at the end. It feels so intimate.
Finally, the title - "Wer bin ich" means "Who am I", is that correct? (My German is atrocious). That is such a fitting title for the emotions this story depicts.
Author's Response: Oh my, but I love your review. Thank you so much for this; this story really means a lot to me and took me a long time to write. I'm so happy that it felt to you everything that I wanted to convey.
Yes, I believe "Wer bin ich" means "Who am I", although my German is also atrocious. :) I love that you feel this story really fits because this was inspired by the feeling and some of the lyrics of "Wer bin ich" by LaFee. I listened to it a lot when I was writing it.
Thank you again, so much, for this. Your words mean a lot to me.
Date: 12/03/08 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
You're, er, following Simone Says? I thought you didn't like the pairing or my writing or something, since you never reviewed it. XD Oh yeah, I'll bet you will, that's what's worrying me. I really wish I could read This Hour's Duty and A Broken Hallelujah, but alas, I can't. Not yet. But who knows what the future holds? *hugs*
Author's Response: I'm moving this to email, bb :)
Date: 12/03/08 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha, yeah, a new one. ^.^ Weirder than Paper Tiger, I'll tell you that. XD I've been trying to work on Simone Says, but I'm really fucking blocked and it's driving me insane. I will update it though, at some point.
I'm sure I'll like it well enough, and if the pairing itself will disconcert me, I'll just focus on your prose. :) Oh, this is... not the first time I've read other pairings, though I'm still staying away from Billshido; I know I could get addicted so easily. Ooh, a Tom/Bill chaptered one? I'm so excited now!! *flails* I can wait a month (I hope). :) *hugs*
Author's Response: Well I look forward to it. And more Simone Says, eventually. I love it, and the premise is very interesting :)rnrnSomeday maybe i'll get you to read Billshido ;D *hugs*
Date: 12/03/08 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoy talking to you too. :) I've missed your writing, and after some encouragement from various sources, I decided to try to read some Biorg and Torg. Speaking of Torg, I need to run along and read your Torg fic now! :) I've been trying to get some writing done as well, and I'm pleased to tell you that I'll be posting a pretty long oneshot soon, and one of my weirdest one to date, at that. XD
Author's Response: New Muse coming up? *happydance* That was one of the things I was going to ask you about, if you'd been working on anything new.
I hope you like the Torg, though I admit it's not my best. I'm curious what you will think. I'm so happy you're reading other pairings! Maybe they will do something for you eventually. I'm working on a chaptered Bill/Tom, which I'm excited about, though I don't see posting happening for maybe a month yet. We'll see. *hugs*
Date: 12/03/08 11:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I was feeling brave, so I decided to try some Biorg on. You wrote it wonderfully, I love your turn of phrase, but it seems that I'm so addicted to Tom/Bill that I can't really feel any other pairing (no offense). Even so, this was a very nice read. :)
Author's Response: Aw honey, it's okay! I'm so glad you went outside your comfort zone and read it anyways, it really means a lot to me. I'm glad you liked the prose even if you didn't get the feeling behind it.
I was thinking about you the other day, thinking I should write you again, but I've been so stupidly busy. Trying to get some writing done, and lots of beta. Nudge me sometime, if you like, I enjoy talking to you :) And thanks again!
Date: 11/26/08 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm new to the site and haven't read more than two or three stories in my time as a Tokio Hotel fan, mostly because I am always stuck in an office, in front of a computer, surrounded by people who think they have the right to know everything I do, everything I look at.
Your art (because I honestly don't think there is any other way to call what I just read), the first sentences I read, made me forget where I was and not care about the couple of tears that I felt and the stares they brought with them.
Thank you. It's beautiful.
Author's Response: I can't thank you enough for your wonderfully kind words. Things have been quite rough lately, and to come in to work (in an office full of nosy people, as well) and see a review like this really couldn't be a better way to start my day.
I'm so glad you found us here. There are so many amazing stories, written by insanely talented people. I don't know if you've found your way around yet, but if you need suggestions, feel free to have a look at my favorite authors. They are incredible.
Thank you again :)