Date: 02/21/12 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good! I never even saw that one coming. :)
Date: 03/25/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn!!!
it was TOO good seriously
the last line *o* Love it (:
Date: 02/18/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh i just saw ur answer to the previous review ^^
I get it :)
So another review 4 u Bcuz u deserve it & i just don't understand why you have so much little of them while ur work is amazing :'(
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) *is blushing*
Date: 02/18/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I haven't really understood with who Tom slept that night: the young girl, his twin or both in the same night? But i guess it's becuz of the language don't worry :p
Anyway, i liked ur story & i truely think that ur writing is really good (love the very short sentences in this one)
I loved the fact that Billa is Tomi's only one ;)
Oh & i like the lyrics too ^^
Thx 4 this one! Au revoir ;)
Date: 01/05/08 08:00 am Title: Chapter 1
But the night before, Tom was with that young girl, right? Not Bill? - So Bill was not last night, but he owns Tom, like whenever, am I getting this right?? ^^
Author's Response: The night before Tom was with the girl and then he went to Bill :)
Date: 12/30/07 05:52 am Title: Chapter 1
your work is emotionally gripping. I looked you up after seeing you in the schrei box, and I love your one shots. Very... deeply rooted. Heartfelt and heavy at the same time. Great job.
Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you! I'm also reading your story, but I'm reading it slowly so I can absorb it well...and when I'm finished I'm gonna write you a review...again thanks :)
Date: 11/16/07 04:05 am Title: Chapter 1
ooooh.. I love it, it's brilliant
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 11/15/07 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1
this was awesome :P i liked the whole idea, very creative
Author's Response: thank you :)
