Date: 12/08/08 11:33 pm Title: .L
Yeah, I know? I had to build up some tension, I hope I didn't overdo it.
Author's Response: Retard. :3
Date: 12/08/08 11:08 pm Title: .L
Well Tom was being quite the jack ass at the beginning. But then he's all up in Billa's cheesecake and licking his cum, so I think it's safe to say he doesn't totally hate his new 'bride'. :P *dirty thoughts* please update soon. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I know? I had to build up some tension, I hope I didn't overdo it.
Date: 11/29/08 11:01 pm Title: .A
whoot!! smexy smexy luves it
keep it up
*my comp also likes to eat my work*
Author's Response: YAH!! THANKS!
Date: 11/28/08 01:23 pm Title: .A
hahaha! I love this onee! is sooo uiniquee keep writting plzzz!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I love your name, sounds so dark and sexy... Grimada...ooh!
Date: 11/05/08 04:25 pm Title: .A
So I think it'S gonna be 16 or 17 chapter am I right?
Author's Response: :3 maybe?
Date: 11/05/08 04:18 pm Title: .A
So faster girl I luv the story it's crazy *screams*
Author's Response: :3 thanx
Date: 11/04/08 02:45 pm Title: .A
I love it! I do think the story is going a bit slow, though. And a bit cheese also. But it's just fine, I guess. I just hate it when people cry at me! I just don't know what to do! So I kinda understand Tom's reactions to Bill. But still, when I was reading that Tom wanted to really commit to one girl only...My! That was hillarious! Could you imagine that? What 23-year-old man would do that? It's sweet, to want to find 'the one' and wait until that happens, but I don't think that's realistic. Just romantic, I guess, hehe. I sure will continue reading this story!. Poor, poor Billa, being raped! No child deserves that kind of treat! Wonder why Tom hates his father so much! (*rolls her eyes*)
Author's Response: :3 you unrealistic, I saw original. I know plenty of guys who were players when they werelike 14-21, got played back and just wanted to settle down. It'll unfurl later.
Date: 11/04/08 03:38 am Title: .A
my gawd!!!! i loved it!! please!!!! i can't wait for the next chaps!!!! i really want to know what happens next... hehehe....
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks~~~ :3 i will have more, soon!
Date: 11/03/08 10:56 pm Title: .M
There's only two chapters, but I'm already pretty much addicted. 0_0
I will send you many many virtu-cookies if you update!!!! Pwease?!
Author's Response: Hmm...cookies you say?!
Date: 11/03/08 08:09 pm Title: .A
It was hilarious and heartbreaking at the same time. I loved it. x3
Can't wait until the next chapter
Author's Response: that was my goal :3
Date: 11/03/08 05:04 pm Title: .A
O.o this is very very very good!!!! i can't wait til the next chapter comes out???
Author's Response: :3 awesomeness!
Date: 11/03/08 04:12 pm Title: .A
:o ARGH, I did sense drama coming... I think that Tom has a good purpose, or else he wouldn't have saved Bill from the pervs; however, he IS a liar, all those promises were fake ;/ so now Bill must think he's just a liar, and that isn't good if this goes where I hope it does :( Tom must straighten up and make up his mind about him! Bill is right, HE had been deceived, not Tom- uh I feel so bad to know he's mistreated and sad :( *pets Billi*
Post soon okay? :) me likes a lot! FAVS ^^
Author's Response: OMG, i think I am going to cry, did Silvia, the same Silvia from 'Meet Me' just reviewed my fic?!!! ::squees dramatically:: Thank you!!! I will super update!!! :3
Date: 11/03/08 03:51 pm Title: .M
:o OMG!
What a plot! I like the idea SO much, it's so original and cutie cute :D I like how you built your characters and the story so far. Tom was a bit of a jerk, not to care about asking about the signals Bill had sent him, but I guess I can't blame him either- he probably was both nervous and excited... OMG drama coming D:
Author's Response: :3 but drama is beautiful!!~! HAHAHA! thanks for the compliment, I am blushign like mad!! Kahahhaha
Date: 11/03/08 02:12 pm Title: .A
I love it!
Update soon! :*
Author's Response: i will!!! :3 thnx for the review!!
Date: 11/03/08 12:58 pm Title: .A
Wow, I bloody loved this chapter.
I'm gonna be brutally honest now...You are a fucking FANTASTIC writer, do you know that?
You've done such a good job, and I'm so keen for an update, like right now!
Was amazing dude!
Author's Response: Thanks Vee, coming from you, I feel special!!! Thanks!! :3
Date: 11/03/08 08:33 am Title: .A
Love this story!! It's amazing! I can't wait to read more of it!! ^,,^
Author's Response: :3 freshness!!!! :}
Date: 11/03/08 05:21 am Title: .A
wow.. amazing fic. waiting for the next chapter... so coooooooool
Author's Response: thnx babygurl, i love yur LJ icon!
Date: 11/03/08 01:47 am Title: .A
Loves it!
Author's Response: awesomeness!!! :3
Date: 11/03/08 01:32 am Title: .A
NEW READER!
nice one, Bill!
Tom NEEDS to get that stick outta his ass.
I like this fic!
It's intriguing..
:))
more soon, i hope!
Author's Response: :hugs new reader: Welcome, habibi!!! :3 thnx!
Date: 11/03/08 12:54 am Title: .A
wow. this is great! i cant wait for the next chap. update soon :D
Author's Response: :3 you make me blush!!! thnx!!!