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Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/09 02:26 am Title: .E

Of course I liked this Who couldnt? Please add more, and soon

Author's Response: I will Synnie! Cute name, btw!

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/09 12:57 am Title: .M

hahaha the last sentence was hella funny XD

Author's Response: :D lol, i'm happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: luvme189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/09 11:49 pm Title: .E

yay! that was sweet. HA bushido's kind of a DICK! haha i love this. pwease update again soon!!!

Author's Response: kind of? He is a DICK!

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/14/09 10:34 pm Title: .E

I.... LOVE IT!! It was nice and long, too! Just the way I like it! (Lol you'd think I was talking about food, wouldn't you? XD)
But seriously, this was great! I thought your writing style was absolutely perfect from the get go, but with every chapter, your style seems to improve even more. HOW is that possible? *is puzzled* lol. But I really enjoyed all of the detail, all of the emotion... everything was perfectly written. It was truly a pleasure to read this!
I can't wait for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: :} you make me blush!! And plus if I didn't progress, what kind of writer would I be? :*}

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/09 05:41 pm Title: .E

d:D

Author's Response: <:{D

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/09 12:03 pm Title: .M

Great idea gives a greta story
So original
Poor Tomi

Author's Response: THanks!!! :} nice name.

Reviewer: Yuri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/09 10:27 am Title: .E

Aw... That was really good. I liked it. I really felt bad for both of them. I'm glad Bill's going to give tom another shot ish. Update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! I'd gleeful that your glad about Bill&Tom

Reviewer: twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/09 09:03 am Title: .M

Then Ohhh sooooo goooood :D now will you write faster :D

Author's Response: LMFAO. It's working!! ;}

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/09 04:09 am Title: .E

wow fucking wow. That was just amazing. I totally hearted this chapter. I thought my heart was gonna stop when Bill almost left Tom. I can't wait for the next chapter. This was fucking amazing. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks!!! <3

Reviewer: xSchreix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 10:13 pm Title: .E

wow i think this was the best story I read so far!!
amazing:)
hot xD

Author's Response: Oh wow! Really? Thanks!

Reviewer: stephkassie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 08:26 pm Title: .E

awww omg tht was sad with the whole tom crying hes usually not the vulnerable one

Author's Response: :} thanks, i hope you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Misa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 08:18 pm Title: .E

Aww so very cute.
I was almost in tears reading this.
Absoultely adorable.

Author's Response: Really? Aww thanks Misa!

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 07:30 pm Title: .E

eeeeep i love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you do!!!

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 07:17 pm Title: .E

I love sensitive, groveling, crybaby Tomi xD


Lol, definitely enjoyed it ;)

Author's Response: You're my 100th review Nia!!! Thanks!!

Reviewer: shylyte329 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 07:16 pm Title: .E

Oh gosh... I was going to have to punch Tom if he got rid of Bill.
DDD:

Author's Response: ;D but he didn't so don't punch him! Caress him instead! :}

Reviewer: Girle456 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 06:17 pm Title: .E

Gahhh! This is my FAV chapter so far8D. Tom's breakdown was sweet. And very very cute:)

Author's Response: Thanks! :}

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 04:51 pm Title: .E

*giggles*

Author's Response: *chuckles* thanks for the reviewing giggle. It made me feel all tickled.

Reviewer: nigerianxpride Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 04:42 pm Title: .E

awwwwww theyre so cute

Author's Response: Thanks!! :}

Reviewer: Chayenne7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 03:35 pm Title: .E

Oh, I enjoy this one so very much!!!!
At last things are turning out fine for them! Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: I'll try for the sake of time!

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 03:26 pm Title: .E

^^ I loved it! I mean yeah Tom sucked big time, but well, he asked forgiveness and showed himself to Bill, yet I don't feel they can go all lovely dovey right away cuz of everythin, n i guess there must b a reason too y Tom is so mean sometimes... he kind of remembers me the beast from the beauty n the beast XD

Author's Response: Trust me, Grim--Bill is weighing his options.

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