Date: 01/26/09 01:07 am Title: .M
rofl jajjajaja xD
Author's Response: XP ur a weird one!
Date: 01/26/09 12:29 am Title: .[--dash--]
total hotness. A pleasure to read.
Author's Response: :D
Date: 01/26/09 12:04 am Title: .[--dash--]
Once the offending frying pan was cooled, Bill turned around to see Tom--looking absolutely adorable with flour on his face, eggs on his apron and a small burn on his finger. The dread-head looked shyly away from Bill, picking at his burn as he stared at the floor. – awh! So cute!
“Well, I see you cooked hash browns pretty well!” Bill exclaimed as he spot the plate of brown hash that laid on the counter.
Tom clenched his jaw, irritated.
“Those are eggs.” Tom stated through clenched teeth – OMG what did he do to the eggs to make them look like hash browns???!!! *giggles*
“Too harsh on me? Bill, I deserved it. I’ve been a dick these past few days. And it’s barely a week. I’ve been such an asshole. And I’m sorry, Bill. I’ll say it for the rest of my days if I had to. It’s just…I’m complicated – I’m so glad that Tom apologized!
Tom! Don’t be like that, homie! – OMG Bill wants to get hit *giggles*
“I want to hear you, Billa.” Tom whispered against his neck as he bit down on his collarbone. Bill let his lip slip from under his teeth and a toe-curling moan unraveled from deep in his throat. – YUMMY!!! Uuuuhhhhggghhh
but he knew Bill wasn’t ready. ‘He’s still a virgin,’ Tom’s right conscience said in his mind before the left interfered. ‘Yes Tomi, a tight, hot, writhing, wet and willing virgin with supple skin, a tender ass , dimmed eyes and a pair of plush lips begging you fuck him into tomorrow." – I LOVE the inner monologue!
Beta moment - Tom palmed Bill’s curves before spreading his cheek and robbing Bill’s puckering entrance ….did you mean rubbing? Or did you really mean robbing?
Cuddles is such a cute nick name!
Tom grinned and flipped off too, but motioned his middle finger into the same way that made Bill lose his mind a few moments ago. – O.O scandalous! He he very cute.
I like this chapter a lot too. Not because it was better the rest but because they are finally getting along and Tom is being honest with himself and Bill.
Author's Response: I fixed the robbing to rubbing [:D I love your reviews! I seriously stay up and wait for them! Thanks so much, you rock so much! :}
Date: 01/25/09 11:02 pm Title: .[--dash--]
that was great!!! ergh update again soon for me!!!
Author's Response: Okay, just for you! :}
Date: 01/25/09 10:41 pm Title: .[--dash--]
o wow. thats all i gotta say
Author's Response: That's all you need to say, love :}
Date: 01/25/09 10:03 pm Title: .[--dash--]
I adore! I will read more! When it appears! I have no fears! It will be great! I cannot wait! I can't believe! Nor even conceive! That this is a rhyme! Should be a crime! So I say 'wow'! And will stop now! XP
Author's Response: AW! you make my heart flutter with your whimsical stutters? X} I tried!
Date: 01/25/09 09:15 pm Title: .[--dash--]
This was an awesome chapter. Wonderfully done. I laughed how Tom was all "you're not ready" time and time again.
As for next story? Well, I'm a sucker for college/high school fics, so you can guess where my vote is.
Author's Response: Synnie! The chick with the awesome name!! Thanks for appreciating the humor, I loved it too! And I'm kinda leaning towards a school fic too!
Date: 01/25/09 09:07 pm Title: .[--dash--]
first off!!!! do a non AU...I've been waiting for one from you for like FUR IMMER...second off....AWESOME NON-FULL PENETRATION CHAPTER xDDD I was like O.O ooo...me likie xDDD i loved Tom trying to cook and burning the place down, and knowing that Bill wasn't ready, but that he could still drive him wild...yea, that was hot, and you know it xDDD
Author's Response: Ah, parallelheart<3z! I love your reviews~! And I might do the non-Au, just for you X}
Date: 01/25/09 08:56 pm Title: .[--dash--]
Haha loe the ending to this chapter.
Its still cute!
The new banner is love by the way!
Author's Response: Thanks Misa! [Misa is also my fav charac in DeathNote btw! ] And yay someone noticed the banner!
Date: 01/25/09 08:30 pm Title: .[--dash--]
awww i freaking loved it!!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 01/25/09 07:43 pm Title: .[--dash--]
Love, love, loved this chapter! The entire "your not ready sequence", OMG! no words for that so I won't attempt to try and explain how amazing it was. Now I'm wondering if Bill will even want to go on his date now. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Hey Minibar! Haven't heard form you in a long minute! :} Thanks, I had to channel a little bit confidence and cockiness! for this one and yes, BIll is still going on the date!
Author's Response: Hey Minibar! Haven't heard form you in a long minute! :} Thanks, I had to channel a little bit confidence and cockiness! for this one and yes, BIll is still going on the date!
Date: 01/25/09 07:37 pm Title: .[--dash--]
Woah. Such restraint! There Tomi has Billa butt edging naked and begging to be fucker and he doesn't do it. I bet it drove him crazy. But it's sweet he was thinking of Billa first and the fact that if he did have sex with him the boy wouldn't b able to move, let alone walk. :P *drool* *dirty thoughts*
Author's Response: Thanks Tamara! I had to channel Tom in that one, 'What would Tom say to me if I begged him to fuck?' Voila! :}
Date: 01/25/09 07:17 pm Title: .[--dash--]
Holy shit, that was one of the hottest sex scenes I've read that didn't involve intercourse!
Hmm...next story.. I love high school/ underage erotica stories.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll keep it mind! But I love this chapter! It was just awesome for me!
Date: 01/18/09 02:44 am Title: .E
I love it, epecially when tom is edgy everytime another man is around bill.
Author's Response: I know! It makes good fiction
Date: 01/17/09 11:36 pm Title: .E
I'm loving this story. (:
Its a unique idea and I like that the characters aren't really perfect and are more realistic.
Please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks :}
Date: 01/17/09 06:22 pm Title: .E
Eeeep. I loved!
It's such an original idea! And you wrote it well!
Aww yey that they finally get together!
Lmao - Bill's dance of with Hayley Williams!
Author's Response: THanks!! I lubs Hayley~
Date: 01/17/09 06:31 am Title: .E
I loved it!!
Author's Response: LOL, thanks@!
Date: 01/17/09 06:31 am Title: .E
I loved it!!
Author's Response: Danke, Vee!
Date: 01/16/09 03:46 pm Title: .E
More please! I love this so much! Asap!
Author's Response: LOL, twice.
Date: 01/16/09 03:20 pm Title: .E
More please! I love this so much! Asap!
Author's Response: :} okay! Thanks!