Date: 03/14/09 12:37 am Title: .D
Always cute.
Loves it =]
It has such an original storyline and that is why it's awesome.
Can't wait for another update ^-^
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 03/14/09 12:08 am Title: .D
omfg..update soon PLPZLPZLPLZ thx=]
Author's Response: LOL, I will, i will!
Date: 03/13/09 11:39 pm Title: .D
SQUEE! Awesome chapter hun! Love,love,love. And yeah wow, photoshoots can be rough.
Author's Response: yeah photoshoots are a drain! That's why I cut them out! LOL
Date: 03/13/09 11:37 pm Title: .D
I loved it!!!! OMG Bill is going to let Tom sleep next to him! Progress!!!!!!!! Please update soon! I love this, and want them to make up...a little! Excellent job!
Author's Response: Yes, a little progress. Not much, but a little. :}
Date: 03/13/09 12:11 pm Title: .M
I. Love. It!!!
Author's Response: :} THANKS!
Date: 03/12/09 02:18 pm Title: .R
“I’m gonna be real with you, Tom. You’re fucking up.” … “I’m trying to understand why you would treat Billa that way. What did he do to you?” – ok # 1 funny #2 if you are going to have a doctor/counselor/psychologist talk you need to make the language more grown up! Ie… Ok Tom I’m going to be honest with you. You’re fucking this up! Billa is hiding in his room. Can you perhaps think WHY he would be hiding from you? – the rest of what the doctor/friend says seems to be fine…just keep an eye on it and make sure he sounds like a grown up.
“Well, I’ll leave the modeling to you and I can find his sister, just give me his name and I’ll search the databases at the hospitals nationwide.” – nice!
“Oh please, I’m over you.” – huh Tom has swung both ways in the past…hum?!
Yesterday, he promised to play Guitar Hero with Georg. And unlike a despicable blond dread-head we know, he’s not one to break his promises and rescheduled his date for today. - *snorts*
Bill grabbed his phone, filled with apologetic messages from Tom--all ignored before Bill pocketed the mobile. – awh Tom’s just bad with relationships isn’t he!
The door creaked slightly as Bill pulled it slowly, sticking his head out for any sign of his captor. - *giggles*
Bill stood outside the door, twittering nervously as he waited for half a minute before the door swung open to reveal a distraught Georg. – awh Georg is all worried.
“I love this place, I swear.”
…“I think you should just stay, Bill. I have plenty of room.”
…“I don’t think so…I’d love to, though!” – why not? He’s been hiding in his room for two days…the logic is a bit spotty here.
“Georg, please…please don’t.” Bill pleaded, his soft, warm breaths tickling Georg’s fine hair that cover his neck. – you’re making Bill into an abused wife *makes a face* arg I don’t like where this is going.
“I know…that’s why I want you with me. I’d treat you better than anyone. I’d never hurt you. I’d love you.”
Georg turn around and cradle’s Bill’s supple face in his palms, brushing his thumb carefully over Bill’s cherry lips. They felt like silk under his touch as the two stared intimately at each other. Identical chills running down both of their spines.
A sudden grumble ruined the moment. – oh no their caught?!
Wait Gustav doesn’t care that Georg is trying to hook up with Bill? Aren’t they together??
This is not such good logic…and an awful example of a relationship. When is it ok to scare the shit out of someone and threaten them. Then apologize and try and buy back their love? *moans and wines* No no no!!! No good! *pouts*
“Wilhelm!” - *laughs*
Ah mistaken identities – nods!
“I’m sorry, Mr. Kaulitz you just look like my best friend…exactly like my best friend.” – I think he’d be more shocked at the doppelganger effect! I would be.
The den was littered with over fifty little teddy bears, each holding a bouquet of a dozen red and white roses glistening in the moonlight. - *laughs and shakes head*
Tom was in the kitchen. The once proud man was biting his quivering lip and twirling an orange rose nervously in-between his fingers. – awh!
“Bill…I’m so sorry. I never meant to hurt you,” Tom began in a voice completely contrast to his own. He sounded vulnerable, apathetic and scared. “but I always end up doing just that. I can’t describe to you how much I feel for you. How much I want to be with you. I can go on my knees and beg for your forgiveness for the rest of my days. But I expect you to forgive me…maybe that’s me just being stupid again. But please, Bill…give me a chance. Let’s start all over.” – damn Tom’s cocky!
Tom fluttered his eyes close at the touch, hoping that Bill would kiss him.
He didn’t expect Bill to swing a mean left hook and cause him to fly right off the stool. – ha ha not expecting that one! Nice!
“I can’t believe this shit. I have two guys--Bushido and Georg--who’d give me the world and for some odd reason I can’t leave you. And it’s more than our contract.” Bill hissed scornfully before staring daggers at the dread-head on the floor before walking over him and towards his room. – nice! Thank you!!! I was starting to get really worried about this story! Thank you for not disappointing me.
Ok new banner…*makes a face* I’m not sure I did like the old one. This one is so dark. Part of why I liked the old one was that it was cheerful!
You did good with this chapter. Thanks for hitting Tom for me!
Author's Response: :sigh: Thank God, I thought you abandon me! I kinda didn't like this chap so much. And a few people are saying that the banner is little dark, but the is kinda going to get a little darker...hmm, I might make an alternate for next chap. Thanks for your insight-it's ALWAYS the best. Ian will be explained a little later and logic, my good friend, means ' ' this much in fiction. XD. But yes the relationship sucks now, but things will get better. If Rhianna can take back Chris [retarded btw] anything can happen, right? Next chap is in the works and should be here like tomorrow! :}
Date: 03/09/09 12:56 am Title: .M
And you dont know if they're not squishy!
I bet you... 6 virtual dollars
gustavs ass is like a pillow!
Date: 03/09/09 12:55 am Title: .M
Darn.
Suspense.
I do bad in suspenseful situations.
i might end up crying
on the floor
in the middle of my room.
and it'll be all YOUR fault.
for this suspensefulness
not really.
i would blame you dearest
(:
you're computer's too purtty.
x3
i think.
Author's Response: LOL, you're a mess!
Date: 03/08/09 11:24 pm Title: .M
Because Georg is squishy.
And squishy men with long silky hair.
are Bill impersonators.
which is why
Pillsberry-dough Georg is a no-go
XD
So when did he go with Ian...
if he's busy Loving bill?
o.o
and denying homosexuality?
was it like one of those drunken college mistake
or sexxy fluffy sexxy love making in candle light on christmas eve?
or Hannakuh
or Kwanzaa
or Memorial day?
Author's Response: LOL, Georg is not squishy--none of the guys are squishy!rnI'll reveal what it was later in the fic...lol. I like how you named all the holidays, you are something, hun!
Date: 03/08/09 10:55 pm Title: .R
WAIT!
TOM WAS STRAIGHT!
BUT HE HAS AN EX.
with a guys name?
I'm going mental -.-
I dont like squishy Georg.
( i wanna poke his belly :P )
But update soon.
XOXXO
Author's Response: Nope, you're not hallucinating. Ian is Tom's first boyfriend. Apparently, he did something horrible, right?rnI like Georg? How come everyone hates him? LOL
Date: 03/08/09 07:59 pm Title: .R
hahaha my god I didn't expect Bill to do that! poor tomi! T^T im crying for him here u know? n i hate Bill for staying with geo D: meanieee!!! hahah hope u relax a little bit n write more! it helps a lot u know? also plz keep up with deuces are wild T^T i miss it! haha n yeah the banner is wow! n a bit scary too teehee... n hey ian is here too!!! yey!!! *happy dance*
Author's Response: How is it scary? LOL. Thanks Grims! You never emailed me back!
Date: 03/08/09 06:41 pm Title: .R
Ich liebe the neu banner. It's tight.
Author's Response: LOL, thanks!
Date: 03/08/09 04:55 am Title: .R
I'm assuming that blonde-haired guy was Andreas? Now the whole twin thing is coming out, if Tom is being mistaken for 'Wilhelm', can't wait to see what Ian digs up on Bill's twin.
I so love that Bill is finally really standing up to Tom.
Author's Response: Thanks, it'll all unveil next chapter!
Date: 03/08/09 04:04 am Title: .R
great chapter! update sooooon?
Author's Response: oooof course! :}
Date: 03/08/09 01:54 am Title: .L
wow that was HOT
Author's Response: Really? Thanks!!! :D
Date: 03/08/09 12:29 am Title: .R
Aw!
Poor Bill. D;
Tom is such a jerk. D;
But it's not his fault.
And i really dislike georg. D;
Will Bill find andi??? :D
Great Update!
More soon??? :D
*added to tracked*
Author's Response: LMFAO> the faces are adorable hon! Thanks for the track! And yes, a quick update.
Date: 03/07/09 09:49 pm Title: .R
you still got the mail order bride ad at the bottom of the page.. i like the old banner better.. it was easier to see and funnier
Author's Response: I know, I can't help the mail order ad! LOL. I know you like the old banner because it was funnier, but the story is kinda heading towards a little gloominess. Don't worry babes, when it gets better it'll be happy again! :}
Date: 03/07/09 08:56 pm Title: .R
1. I love the banner
2. Tracking you? Hell, I've got you favourited, hun!
3. You are more than welcome. This was an awesome chapter. It's not very often you hear about Bill packing a punch. I thought the caress beforehand was brilliant.
You know, I feel bad for Georg though. I can see him really getting hurt in this...
Author's Response: :does booty dance: WOOOT!!! :}
rnWhat people forget in fandom is that Bill is still man. :} I love reminding them!
rnDon't worry about Georg, he'll be okay...
rnI hope...eek!rnThanks for the answer review hun!
Date: 03/07/09 08:51 pm Title: .R
1
Author's Response: ....is the loneliest number? :}
Date: 03/07/09 08:47 pm Title: .R
i luve ur banner
Author's Response: YAY! Thanks! Remember my banner shop is open!