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Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/09 03:25 am Title: [E]

Damn! Bill is so screwing himself over......Tom should be semi-sympathetic to Bill's qualms and not just be thinking about himself.

 

Still can't wait for Jorg's beat-down! Hopefully done by both Tom and Bill.



Author's Response: Beat down is among us. Tom is selfish and Bill is quixotic. All we can do is not beat them to death for being so st00pid!

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 11:33 pm Title: [E]

-mouthangingopen- Uhh .. -crossingarmsandpouting- I want them to stay together .. -sniffling- PLEASE make them stay together :(

Author's Response: I'll try! But I'm not Jesus! I'm bad at saving people! LOL

Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 11:22 pm Title: [E]

love it! love it! love it! i do really like tom here!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! He loves you! He was talking about you last night!LOL

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 10:27 pm Title: [E]

Little flaming fruitcake. Loved it.

*sniffles* I think the ending was really sad. Brothers. Pfft. Lovers are better for those two XD

Author's Response: yeah, if only Bill can get that concept through his head!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 10:18 pm Title: [E]

plzplz update soon..i rly freaking luvz thiz=]

Author's Response: I know you do, that's why I do hon! For you! :}

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 10:14 pm Title: [E]

I will work my hardest to get you featured, because this is amazing. I hate that you ended it there...it makes me so sad!

Author's Response: Aww~ thank you my good lord, Thane of Glamis and Cawdor!

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:54 pm Title: [E]

*cries* stupid Bill..

Author's Response: :consoles you: Remember, Bill is beautiful and stoopid. It'll be okay, I promise.

Reviewer: stephkassie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:44 pm Title: [E]

nooooo man i love them together dude in this story awsome i love it nbjdfnbkdfnb kljd nbkjbdzkljvbsj

Author's Response: LOL, thanks! I'm happy you think it's awesome!

Reviewer: Misa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:34 pm Title: [E]

Cliff Hanger!
I still can believe this story ISN'T featured yet.
And I shall wait for the next chapter. *Folds hands, sits and stares at computer screen.*

Author's Response: :folds arms and pouts: You need to update Forbidden before I lose my mind and I'll update faster than you can say automaton!

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:30 pm Title: [E]

awww why cant bill look passs the brother thing

Author's Response: i.d.k, Bill is being such a dick! Well then again, he did spend practically his whole life looking for his twin and probably doesn't wanna ruin it. but still! Bill is just a hard-ass!

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:28 pm Title: [E]

I hope you get featured! What do we have to do?

Author's Response: rnwell, on the home page where the story of the week is featured, under the two sampler comments is a little caption that says 'Want to feature a fic?' and you click that and just write my name and the title of the story and why you like it I think. Thanks for caring!

Reviewer: aloJUMBIE Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:18 pm Title: [E]

*gasp*. Ohehhmgeezzz.

Author's Response: That's what I said! Bill is soooo st00pid!

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:17 pm Title: [E]

awwww. congrats on the graduation hun! and i will most definitely send in to ask for you to be featured (cuz i'm cool like that xD) and this chapter was WOOSH. like, just wow. poor tom. just wow.

Reviewer: MissNicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:14 pm Title: [E]

My reaction when I saw this updated was once again: *legasp-YES!* Yup...just like that.

But this ending...oh noes!!! Tom cant make Bill leave. No its just...not. No. I'll be forever sad unless this is fixed. *nods head*

Author's Response: lol, :legasp!: I can't have you forever sad! I just can't!!!

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:12 pm Title: [E]

Awww, making him leave? Damn...

Author's Response: I know, isn't that a little too extreme? But Bill doesn't want to work it out!

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 07:55 pm Title: R

^^ hey husby!

even if it wasn't long was filled with feelings D: n well, yeah... they didn't know still is sad that it happened to both... n ian ^^' poor guy, knowing this

Author's Response: hey hun, what'z up? and thanks for the review and thinking about ian,ur the only one lol. do u have an outline for the next chapt in SW?

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 09:27 pm Title: R

This was a totally realistic chapter. All the drama felt so raw to me, I thought it was fantastic!

Please update as soon as you can (but makesure you're ok first).

Author's Response: i will, thank you so much!

Reviewer: luvme189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 08:17 pm Title: R

oh no...what happened?
im sorry...

well the update was still great, you got through all that you needed to for the moment.
update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: thank you so much!

Reviewer: HarpAngel999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 06:31 pm Title: R

whatever happened, I hope you get through it well, I've been through a rough patch lately too, Just try not to let it effect your work. I hope to see another update soon. It was a very good chapter, it did cut off rather suddenly, but thats understandable. Good luck!

Author's Response: Thank you , very, very much. That means a lot to me!

Reviewer: juzziiewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 01:56 am Title: R

OMFG!! billa and tomi are brothes.. how sad :'( please upload soon. this story is a really good story! i really have enjoyed reading it so far. xx

Author's Response: Thank you, I will continue, love.

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