Date: 10/22/08 06:42 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - Secrets Are Overrated
I loved this chapter!!
aww that quote always make me shiver, it's by shakespeare isn't it?!
It's so sweet.
And when Bill "looked" at tom for the first time, absloutely perfect, and bill's "hi" out of the blue, so cuteee!!
It just surprise me how characters fall in love so fast with each other in these fanfiction, but that's the way it goes so..^^
I wanna more!!! Please post soon!!;]
Date: 10/22/08 05:18 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - Secrets Are Overrated
*smiles all goofy-like*
That was sweet =] It was a sucky way to find out, but sweet nonetheless. Moar ;)
Date: 10/22/08 04:33 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - Secrets Are Overrated
This chapter was really sweet. Like honey sweet. I really loved it. Tom finally finds out that Bill is blind. I'm really liking the pace of the story as well. It's not too slow or fast, and it just really fits the plot and everything. Your writing style is very strong as well, if that makes sense. It's very... solid. I don't know how else to describe, but you're really good. Keep up the good work please. ^_^
Date: 10/22/08 04:15 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - Secrets Are Overrated
Ok *points at you with a Bill-pout* I have a Bill pouting, and I will use it if needed, so bring me more :D
(cookies for u)
Date: 10/19/08 06:36 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
WOW, now, bring me more or I'll kill you. No, joking here, but I want more, this is pretty good for your first, it doesn't even sound really rushed to me.
Date: 10/18/08 04:21 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
noooooooo I was getting into the story and what I see, or I'd better say and what I don't see?!? the "next" button ..
Pleaaaaaaseee update!!!!!!1 I already love your story!
I'm begging you, update, sooooon!!!
thanks hunnie!!
Author's Response:
Hahah thnk you so much! I'll update soon I promise :)
AND THANK YOU TO ALL THE OTHER REVIEWS. :D :D :D!
Date: 10/18/08 03:49 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
Oh I liked this :) somehow I too feel pity for Bill, mostly because he is in such difficulty to do the easiest things, but I hope TOm will react well when he finds out :O post post post!
Date: 10/18/08 03:39 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - First Impressions
:O oh I'm sorry that Bill plays shy, but I can understand him... I hope Tom will stick around him for a while ;)
Date: 10/18/08 03:32 pm Title: Toms POV - The Bad Boy
:O ow, I thought Bill would've said something at least, poor him thoug :(
Date: 10/18/08 03:28 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
Sad :( but beautiful :) I'm gonna stick for a while with this fic ;)
Date: 10/18/08 01:31 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
That's true. Life is full of surprises, and I'm sure Bill was surprised when that note ended up on his desk. Poor guy. It was short and seemed a little skeletal to me. You might want to put a little more detail in the next chapter to flesh it out a bit. Otherwise it was a fine job. Keep going. ^_^
Date: 10/18/08 11:00 am Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
awww ^_^
i loved it =D i think i'm wondering just as much as bill is about how tom will react =P
please update soon and let me know? i totally LOVE this fic!!! x)
Date: 10/18/08 10:07 am Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
Coolness!!! I love this fic!:}
Date: 10/18/08 04:00 am Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
im addicteeeeeed. so i need moooooore of this story.
p-p-p-p-pleeeeeeeease *puppy eyes*
Date: 10/18/08 03:19 am Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
wow i really really love this! i cant wait for u to update more, this plot is really interesting :D
Date: 10/18/08 12:47 am Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
awww. hehe cant wait for Bill and Tom to talk more ^.^
Date: 10/18/08 12:37 am Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
Ha very cute.
Great story and update. :3
Date: 10/17/08 11:45 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
More I say! More!
Date: 10/17/08 10:39 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
please update soon!
I really wanna read more of this!
Date: 10/17/08 10:04 pm Title: Bill and Toms POVS - So Weird
It's going a little slow (like very little), but I *really* like this story. I like how you write, and I like that Bill isn't all uber-angsty, he just kinda knows whats up. And I like that Tom is persistent, kinda clingy -- Bill needs that ^^