Date: 10/12/08 02:00 pm Title: Toms POV - The Bad Boy
Wii!^^ I really like this ^^
Looking forward the long chapters ;D
Please update soon! :*
Date: 10/12/08 01:39 pm Title: Toms POV - The Bad Boy
Ah Short! But i love it!
And im dying for more!
O.O
Date: 10/12/08 05:46 am Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
sooooo good!
keep going!
Date: 10/12/08 12:50 am Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
My complaint? It's too short!
I like the concept behind the story. I really hope you decide to continue (may your muse be forever inspired) because I definitely want an update.
*sends good vibes*
And I like that you've already uncovered Bill's emotions as a blind person. It's so true, the fear of talking to inanimate objects, of getting teased by uncaring passersby, and having to learn braille.
GO XOASHESXO, GO
Author's Response:
thank you for the constructive critisim and for the nice comment.
Ill use it to good use :D
Date: 10/11/08 11:51 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
I loved the last line! Please keep going!
Date: 10/11/08 08:11 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
i love it
its very touching and
very well written
update soon please...
or ill kill you O.O
Date: 10/11/08 06:14 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
awwww poor bill!
more please!
Date: 10/11/08 05:43 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
I like it already, and I hope you'll update soon! :)
You're really good at writing! ^.^
Date: 10/11/08 05:06 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
i like it. =]
Date: 10/11/08 04:55 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
it's short, but i like it...this seems really interesting, and i love how bill is like totally over everyone around him :D
can't wait for more :)
Date: 10/11/08 04:43 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
Date: 10/11/08 04:42 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
Yay! Blind!Bill is one of my faves! =] I'm glad you decided to cross over into the dark side >xD *muahahah* Update...nao! ((Or soon...*cough*))
Author's Response:
LMFAO!
I just added a new chapter. Just waiting for it to get validated -__- ahhaha
thanks :)
Date: 10/11/08 04:39 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
Awww, that was sad :/ I pitty him, even though he would get mad at me if he knew I did :P
Date: 10/11/08 04:30 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
I love the last line. Its melted my heart.
Please continue. =)
Date: 10/11/08 04:10 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
Yay! A blind fic! I love blind fics! Keep writing please!
Date: 10/11/08 03:52 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
Aw! That is so cute! I hope you get the next chapter up soon! Poor thing! But that's so cute! I can't wait for more! ^^v
Date: 10/11/08 03:44 pm Title: Bills POV - The Blind Boy
Sounds Good(: