Date: 11/13/10 05:32 am Title: Epilogue: Goodnight
i don't really know what to say to that ending...
poor tom, he just can't win.
kind of bitter-sweet. makes me wish for a happy ending, but not everything can be that way. *pout*
Author's Response: Yeah, poor guy. He just can't catch a break.
Date: 08/25/10 06:26 am Title: Epilogue: Goodnight
wow great story... and you're right ... it is depressing ... okay so let me get this straight
Bill started off not knowing anything, then he found out there was a ghost in his house, he goes back in time to find said ghost and stops him from being killed thus letting the boy go to a party and the car he is in crashes ending not only his life but the life of Bill's ancestor therefore causing bill to cease existence then Bill goes back in time yet again to kill the person he started off the story wanting to save .... and just as I was thinking the story would have a happy ending
BAM!
death of the two most loved characters
... don't get me wrong I loved the story you're a very imaginative writer
GREAT JOB!
Author's Response: Yup, that's more-or-less the gist. :)rnrnI know, it's really sad, but that's just kind of how things worked out. My sister and I are glad you liked it. <3
Date: 09/12/09 03:51 pm Title: Epilogue: Goodnight
It'd been so long since the last time I read this story (with you not updating and all) that I had to read it again from the beginning. I'm glad you finally finished it.
One thing that I don't get is why Tom's last entry is dated July 3rd, 2197. Is he really writing about a dream that would come true 3 years later? The last line was it part of that same entry?
And something else. The dialogue between Bill and Tom in the previous chapter happenned while Tom was still alive? The moment just before he died or was Tom already dead? Cause Bill asked him how he died.
The last line had me crying. It shouldn't be that way. Since Bill had the time machine he could try and save Tom (again) and his great grandmother.
But I loved the story even if it made me cry.
You should write more great stories like this one.
Author's Response: It's been even longer since I read this story, I can assure you, but I'll do my best to help. Yes, Tom was writing about his prophetic dream. It was meant to bring back a little echo of Tom dreaming about his uncle in the house when he was a child. The dialogue in the previous chapter was between Bill and Tom, when Tom was already dead, I think. Tom was reenacting his death. I can't remember why Bill asked him how he died, because I'm really unfamiliar with the story by now, but I think it was just because he wanted to see what Tom would say. Maybe?rnrnI'm so glad you liked it. I'm actually working on a fic for a friend right now that's Tokio Hotel-themed, so when it's finished I might put it up here. We'll see. :)
Date: 09/11/09 05:15 pm Title: Moving In
ok so when he was talking in italics that was the dream/memory he had of being killed by bill and then bill went back in time and killed him again, but screwed up?
Author's Response: Do you mean the italics at the top? That was a flashback thing of Tom talkign to his mother about his nightmare. In his nightmare, there was someone in the house with dark ahir and dark eyes. At that point, it's talking about Falk since Bill's not even around yet, but later it changes to be about Bill.
Date: 09/11/09 05:13 pm Title: Moving In
oh ok, thank you for clearing that up for me
Author's Response: No problem. :)
Date: 09/11/09 02:49 pm Title: Epilogue: Goodnight
ahhh D= WHY did you end it like that? you could have had him kill tom, say his good byes, and go back to the past, happily ever after. meanie....
Author's Response: Holy crap I'm getting back to you late. Sorry. I guess we decided to end it like that because, well...I have no idea. Because we were angsty teenage girls? Also because I have a love of ghost stories and being really sad, and my sister has a love of time travel and screwy twists. So...I dunno. I hope you still liked it, though. :)
Date: 09/10/09 08:05 pm Title: Epilogue: Goodnight
Damn, it's already over???? That was really good although im still really confuzled
Author's Response: Yeah, 'tis over. You're still confused? What don't you get? I'll try and help in any way I can!
Date: 09/10/09 07:41 pm Title: Moving In
Ohhhhh ok
so when tom is talking in italics at the begining thats who he's talking to???
Author's Response: In the beginning, it's simply a memory of Tom's, telling his mother about the dream he had.
Date: 09/10/09 06:34 pm Title: Epilogue: Goodnight
omg, that last line killed me...|hangs head| ....OMG! I DIDN'T MEAN TO HAVE THOSE WORDS THERE! anyway....Great story, I'm really sad cus of the ending but...I guess it was for the best....ugh that last line....it hurts so much..I wonder if Tom knew why Bill Killed him? I doubt it....Poor Tom...gosh Poor Bill, having to suffer like that :( Great story! I'm glad I read it even though...|sniffs| there wasn't much of a happy ending. ^^v |gives cookies| :3 You deserve it!
Author's Response: We thank you! *noms cookies*
Date: 09/03/09 06:11 pm Title: The Last Solution
so....did Bill go back in time again...?
Author's Response: Yes. The first time, Bill came from his present and killed Falk. This saved tom, but ended up cutting off Bill's bloodline and wiping him from existence, so he didn't exist when he tried to go back to the future. Then he went back in time a second time and killed Falk AND Tom. Then he went back home to the future.rnrnI hope that helps. ;)
Date: 09/02/09 09:12 pm Title: The Last Solution
ok. so is bill the killer of tom? and is carla clara's aunt?
Author's Response: Yes, Bill killed Tom. And no, Carla is Clara's great-grandmother.
Date: 09/02/09 12:57 pm Title: The Last Solution
omg...im kinda confused though
Author's Response: Okay, so:rnrnFirst, Bill went back in time and killed Falk, Tom's uncle. This saved Tom, but ended up wiping Bill from existence because Tom ends up in an accident that stopped Bill's bloodline.rnrnThen, Bill went back in time again and killed Falk AND Tom. He then went back home.rnrnI hope that clears things up!
Date: 09/01/09 06:28 pm Title: Ding-dong...
Holy crap! I was holding my breath throughout the end dialogue... whew.
Author's Response: I know, right? Intense! The epilogue will be up today. ;)
Date: 07/25/09 12:48 am Title: Existence
Haha oh wow, I am soooooo confused. :D
So Tom still died!?!?!?!? D:
Haha please explain. > <
And please more soon!
I really do like this story. :3
Author's Response: Sorry this has taken so long. :)rnrnYeah, Tom still died. After Bill saved him, he got hit by a car driven by Bill's Nana. This wiped Bill from existence, too. Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 07/18/09 03:38 pm Title: Existence
oh my
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/17/09 11:34 pm Title: Existence
OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please go on!!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is soon, I promise.
Date: 07/17/09 02:25 pm Title: Existence
Amazingly good! I love it! =]
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/16/09 01:25 pm Title: The Time Machine
When is next update gonna be??? I CANT WAIT! ! !
Author's Response: Soon. :)
Date: 07/13/09 04:11 pm Title: The Time Machine
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I'm like, Hyperventilating!!
CLIFFHANGERRRRRRR
:D
-end of pointless review-
Author's Response: No review is ever pointless! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 07/13/09 06:11 am Title: The Time Machine
You're finally back! Oh, I've missed this story so much, it's one of my favorites. It's so unique and well-written and just perfect. I love this.
I don't really know what to say right now, I'm just so happy that you finally had a chance to update this. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, and from my sister, thank you. The next update will be soon!