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Reviewer: MarieCaroline Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/08 07:01 am Title: Chapter 9

This doesn't suck - it might just be a kind of a filler for the good stuff, as you put it yourself. But it holds some important information ...

Author's Response: Oh, this chapter is important, though it may seem filler-ish (I hate fillers). It served as a semi-eye-opener for Tom, which he'll need to start pushing him in the right direction.

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

Gotta love all that lovely early puberty stuff LOL! Awkwardness, shyness, new feelings, weirdness around the opposite sex, it's something we all want to go back to... NOT! Good luck to Kasey and Tom is all I have to say, that and update soon please :D

Author's Response: Hahaha. Yes, yes. Well, I don't know about you, but I certainly love WRITING about all that stuff! Such fun. And thanks for the well wishes; they're going to need it. ;)

Reviewer: MisterSmithers Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 9

yesss the good stuff B)
great chapter btw
I seriously cannot wait for more.
SO GO WRITE! AND UPDATE!
:)

Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, I will, no worries. :)

Reviewer: Anerom09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 9

aweeeeee, so adorably awkward.
keep updating!

Author's Response: I know, right? Now the fun really begins! :)

Reviewer: Rei Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 9

YAY :D The good part happens! Not like the other chapters weren't fabulous x) Lol, Tom's starting to develop hormones x) This was a funny chapter, yet I do love it

Author's Response: Oh, he's had active hormones for a while now. He's an almost-thirteen-year-old boy, after all. This is just the first time they've been directed at Kasey. Glad you found this chapter amusing. I must admit I had quite a bit of fun giving Tom hell, and I plan to do more of it! xD

Reviewer: Luttie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

It didn't suck! It was awesome!

Tom is realizing that he feels more than friendship for Kasey and I want to see how this progresses.

I'll put your story into my favorites =) it will be the first Het =O

Please update as soon as you can :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad to hear you didn't think it sucked. I guess it's just, you know, since I'm the author, I have to be overly critical of my own work, or something. Wow, I'm flattered! Your first het favorite. Now the pressure's on; I'll have to make sure my story is worthy of you. ;)

Reviewer: elizabe_th Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 08:32 am Title: Chapter 9

No it didn't suck! I love the sweetness of this story so much, can't wait for the good stuff hhe xD

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Guess I was just displeased 'cause it didn't end up quite how I wanted it to. I actually had a lot more planned for this chapter, but as it was getting so long the way it was (Tom certainly likes to angst over his feelings for Kasey), I didn't want to drag it out by adding more. But! That's okay. I'm over it, and I'm looking forward to what's to come. :)

Reviewer: RockChickSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 08:21 am Title: Chapter 9

bring on the sexual tension!! its what gets me through my day :))

Author's Response: Heck yes! It's (one of the things) what I'm looking forward to most. I'm such a sadist; I love making people suffer. xD

Reviewer: _Schrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/08 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 8

wow. if i ever said fuck you to my dad i think alot more things would start spilling from my mouth. like...

Word Vomit.


Please update soon! I love your story. It gave me shivers when i read this one. I'm anticipating when they all 'develop' because it means more feelings, strange urges and more to read about [hopefully?] :)

YAY to youu x

Chessie'x

Author's Response: Oh gosh, if I ever said 'fuck you' to my dad, he'd kick my ass from here to Timbuktu. Will do! I already have most of the next chapter written, so hopefully I'll be able to get it finished and posted soon. Shivers, hm? I'll take that as a good thing. So glad to hear that you're enjoying this. :)

Reviewer: MisterSmithers Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/08 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

AH!
I HATE YOU!
YOU LEFT ME HANGING FOR SO LONG!
But now I love you

Author's Response: Lol! Um, I'm sorry? I'll try not to leave you hanging for too long again, but I make no promises. Life has a funny way of interfering with things, you know?

Reviewer: unreachable102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

at first i was gonna review and say how i was so proud of tom telling his dad that he was sick of him, i was all GO TOMMM!!
but then..the alcohol poisioning..yeah i felt bad for going GO TOMM!!! lmfaoo.
but awww kasey and tom moment againnn ^_^!!
update asapp :]]

Author's Response: Yeeeah, I imagine Tom feels like right shit for having said all that to his dad after learning about the alcohol poisoning. Yes, I hope the Tom/Kasey moment was enough to make up for the heavy dosage of drama. :)

Reviewer: Rei Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

Aw, this was a sweet chapter

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you think so. :)

Reviewer: ttara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 8

aweee. this was very touching and so..cute. if thats teh right word. just enought to make me warm on the inside..


i know i have spelling mistakes...but im too lazy to fix it :D

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I was going for dramatic, but touching works too, lol. This is a very delicate subject, I feel, and one I'm not very familiar with, so I was actually very nervous about broaching it. I wanted to make Tom's reaction to the situation believable, and I hope I accomplished that.

Reviewer: Luttie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 8

Tom and Kasey are so cute together!*___*

I like your long chapters x)

Update soon please =)

Author's Response: They are, aren't they? Aww, you do? I'm really glad to hear that. Sometimes I fear I make them too long, but, really, I enjoy long chapters, myself. Though I did try to condense this chapter as much as I could, but I felt a lot of it was important towards character growth. I know there isn't a whole lot going on, as far as action and whatnot, but I assure you it's a bit of a turning point. Tom is starting to realize how much Kasey matters to him.

Reviewer: Anerom09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/08 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

im in love with this fic!
please update soon, i love their little childish, awkward love!

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad to hear that. I love it, too. Updating tonight, actually!

Reviewer: MisterSmithers Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 10:37 am Title: Chapter 7

Yay! I liked the chapter :)
It took me forever to read though. :(
Hope you do good on your finals :D

Author's Response: It was an insanely long chapter. I apologize for that. That's something I struggle with frequently. Keeping my chapters short, I mean. But I'm glad you liked it, regardless! And thank you for the well wishes.

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/08 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh man, I hate exams. But I guess college finals are a bit more important than high school exams :P

I love this story, and I love Kasey, she reminds me a bit of me, only I was never the fat kid, I was bullied for different reasons, and I didn't move to Germany from America LOL!

Good luck on your finals, I hope they go well! Update as soon as you can, we'll all be waiting :D

Author's Response: Not more important, just...different? Lol. You need to do well on your high school exams in order to get into college, right? So...yeah. I don't know where I'm going with this. I'm really glad to hear that you enjoy Kasey's character. She reminds me a bit of myself, too. But I guess that's because I'm the author, and they say that usually when an artist creates a piece of work they put a bit of themselves into it. Thank you so much for the support! I hope they go well, also. *is trying not to freak out about them and failing miserably* Lol! I'll definitely update as soon as I can. :)

Reviewer: ttara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

i love how the ending is tense...and than there is simone....it just made it really humorous! loved it!

when will tom and kasey stop being blind?

Author's Response: xD Ah yes, good ol' Simone. But those are moms for you, you know. I guess. I don't know. I've never really been in that situation before, but that's how I imagine a mother would react in such a situation. rnrnHaha, who knows? I can't say for Kasey, but I know for Tom it'll take a while. Boys are generally clueless about such things. xP

Reviewer: Luttie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 7

Hello! New reader here :D I love your story and I like this being developed from the beginning.

I hope that you can update soon ang good luck with your finals ;)

(sorry for my bad spelling x.x)

Author's Response: Hello! Welcome, and thank you for taking an interest in my story. I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far. Yeah, finals are going to be intense, so I doubt I'll have time for much else, but I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for the well wishes! (Oh, and your spelling is just fine.) :)

Reviewer: Anerom09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/08 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

i must say this is the cutest tom/ofc story ive read in a long time.
i adore their awkwardness.
update sooon!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoy it. :)

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