Date: 10/13/08 06:59 pm Title: Fell Off Of The Face Of The Earth...
I loved it, all the drama in this story is amazing! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 10/12/08 11:52 pm Title: Fell Off Of The Face Of The Earth...
I liked Toms pov.. that was funny he seemed sorta at peace.. like he found part of himself..sorta. Idk. But It was good. Im glad Georg is mad..i would be too
Date: 10/12/08 07:57 pm Title: Fell Off Of The Face Of The Earth...
omg; im strangely in love with the last line, so so much. It should be a song lyric or something!
Date: 10/12/08 07:18 pm Title: Fell Off Of The Face Of The Earth...
actually it's not that bad of a chapter and as I said before I really like where this story is going -smiles-
Date: 10/12/08 04:55 pm Title: Fell Off Of The Face Of The Earth...
DON'T KILL THEM! D:
Date: 10/12/08 01:30 pm Title: Fell Off Of The Face Of The Earth...
Ummm. Wow.
Y'know...in some...WEIRD sort of way, that was actually a bit funny? I mean, parts of it. From Tom's POV that is. He's just...floating on the water, relaxing, and there's all the commotion on the cliff. And he's just...acting as though he doesn't have a care in the world xD But if I were Georg, I'd be super pissed at him, too. Actually, I would probably kick his ass. But hey, that's just me ;) Nice chapter, though!
Date: 10/11/08 08:07 pm Title: Save Him To Save Me...
*cries.* Nooooooo!! SPRING NICHT. OR HOWEVER YOU SPELL IT. NOOO.
*crying now. Hysterical.* I can't even breaaathe. You just don't even know. I didn't leave a review for the other chapters because I couldn't stop reading. Pages didn't load fast enough. I was a raving lunatic as I waited. It was madness. This story is madness and sadness and ahhhhhhhhhh.
I'm not mad at tomi. He's just as hurt as bill, but occasionally stronger.
Here's something I kept thinking and it may not make sense. "1000 oceans wide." Not long... why? because if he cut and made 1000 long oceans, he really would have died. Instead, time died for a little while and bill could run away 1000 oceans wide and he could still stay alive and breathe.
Just a poetic lil analogy I got from your story. It was so beautiful. Can't stop crying. AHH!
Date: 10/11/08 07:46 pm Title: Save Him To Save Me...
OH
MY
FUCKING
GOD!!!!!
that was....unexpected...............wow
Date: 10/11/08 07:15 pm Title: Save Him To Save Me...
Im like balling my eyes out and my parents think im a freak crying over this story.. but it just so.. AMAZING like you dont even know. I cant wait for more!!!
Date: 10/11/08 07:01 pm Title: Save Him To Save Me...
OMG!!! The clock is fucking 1 AM and i just cry the hell out of my bed! That was so.... oh my god!!!!!!!!! How could they do such a thing to themself???
Date: 10/11/08 06:58 pm Title: Save Him To Save Me...
NEIN! NEIN! NEIN! NEEEEEEEEEEIN!
OH FUCK! WHY?! WARUM?! D:
*curls up in a ball and hides* NOT HAPPENIIIIIIIIING!
Date: 10/11/08 05:45 pm Title: Save Him To Save Me...
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Toooooom.... Fuck!
Still a God damn good story!
Date: 10/11/08 05:22 pm Title: Bill's First Time...
I'm speachless.. in a positive way
Date: 10/11/08 05:15 pm Title: Save Him To Save Me...
-_-'
You're upsetting me =( Tom...wasn't s'posed to jump. *sobs* Oooh, gosh....
((This is still superawesome, though))
Date: 10/11/08 05:13 pm Title: I'm Not Leaving...
Awww :'
So much emotions ^^
And the "I'm fucking up your life" "thank you" part was genious!
Date: 10/11/08 03:17 am Title: The Best Father In The World...
a little confusin but i like it(( poor billa((
Date: 10/11/08 01:18 am Title: The Best Father In The World...
BILLL! Tom get your ASS in there NOW!
Im dont think im angry at Tom, I totaly get why hes doing that. But he needs to go save BILL! NOW!
Date: 10/10/08 11:59 pm Title: The Best Father In The World...
Wonderful but I'm not as angry as Tom. I've had first hand experience with self-mutilation and I can sympathize with Bill. Wonderful job, though and I can't wait to see where you take this.
Date: 10/10/08 07:34 pm Title: The Best Father In The World...
*sniffle* Oh damn. Oh scheisse. Verdamnte Scheisse. D: NEIN, BILLA! NEIN, TOMI!
Date: 10/10/08 06:51 pm Title: The Best Father In The World...
no I'm not angry at Tom, at Jorg? yes. you know what the funny thing is I kind of know how Bill feels about needing to cut to breath but it's not that bad anymore. anywayyyysssss really like where this story is going kepp going -smiles-