Date: 12/21/08 04:21 pm Title: Groomed Doll
MORE update now. u havent in months
Date: 12/20/08 08:18 pm Title: Groomed Doll
i hope you finsh this soon it is so good and i love it, can't wait, you did a really great job
Date: 12/15/08 09:07 am Title: Groomed Doll
I'm finding this story interesting. I mean I'm laughing and cringing by turns. So yeah, you've got me hooked, what's gonna happen next? By all means keep writing!
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses.
MidoriIris
Date: 12/09/08 10:42 pm Title: Groomed Doll
Ohh my jebus.
Tom
equals
GLORIOUS GOD O_O
Mmm =) It was kind of a filler, but it was worth a read for sure ^^
...and im jealous, that choker sounds awesome xD
Date: 11/29/08 01:30 am Title: Groomed Doll
Please keep going with this story!
Date: 11/29/08 01:18 am Title: Spared Doll
OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS STORY! Way too many caps in a row, I know, but I couldn't help it. I love the way you write Bill and Tom as vampires. It's so hot and there hasn't even been any sex yet.
Date: 11/29/08 01:00 am Title: Asphyxiated Doll
This is good. Good for you, being original enough to write a realistic vampire fic.
Date: 11/21/08 08:07 pm Title: Groomed Doll
this is awesomeness
Date: 11/20/08 04:45 pm Title: Groomed Doll
I really hope you will continue this story. I like it when Bill and Tom are bad boys. Besides,it is so much more fun walking down the dark path,when someone else is leading you...(evil grinn) Bring out the black and sensual stuff.
Keep up the good work :)
Date: 11/19/08 03:03 pm Title: Groomed Doll
oooh love this story so far! I bet it's like an electric shock necklace, where if she tries to escape, she'll get electrocuted. Ehhh, that would be so painful! Very good i can't wait for next chapter!
Date: 11/15/08 07:59 pm Title: Asphyxiated Doll
If you want a beta, I'm here at building.the.republic.of.heaven@gmail.com
I'm efficient and quick.
I'm not up on the list of betas on here, but I've beta'd before and have recieved good feedback...
:] consider it.
Date: 11/15/08 01:33 pm Title: Groomed Doll
mehr mehr mehr bitte!!
Date: 11/14/08 10:38 pm Title: Groomed Doll
Surprisingly I’m actually more concerned about her hair and make up then the locket…but I guess I’ll find out about both in the next chapter.
Date: 11/14/08 10:22 pm Title: Spared Doll
Pick me I want to be their new pet!
Date: 11/14/08 10:12 pm Title: Asphyxiated Doll
lovely start!
Date: 11/09/08 06:39 pm Title: Groomed Doll
Well you already asked every question in my head so all i have to say is UPDATE! Please, before i die of anticipation.
Date: 10/30/08 09:06 pm Title: Groomed Doll
oh god... I'm just dying to know what comes next! =D
see ya^^
Date: 10/27/08 03:25 am Title: Groomed Doll
Don't feel sorry for the update. I loved it. Hope to see more soon. But will be patient.
Date: 10/26/08 07:26 pm Title: Groomed Doll
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeee its so so goood ty i loveeeeeeee it