Date: 10/12/08 04:43 am Title: Chapter 2
Mmm a little bit more twincest development, I see :)
Some minor spelling and grammar mistakes, though. Perhaps you could beta it a little more next time? :D Overall, it's a cute one.
Poor Tomi, getting all confused about his feelings for Bill. Teehee
Author's Response: Yea I know I make a lot of mistakes sometimes but who doesn't right? Thanks for the review!!
Date: 10/12/08 04:38 am Title: Chapter 1
This is not a bad start.
I am pretty intrigued to find out more about the plot as it's not very obvious at this point of time. :) (Except maybe the little twincest developing here and there)
:D
Author's Response: Don't worry it will ;)
Date: 10/11/08 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
*gasp* i want to know what happens next! Pweese write more lol. You should continue that other story as well, both are excellent! :D
Author's Response: LOL I know I know I will too!
Date: 10/06/08 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is really cute so far. I like it
Author's Response: Thank you!!