Date: 12/02/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 3: Dangerous Situation
update soon please i like it
Date: 12/02/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 3: Dangerous Situation
update soon please i like it
Date: 12/01/08 11:26 am Title: Chapter 3: Dangerous Situation
*new reader alert*
OMG!! =0 *freaks out a little*
this was really good!! =D REALLY good ;)
i really really like the story line and i can't wait for more of this!!!!
so please update soon? (A)
Author's Response: You got it!
Date: 11/30/08 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 2: Another Time
I love this story, based off of the game "Innocent Life" for the PS2?? XD Harvest Moon kicksass. I apologize if you've gotten this alot XP.
Author's Response: Actually, you are the first person to have guessed that this was based off a video game.rnrnI'm glad you like this story.
Date: 11/05/08 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Another Time
Cookies? Really?!
It's a little simple and the plot moves a little too quickly.
The transitions are no existant.
It's a good idea but needs more details and more transitions to make it great.
Not a bad start but you need to work more with your beta more and perhaps with a second beta to get another opinion.
Date: 10/19/08 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 2: Another Time
I want to know what happenes *jumps* PWEASE!!!!???
Author's Response: Oh you will... And I have this to say about the next chapter... Poor Kitty...
Date: 10/16/08 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Innocent Boy
Oh my dear lord. I'm making you a banner, this is so good.
Author's Response: Really??? Thanks, I'm really glad you like it.
Date: 10/16/08 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Innocent Boy
O_O
MORE
Date: 10/07/08 02:29 am Title: Prologue
I'm interested! Please continue
Author's Response: Glad to hear, and don't worry, the next chapter will come soon.
Date: 10/07/08 01:24 am Title: Prologue
oo0oh!! interesting`~~ :DDD Tom has his own little playmate?~~ :DDD i can't wait for more~!~:DD
Author's Response: Arigato. And yes, Tom has a playmate now! An adorable little Innocent LIfe!
Date: 10/06/08 08:15 pm Title: Prologue
Holy fuck, really original I like it!! I can't wait to read more, I'm so excited!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on the next chapter right now.