Date: 10/11/08 07:47 pm Title: When My Twin Broke In Two, (Part Two)
More please can't wait to find out what happens next.
Date: 10/11/08 04:17 pm Title: When My Twin Broke In Two, (Part Two)
could just be my mind going in the wrong direction now.
but if this is going where i think it´s going you need to add another warning.
besides that it´s great as it is
Date: 10/11/08 11:05 am Title: When My Twin Broke In Two (Part One)
Aughhh....need help with next chappy -_-
Date: 10/07/08 05:32 pm Title: When My Twin Broke In Two (Part One)
I"m good!
Date: 10/07/08 04:30 pm Title: When My Twin Broke In Two (Part One)
O_O I only understood half of the German... what did they say?
Author's Response: Können wir bitte gehen: "If we can we go please?"rnrnVerdammt! Ich will nicht Bill sagen, dass wir shouldn't gehen ..., er wird verrückt an mir werden. Gott, ich will nicht gehen aber: "Damn it! I don't want to tell Bill that we shouldn't go, but he'll get mad at me. God, don't want to go, however..."
Date: 10/06/08 08:23 pm Title: When My Twin Broke In Two (Part One)
i liked it... german isn't something i understand so i hope i'm not missing anything.
Author's Response: No, just Tom fighting with his inner self. Nothing special...(^_^)
Date: 10/06/08 06:18 pm Title: When My Twin Broke In Two (Part One)
wonderful start! Umm, can you maybe footnote translations next time? Possible?
Author's Response: I'm sorry about not doing that(XP). I'll start doing that by the second chappy. Leave reviews! XD