Date: 11/24/08 07:14 am Title: Blot on the Escutcheon
Kicked out of house what have you done? xD So I like the cahpter what's his motive he's gay and trying to infect it everyone is it? If isn't it theeen tell me :D and write soon this time please
Date: 11/24/08 05:03 am Title: Blot on the Escutcheon
oh my God, don't tell me what im thinking is right. poor Bill:(
awww love your story. hope you will come with more soon. i can't wait to find out what is gona happen to Bill and Tom :D
Author's Response: I'm sorry... Bill is such a victim in my fic >_< I'll try to post the next chapter soon! Thanks a lot!!!
Date: 11/24/08 01:54 am Title: Blot on the Escutcheon
I think you need make some updates more. It's very interesting. I like your characters. And all this KyleBillTom stuff is amazing too!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update more frequently... XD
Date: 11/24/08 01:01 am Title: Blot on the Escutcheon
oh meine gott....
i bet his uncle raped him all the time when he was young and since then he had such low self confidence that he turned himself into a whore...thats SO sadddddd
Author's Response: Just like what Tomi said, we can always guess XD I'll tell you in the next story. Thanks a lot for your review!
Date: 11/23/08 12:37 pm Title: School of the Damned
I finally found time to read it :D and I'm glad I did. whiii I really like it ^^ I couldn't stop laughing while reading the first chap, and the others had some hilarious elements too =)
I just reaaaaaaally like it ^^
Author's Response: Hey Lune!!! XXXD Thanks a lot, I'm glad you like this!
Date: 11/17/08 08:41 pm Title: School of the Damned
this stroy is so good please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update asap!
Date: 11/15/08 04:44 am Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
I don't know how to decribe my feelings...but you really did a good job.
You made me feel so complicated.
I used to hate Kyle's nasty personality but it was all his dad's fault.
Bill was his angel I guess.
He was hurt when he saw Bill was on the bed with others.
I could understand why he treated Bill like that.
Alright, but I wonder was that really love?
I mean Kyle's feelings for Bill.
Maybe he just assumed that Bill was his dead mom.
He wanted to compensate for his "fault".
Good job! I'm waiting for your next chapter.;)
Don't hurt Bill so much please! >
Author's Response: LOL, it's my job to get you confused XXXD I'm sorry but Bill is such a victim here... But I promise you he'll get his happy ending in the end XD I won't answer about Kyle's feeling for Bill, you'll figure it out by yourself XD Thanks!!!!
Date: 11/14/08 05:30 pm Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
oh... my... god
this is so amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
more more more!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/13/08 08:28 am Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
Oh god, I love this story :D
There should be more chapters, Great work :)
Date: 11/12/08 10:28 pm Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
good :)
Date: 11/12/08 08:44 pm Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
I liked it VERY much, awsome !!!!
:)
Date: 11/12/08 03:09 pm Title: School of the Damned
Soo like I promise I'm telling my thoughts about Kyle's dad just like I think he's having psychological problems... He's kind of crazy because of what happened I didn't like him att all even at the first time I saw him...
And This cahpter absouletly perfect we leaarn at least I learn everything I wanna learn so ı like it
Author's Response: He IS crazy! XD Thank a lot for reviewing, hun!
Date: 11/12/08 03:06 pm Title: Devils in Disguise
You should get a beta. The plot of this stry is so interesting, and Bill's whorish character is so great, but the story is kind of ruined by your lack of proficiency in English. You should get a beta.
Date: 11/12/08 02:56 pm Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
oooh so saaaad ='( and not at the same time... (does that make sense?) x3
Date: 11/12/08 01:08 pm Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
very good!!!
Date: 11/12/08 11:35 am Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
good, for sure :]
Date: 11/12/08 10:04 am Title: Finding Beauty in the Shades of Black
good!!
I'm so glad bill woke up!
but I'm confused about one point, bill hasn't got aids right?!
and I don't understand if kyle feels something for tom or not.
well I guess we'll wait and see!
waiting for more;]
cheers^^
Date: 11/11/08 04:58 am Title: School of the Damned
wow! I just can't imagine Kyle was inspired by Light.XD
You know light is craftier.
btw, what's your favourite Death Note pairing?
Mine is Mello x Near but I like Light x L and L x Near too.
I think Near should be the bottom but I can accept most pairngs.
Let's talk about your story again.
You know I couldn't help liking it.
I just could't believe a guy could write an emotional story like this.
Maybe it's because you study psychology.XD
Anyway, keep on writing and once it is finished , I hope I can translate it into Chinese with your permission.
I really want to share this good story with other Chinese twincest or TH fans.
yeah I'm a Chinese so mind my language.XD
Author's Response: Yeah no one can guess lol! Personally I'd prefer Mello as uke, since he's emotional just like a PMS-ing girl, plus his girly haircut ^^ But Near is seme to me. I judge uke-seme by their personality =p No I don't study psychology, I just read some psychology stuffs. People tell me I'm emo btw. The next chapters will be a lot more emotional ^^ Of course you can translate my fanfic into Chinese, I'm happy to share my imagination with everyone =D I'll try to finish it asap. Thanks a lot!
Date: 11/10/08 07:46 pm Title: School of the Damned
hey it's me again.
Just wanna say I've just visited your Deviant Art.
You like Death Note?
I like it too!XD
Was Kyle inspired by Near?
The image of Kyle really made me think of Near.
It was too obvious, a guy with grey hair, blue eyes and goddamn personality.
(It doesn't mean I hate him. XD)
Actually my favourite is Mello but I like L and Near too.
Your drawings are great too!
I like "I've Never Said I Hate You" most and Bill was so cute!>w<
and I was a bit "o_O" when I saw your profile picture.XP
Keep on writing and drawing!
Author's Response: Hi again XD Well, you're not the only one thinking Kyle's inspired by Near, but I'd say he's more Light-like [just analyze their personality, they're both anankastic; perfectionist, having great sense in moral and ethic, stubborn, seeing the world in black and white, having good intention but end up being a bad guy because they accomplish their goal in wrong way]. About his gray hair and blue eyes... Dunno, just adopting the look from Russian Blue cat I own lol =p btw, have you noticed that the guy sitting beside Bill in my doujinshi 'I've never said I hate you' is indeed Kyle? ^^ Talking about Death Note, I really love it and most my art is under Ohba-sama influence =D L is sexy! But Mello is waaays sexier! And don't worry, I'll be more surprised if anyone can tell I'm a guy. I know I look like a goddamned girl >_< Thanks a lot!
Date: 11/10/08 04:04 pm Title: Bleakest Silence
*Wooh! Kyle really is furious about Tom breaking the privacy rule :O
*Oh no, Bill! I hope he makes it!
*I think Kyle's dad is going to hurt him :s
I don't like Kyle, but he doesn't deserve this!
This chapter was very touching and moving!
Write-on!
Author's Response: Breaking a rule is the 1st most hated thing for an anankastic person like Kyle [I just re-read my ICD-10 book to make sure]. Yep, I hope I can write Bill all happy for sometime, but right now he's endangered =< Thanks for reading and reviewing!