Date: 11/08/08 04:19 am Title: Chapter 2
The titled was right, Tom is seriously obsessed. Bill can't eat pizza or sleep without it being dangerous. How can someone get strangled by bed sheets there not alive lmao, Tom is too serious. I know he worries but that is too much. Update soon.
Author's Response: Lol to Tom; bed sheets could be very much alive haha. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/24/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is very well written. I love the way Tom is very overprotective, it makes it funny yet in a serious way, if you get me.
Eek I hope Andreas doesn't get hurt when Tom has his 'chat' with him :( I'd love to see this story progress right through their ages all the way up to 19. I would like to see how Tom's character develops and how Bill reacts to his brother being protective.
This story is just very cute and adorable. Seriously I LOVE IT :)
Author's Response: Alright I can do that :) going through their age to 19 ;P I'm really glad you like it! Your review made me happy *dances* Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/23/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hii..
Nice story, I'm looking forward to see where this goes! Just one thing: Bill's allergic to aples, so I guess Tom wouldn't serve him so.. :D
Author's Response: Yeah I know lol I meant to put orange juice, but my little 2 year old niece has been drinking apple juice alllllllllllllllll day i'll change that! Thanks for your review!
Date: 10/23/08 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think Tom should cut down his obsession just a tad... D: its kinda scary. I mean, just cut it down a TAD. XD
I'd like to know what other people think about the twins. Gustav and Georg, and Andreas and their other school friends. :) well, if they go to school that is.
update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, Andreas will have his time and what he thinks in the next chapter and the chapter after that is about them going to school. Thanks for your review!
Date: 10/23/08 09:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Aw, this is just amazingly cute!
Of course Tom's REALLY annoying sometimes, like in the food case. (Pizza? Dangerous?!) Well maybe it doesn't matter to Bill 'cause he's so used to it. But i would so freak out if i had the same kind of big brother. But of course i can't say that, because Tom's SO CUTE at the same time, i would just fall in love with him x) Well i forgot the point already while daydreaming about Tom..^^ Anyway, i like this story pretty much. You can write really well and this is just soadorable fic! ;DD
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm really glad you like the story. He is very cute haha, but yes it can be annoying I was just showing how obssessive he can be and such so it hopefully shouldn't happen as often with the food but who knows? lol
Date: 10/23/08 06:42 am Title: Chapter 2
:O wow !
tom is just a tad bit
OVERLY OBSESSIVE !
aha if anyone did that to me ,
i'd smack them and yell "LEAVE ME ALONE!"
aha . this is a great story .
you should really keep going .
Author's Response: Haha! Yeah I would do the same thing thanks for the review!
Date: 10/23/08 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1
what, how small do you think Germany is?
Author's Response:
I've never been to Germany and I know it's probably big and stuff, but I live in Arkansas and that is a small state. I hate Arkansas so I know if I get something or everything wrong about Germany, i'm sorry. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/23/08 12:57 am Title: Chapter 2
oh god..Tom is so obsessed with Bill.. soo safety obsessed... XDD and is he getting jealous~~ ?? :DDD oh!! i can't wait for more~~
Author's Response: Oooo yes he is getitng saftey jealous lol Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/22/08 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Overprotective Tom. :s
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 10/15/08 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh, i am very interested to see where you take this. its a very cool premise. update soon please. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 10/06/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww poor kids! :(
can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I should get chapter 2 done today and chapter 3 started :)
Date: 10/06/08 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG !
nooo !
thats so sad !
please keep goinggg .
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I nearly cried writing this! Chapter 2 should be up today :)
Date: 10/06/08 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, this is really adorable! Only one chapter, and I'm already in love x)) I can imagine how Tom's going to be SO (over)protective.. and I just can't wait!
Im excited^^ Just continue!
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter should be a little taste of over protectiveness from Tom ^^
Date: 10/06/08 09:49 am Title: Chapter 1
i'm crying but i really like the beginning.. please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :) I'm really glad you like it!
Date: 10/06/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1
It's a good setup; I'd like to see what comes next...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Chapter 2 should be up sometime today
Date: 10/06/08 05:55 am Title: Chapter 1
So, I pretty much need more of this story. Like... now? Maybe? ♥
Author's Response:
I'm gonna get chapter 2 done today and start chapter 3 :)
Date: 10/06/08 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1
good start! =p
is this AU?
the charecter death is 4 simone rite? i hope not bill or tom >.
Author's Response: Ya the character death is Simone! :) Thank you for your review. If Bill and Tom are brothers that mean it's not AU right? *not sounding mean I promise!*
Date: 10/06/08 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1
aw...how sad.. ;____________; but this story does sound interesting!! :DDD i can't wait for more~~ :DDD
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you like the story :)
Date: 10/06/08 04:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww that almost made me cry, I'm so emotinal lol. It's sad that Bill and Tom are just sooo young. I don't know if I would be able to handle that at all. But they've got their daddy and each other to lean on. Very sad, but very cute as well.
Author's Response:
I was so close to crying when I was writing the chapter! Thanks so much for your review!