Date: 03/13/25 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 10/16/14 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 06/11/12 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
I love this cute little story! Great job
Date: 03/04/12 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
So adorable! Bill was so cute when he asks if Tom would keep him.
Date: 07/29/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
Ah wow this is amazing! I loved reading it. This kind of AU is always fun :)
Date: 03/13/11 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
I actually really liked this so just as a well-meant tip:
How about you not referring to your story as: crap and pitiful attempt?
Because I was truly doubting on weather or not to read this even before I had read the first sentence.
Though I did read it, and really enjoyed this OneShot, though usually people who keep on calling their stories shitty have really bad story plots, and this is as far away from shit as you can possible get, so please. I don't know how your writing is now, if you've posted anything else on here. since I haven't checked it out yet, but do start believing more in yourself, because you are in fact truly talented.
Date: 07/28/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
g....guh....
Date: 12/10/09 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
no comment...
lol jk i've read this 5 times and whene er i see it on the random story thingy, i squeal...so yeah...
Date: 06/21/09 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
Wow. *speechless*
that
was
OOOO, SKITTLESS!!!!!! yes, it was WORTHY.OF.SKITTLES. it was AMAZING!! *gives TH skittles* You are deserving of some TH skittles. This is going straight to faves, VERY VERY good!!! If you're looking to make a longer story, you could use this plot, I'd definitely read it x]
Date: 05/11/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
i liked this. i hope you continue writing. you could write longer stories well i think. :)
Date: 04/07/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
I really like it!
are you planning in a sequel?
(about how they have to run away) or something??? :E *Gettin Hopes*
Date: 03/13/09 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
Ahhh... I. Loved. This. Story.
No two ways about it! It didn't even need the smut in it for it to be good- the story in and of itself was wonderful. Often one-shots leave something to be desired, but you pulled this one off expertly. From beginning to end, just beautiful!
I'm gonna be watching you to read more of your stuff in the future. Oh, I'm so happy this one randomly came up! ^_^
Date: 03/10/09 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
I really enjoyed reading this.
I will add it to my favorites. :D
Date: 12/29/08 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
I have wanted to give you a review for a long time but I never wrote it. That's because I know what I want to write in my own language but not in english. But I'll try.
I like this story and I have read it many times. Only thing is that I was hoping for a longer story. I'm sorry, now I'm stuck with the language but what I mean is that maybe it would have been better with many chapters. It's very well like this, but I have this feeling that it's like one long story told in one chapter.
I like the plot and the characters. Bill is so sweet, asking if Tom will keep him or not. And the sex in the end, it's hot ;) I would like to know more, about the backround etc. but I love this story as it is. I know I will read it many times in the future too :)
xx
Date: 12/24/08 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
This story is a fabulous idea. I really enjoyed the set up. The split up of the twins. Them finding each other. Tom not realizing it was Bill. But Bill realizing it was Tom. My biggest problem is the change in speed of the story. It seemed to move slowly very slowly until the end of it and then it seemed to move at lightning speed. It was so good and I feel like I missed out on a lot of details that were rushed through. Other then the rush at the end, this was a great story!
Date: 11/18/08 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
woooooooooooooooow that was hot
Date: 11/01/08 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
Great story Ö I love it!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 10/20/08 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
Well well, it's the first time I get to see something from you, however I've always seen your reviews to my stories.
What to say. I spotted mispelled words, and at a random point you changed the tense from past to present; I guess it'd take time to correct all that though, but you could get a beta do it for you ;) the jump from I-don't-recognize-my-brother to I'm-having-sex-with-him was a bit too straight forward according to me, it had no anticipation (personally I'd have stopped it at the kiss ;), but that was your decision and I respect it, even though that doesn't mean I have to like it.
This was my opinion :) however all in all, the plot idea was fairly good ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so, so, so much! I'm super happy someone finally stood up and said, 'you made a pile of mistakes, it's your first story, it's bound to suck!' So far everyone's been really nice and then you just told it as it was. I got a beta now! I haven't had time to write though. rnrnThank you so much for the super constructive critcism!
Date: 10/08/08 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 (and only)
I liked it!
You described everything really well and the sex part was pretty hot!
Author's Response: Thank you!