Date: 10/06/08 12:39 am Title: Changes
The last line made made me wanna cry... T-T
Aww, lovely chapter in this series.
I love how you two write this pairing.
Shit, now I AM crying. DX
Date: 10/05/08 11:52 pm Title: Changes
Aww, my heart's breaking for Tomi actually. *sniff* Crap.
Date: 10/05/08 11:45 pm Title: Changes
this is so good (L)
poor tomi :- (
Date: 10/05/08 11:37 pm Title: Changes
oh wow, that was amazing. I...I'm in love with it. This has got to be my favorite by far. The characters were created so well that they seemed real. The mention of the paparazzi was brilliant. It seems a lot of writers, myself included, tend to forget about the paparazzi and only bring them in when convenient but you brought them in throughout. I loved Tom in this and Bushdio was adorable. I felt for Bill. He's so innocent and young but old at the same time. Wonderful. The end..."it was dark enough that he almost missed the black Escalade pulling away from the gate" was so heartbreaking and bittersweet. I loved the fact that you showed how it was a melancholic moment for Bill as well. Wonderful job! I can't wait to see more in this series!
Date: 10/05/08 11:32 pm Title: Changes
Pure genious!! Xxooxxoo
Date: 10/05/08 11:19 pm Title: Changes
Aww. That last sentence almost killed me. Sad, sad Bill!
I love that this is all short stories. It means that every new one is a total surprise and you never dissapoint. You totally rock!