Date: 10/08/08 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
O.O
*grabs drooled-on pair of boxers and runs away*
Date: 10/08/08 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
OO
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OO
am I supposed to be able to write a review after this?
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JesusfuckingChrist that was...oh my holy cow...some of the sexiest...can't breathe...*whimpers*
look what you turned me into ?
holy hell, I give up on trying to make this understandable
YUM !!!
Date: 10/08/08 06:21 am Title: Chapter 3
damn that was hottness can't wait to read more. Very original i love it.
Date: 10/08/08 06:19 am Title: Chapter 3
i dont know what stories you've read here but damn i wish more were like this one! not the most realistic fic cuz i'm pretty sure tom's ass would get fired for letting his students fuck in the bathroom but definately the hottest thing i've read in a long time! i was worried a little too about whether or not bill liked it but he really really seems to like it! please update soon!
Date: 10/08/08 05:38 am Title: Chapter 3
weeeeeeeeeee, yum, yum yum xD
okay, LOVE what you're doing with Daniel (yeah, I'm mean when it comes to guys/girls trying to steal the twins away from each other) he's like any other boyfriend, but one can tell that their relationship isn't of the deep serious thing although they have been together for one heck of a long time. Aw, cute that he was upset about Tom not calling him ,)
and oh my God, we get to see the kinkier side of Bill in this OO in the first chapter I was sort of thinking that the boys were forcing Bill to do this, but then in the second it seemed Bill didn't really mind, and in this one, oh my God, he loves it doesn't he ? total sexomaniac xD
LOOOOOL, Tom go-ot ha-ard, Tom go-ot ha-ard *sing song voice* how on earth will he manage to survive classes now, with that little minxen in the first row ,p
looking forward to see what other toys the boys have been buying for their little billa (how you came up with a remote control dildo to be used in public, I have no idea still) ,) oh and question, are they all gay, or like bisexual, or is it just Bill (I think half the world's population would go gay for Bill) ?
aw, and Bill thinking he doesn't need his teacher ,) oh but you do billa, you do
love this lena, how can I not xD oh and as for your comment on this being 'just like the other slash craziness out there' this is original, and that is something that a lot of fics are missing
God I love this, can't wait for more girl, and thank you so much for updating so fast this time, made me all hot and bothered for the rest of the day ,)
love
Date: 10/07/08 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
xD omg I'm really feeling sorry for tom lmao! Man, but that's hot! Calling him and... yum^^
Date: 10/07/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
woah
i am REALLY curious now about this how this story is going to go
so bill likes it? or not? or has he gotten used to it? or is he an addict?
...yes...very curious...
and i disagree, this story is unlike a lot that i've read here
but in a good way! :-)
Date: 10/07/08 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
tooooo short!
you tease!
Date: 10/07/08 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
GOD! Trying to keel me, are you? Damn.
Haha, totally didn't give a damn about Daniel after that xD Hell, I'd be ready to jump on Bill myself...
Date: 10/07/08 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
*breathes deeply* OMG im metling!!! it has to be at least a thousand degrees in here!!! OMFG!!!
Date: 10/07/08 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Daaammmn. Its no wonder all the boys want a go at Bill. I could only imagine how Tom was feeling when Bill came back with the cum on his lip. I'd be about ready to rape him. :p *drool*
Date: 10/07/08 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooooo....tomi! d;)
Date: 10/07/08 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
GAH. Fucking hot. I am dead now.
Date: 10/07/08 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nice XD
That was dirty.
Date: 10/07/08 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
cool! lol I liked it! Again!
Date: 10/07/08 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
woah! this is plot is crazy!
please continue updating! im really interested about how bill and the others started doing this
Date: 10/07/08 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Fuck!! This is my new favorite fic of the moment!! A quick fuck in the bathroom stall... WOW!! I love how Tom chose to say when talking to them about the toy. That's friggen hilarious!! Can't wait for chappie 3. This was fucking good. :P
Date: 10/07/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMFG!!! You did it again, I'm absoulutly(well almost) SPEACHLESS!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/07/08 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Okay, now that I have collected myself a bit, I realized my last review didn’t make much sense, all I basically said was: hot, more, hot, update, hot
Which isn’t really helpful at all xD
Loved the parts where Tom thinks about his life. Oh and having his boyfriend seem a little ‘uncaring’ that’s such a nice touch, Tom belongs with Bill, no caring about the stupid boyfriend ,p
When you first introduced the remote, I was like OO huh? And then with Bill saying he was more sensitive that day, I got a feeling it would be because of Tom, it took me a while to figure out what exactly the remote did, but girl, when I did xD that was brilliant, best idea ever I must say !
Oooooh, what does the yellow button do ? You will tell us right ?
And oh my God OO Tom allows his students to go fuck in the bathroom in the middle of class, what is this, heaven ?
Oh my…more toys ??? Lucy wanna know, lucy wanna know !!!!
I like that you make the boys sort of friends, it’s not like they’re bullying Bill or anything, just taking slight advantage of him ,) and I LOVE how you make them all ‘no touchy feely’ just fuck and come (makes more room for Tomi boy to steal away Bill’s heart…and his ass)
Yup, and Bill lusting for ‘Mr. Trumper’ me likez xD
Okay, so, was that a better review ?
Now, I don’t know if you’re one of those authors that don’t answer reviews, but I was just wondering if you could answer a question. Cus, I went to your bio to see and it said that you would be updating this fic, but I was just wondering when? Just so I know when to be looking for it ,)
Love
Author's Response: @___________________________@ oh my gosh I love you!!! XD And yes, I normally don't answer reviews since there just gets to be too many by the time I get around to it. But...I shall update today. Just for you ^^; I love writing this fic. It's so easy for me to write it. And I'm glad you loved it too!!! I'm flattered to get a review from you. I absolutely adore your fics. *ADORE* Thanks so much!! ^___________^
