Date: 10/04/08 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! kinky as all get out and really well written. amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm gled the kink came out ^_^
Date: 10/04/08 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was an utterly fantastic fic! The humor was so witty and I loved the sex scene. It was realistic yet hot as hell (and also kinda humorous in places). Loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it came out somewhat realistic ^_^
Date: 10/04/08 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha, the last lines were priceless!
Author's Response: LOL! I'll be sure to tell Tomi that ^_^ Thanks!
Date: 10/04/08 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol.
"It's raining."
That was hot.
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^
Date: 10/04/08 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved the last line and loved the story ^-^.
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/04/08 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah!!!! That was so descriptive. My ass actually hurts. I felt like I was Bill just then (omg, I wish I was). That was bloody brilliant. You deserve an award for this mahvelous piece of fiction here. *drool*
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you for saying that ^_^
Date: 10/04/08 11:02 am Title: Chapter 1
you should write smut more often! definetly)))
Author's Response: LOL! I hope to. If I can get the twinmuses to cooperate. Bill is mad at Tom at the moment.
