Date: 09/10/13 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1
that last sentence killed me lol
Date: 03/25/10 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
whoa that was hot! Super hot! And super super well written! Wow that was just amazing! ^^
Author's Response: Your review left me speechless ^_^ Thank you for taking the time ^_^
Date: 08/04/09 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
i love this story!!!!.
the het-ish part in the beginning you did that well , usually one sign of tom or bill getting a random whore i wont read it , but you my friend aced it. works nicly to and doest piss me off cause i got a bff nicole so great choice of name lolz.
this has to be the best story on here or definatly in the top three
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks ^_^ That means a lot ^_^
Date: 04/21/09 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1
cute!!!!! makes me want to know what happened next. i loved the emotion between them. tom's guilt and wondering what he did. bill's guilt for making tom feel bad. tom's guilt for fucking bill, all just wonderful. nice job. =)
Author's Response: Guilt makes wonderful fodder for smut, eh? I'm glad you enjoyed reading this!
Date: 12/09/08 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
My God, that was sexy!!
I'm a sucker for smut and I'm a sucker for first time fics. Thank you!! lol
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/02/08 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED this. I just loved the entire writting style.
And it was funny. (:
I wanna see Tom with his dreads down. D:
Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot ^_^ Tomi with his dreads down? He would look so good, wouldn't he?
Date: 10/25/08 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Weeeeeww I almost fell off my chair xD I sat so close to the computer screen to make sure I didn't miss a single word :3 I really loved that :D I'm going to read it again now! XD
Author's Response: LOL! Twincest is dangerous! Glad you enjoyed reading it!
Date: 10/24/08 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
“No more dry fucks. It hurt like a sonofabitch.”
“Dry fuck? It’s raining!”
This made me giggle..
I love how Bill says sonofabitch XD
Author's Response: Guh. Tom is a little dense sometimes. Glad you enjoyed the fic ^_^
Date: 10/20/08 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
really loved it
it was sexy and very funny
the end was just amazing xD
"No more dry fucks. It hurt like a sonofabitch."
"Dry fck? It's raining!"
genius!
xx ragdoll
By the way, I havent read your stories before, but now I think I will
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you enjoyed it. Not all my stuff is smut, though, so I hope you enjoy the other stories as well.
Date: 10/18/08 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was so sexy. And I absolutely loved the last line of that. lmao.
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/13/08 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha, loved the last line :'D stupid tomi xD
brilliant story (L)
you write very well :- D
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^
Date: 10/05/08 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved the descriptions, both of Bill and Tom's emotions and also of their surroundings. I'm a detail freak. xD and that last line was priceless, haha.
Author's Response: LOL! Guess I can't sell it, then ^_^ Glad you had fun reading it!
Date: 10/05/08 04:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really good! I like when one shots are a bit longer! You had written it well and it was very nice reading this! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the story. ^_^
Date: 10/05/08 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED it. The whole thing. The end was just, ah. Loooooved it.
Author's Response: Heheh. Thanks ^_^
Date: 10/04/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
ow ow oooow... I feel for Bill, I really do... and might i say, a dry fuck is an interesting choice for a PWP o.O
Author's Response: Ouch. I feel for Bill, too. He'll make sure Tomi uses lube next time.
Author's Response: Ouch. I feel for Bill, too. He'll make sure Tomi uses lube next time.
Date: 10/04/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
XD
The ending was WIN.
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^
Date: 10/04/08 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
“No more dry fucks. It hurt like a sonofabitch.”
“Dry fuck? It’s raining!”
loooooooooooooool
tom u fucking idiot! xD
Author's Response: Tom can be one sometimes ^_^ Glad you enjoyed it despite that.
Date: 10/04/08 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow...
:D
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 10/04/08 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
thats funny and hot i loved it
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked!