Date: 10/30/08 04:43 am Title: Snow White Shines
Hmmmm, I'm not happy with this Karma.
I mean, what sick game is she playing lol!?
I think she's being very unfair, and I hope both Tom and Bill leave her at once!!
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, you'll see Karma's game soon enough, lol.
Date: 10/21/08 10:59 am Title: Paint Jobs
Oh man, are they gonna go home? Is Bill gonna see them!?
Author's Response: Maaaaaaybe! Maybe not! You never know when I'm writing the story. Hahaha.
Date: 10/14/08 12:19 pm Title: Sleeping
Awh that's so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you're liking this.
Date: 10/13/08 07:44 pm Title: Come Here Often?
that Karma sure is promiscuous xDD
keep updating! this story is really good!
Author's Response: Promiscuous... Or checking out her options? *wink*rnrnI'm pleased you like it, babe!
Date: 10/11/08 10:51 am Title: Come Here Often?
I was slighty confused by this.
I thought Karma was with Tom? But then she bumped into Bill.
See, I love your writing, and the charcters are great, I just think you need to adjust how you place them and where - you need to make it clear that Karma was no longer with Tom.
Hope you dont find that offensive, because I love this story!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I thought that I put a proper space in the paragraph to show that. rnrnKarma was hanging out with Tom, but then (after some passage of time which is explained in the next chapter) she ran into Bill. I do it like this because I like showing Karma with both of them so you can compare how she's interacting with the both of them.rnrnI'm sorry it confused you, love. :( I'll try and do better in the future.
Date: 10/06/08 01:20 pm Title: Frozen Peas Are Strokes
Im really liking this so far! x
Author's Response: YAAAAAAAAAAY! HAPPY HAPPY TAIMA!
Date: 10/05/08 01:28 pm Title: And Why Should I Care?
AMAZING! I can't wait for you to post more. I love the name you gave her. Go TaiTai!
Author's Response: I *knew* you'd like it. I'm so glad you're on board with this! More *quite* soon.
Date: 10/05/08 11:13 am Title: Fixtures Don't Fix Problems
I think she's two faced LOL!
Author's Response: Two faced... Or just adventurous? LOL.
Date: 10/04/08 11:59 am Title: And Why Should I Care?
I did quite like it yes, very intriguing. My first time reading het, and Im still interested so you must update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I will update *very* soon.