Date: 11/15/08 03:51 pm Title: I'm Still Breathing
huh,that was funny bitte update soon.......bitte(:
Date: 11/10/08 01:37 pm Title: I'm Still Breathing
LOOOL ! nice one tom ! LMAO
x
Date: 11/10/08 01:33 pm Title: I'm Still Breathing
Awesome chapter :)
Can't wait until you update
Date: 11/08/08 11:25 pm Title: I'm Still Breathing
wooah i cant believe i missed out 5 chappies D:
Date: 11/08/08 04:47 pm Title: I'm Still Breathing
d:).....billa is a good person......d:)
Date: 11/08/08 01:14 pm Title: I'm Still Breathing
Haha.
The end. Lol.
Date: 11/06/08 07:13 pm Title: Terrifying
i like your story lots, and im excited for more, i hope you can update fast again ^_^ keep on writing its awesome
Date: 11/06/08 04:05 pm Title: Terrifying
anicipating* next :]
(* did i spell that right? )
what next? Hey, is she still pissed at/with Tom?
x
Date: 11/06/08 03:13 pm Title: Terrifying
Awwh.
She liiiikes Bill.
Date: 11/05/08 09:14 pm Title: Terrifying
Yay :)
I thought the chapter was good for a filler!
Can't wait for you to update :D
Date: 11/04/08 06:15 pm Title: I Got Money Now
oh. my. god. i want to kill her mother. I mean what a whore. goddddd. anyways i liked it. keep up the good work :D
Date: 11/04/08 05:59 pm Title: I Got Money Now
Soho, tierd... Loves it, loves it. And again loves it, I'm used to leave long, long, long reviews, but I'm yo tierd, it's 4 in the morning, you tell. well, again great continue, and GOOD NIGHT. And, what ever you're doing right know, I would normally treatning you about my new kitchen knife, but, I'm too tierd, so have to say: I now what you did last summer, if you've seen the movie, you know what I mean, and if this review is more about me, or if it's rude, or anything, tell me, and I will delete it... Night...
Date: 11/04/08 05:16 pm Title: I Got Money Now
This is great!!
Write more quickly!
Date: 11/04/08 04:44 pm Title: Life in Technicolor
Ok... so ... i feel sorry for Alex because 'he' is playing the same damn song over and over and over. I feel sorry for Lexi because she's being torn between foster family, biological family and her 'work' family anddd she's having a tough time with Tom. I feel sorry for Michelle because she has so many hiden secrets that Bill is starting to notice. (ie. jumper ?!). She's getting rich. WHAT HER MOM DID WAS JUST PLAIN FUCKED UP! HOW THE FUCK COULD SHE DO THAT! Hey.... She should run out on her mom, and make sure that no-one tells her were the fuckery she is. >=Z. GOSHHH. i hate Claudia Lee.
[yea. i pay attention :)]
So... next... maybe... Hmm... Tom tries to 'woo' Lexi by taking her out and shits. But THENN Bill catches Tom with 'Michelle'. So blah blah blah. All this fighting -verbal- happens then she goes ;;
"WAIT!" She pulled off Tom's cap and placed all her hair inside it. She placed it ontop of her head and pulled on Tom's shades. "I am Alex."
DUN DUN DUUUUUN!
:O
hope it helps :D
byeeee
Jessiicaaaaaaaa x
Date: 11/04/08 01:35 am Title: I Got Money Now
I love it how the complications pile up and getting her in deeper shit every minute. Can't wait for more.
Date: 11/03/08 08:27 pm Title: I Got Money Now
yaaay
i liked this chapter :)
cant wait for the next one
Date: 11/02/08 07:25 pm Title: Hitchin' a Ride
yay! I really enjoyed the chapter :)
btw it wont let me read the next one :( I'll try and figure out why,
Date: 11/02/08 04:00 pm Title: Hitchin' a Ride
Whoa.
She has a brother?
Gosh...
&& she's rich now!
She doesn't need money...
Date: 11/02/08 03:44 pm Title: Hitchin' a Ride
O.O
Date: 10/31/08 04:44 pm Title: Days of Our Lives
Hahaha, oh my god. It's starting to get a bit stupid, Bill isn't that naive, please :-p