Date: 10/06/08 08:13 pm Title: 0100
This was a great chapter. Bill really has no concept for personal space huh? Oh well. He's cute and he's super funny!
Update soon.
Date: 10/06/08 07:32 pm Title: 0100
Ahh I knew this was inspired by Chobits. I would love to see Bill in one of those cute lolita dresses that Chi always wears x3 Hehe, just saying :P
I also loved this line:
If you bothered to ask him, he’d probably be able to tell you the colour of your eyes in hexadecimal.
I love this story, really original, and I can't wait for more ^__^!!
Author's Response: SAME. Lol, I have a thing for Bill crossdressing, especially in lolita. In fact, I'm sure I've wrote it at least twice ^-^rnrnAt first, I was trying to steer away from Chobits, Bila was meant to be more like Night from Absolute Boyfriend, if you've read that. But I got the idea from Chobits definately.rnrnGod, I'm a nerd, I can write/read hex lmao. Even my chapter names are in binary x___xrnrnAnd thanks, more should come tomorrow :D
Date: 10/06/08 07:21 pm Title: 0011
ha! the end is hilarious!
i love your reasoning for bill to end up dressing like he actually does, and the eye liner!
very original idea too :-)
Author's Response: :) thank you!rnrnI think I should probably add humor to the genre thing……
Date: 10/06/08 07:10 pm Title: 0100
I don't think you finished that last sentence, it just has '..was going to be totally' and that's it. But I loved it! ^^ Bila is sooooo cute! I can totally see him picking up a bra all innocent like! X3 I wonder how good Bila is at replaying Tom's moans? >:3 BTW: that paragraph wasn't from Monsoon, was it? I hope the next chapter is up soon!! Such an awesome story!! ^^v
Author's Response: Teehee ^-^rnrnYeah, there were bits of monsoon in it, and I didn't even plan it like that lol!rnrnI'll try to update tomorrow :)rnAnd thanks :D
Date: 10/06/08 07:09 pm Title: 0100
Bill's so cute!
He's like a little kid, which is how he needs to stay. I'm fine without the sex.
What you mentioned, to get Bill sexual, don't make it too bad, please?
Such a cheesy line, the monsoon one that is. I can't be arsed to go back up and get the quote, I'm too tired.
His baby brother, I was like *o*
You know you love fluff just as much as me, you love you read it, you love you write it, you love to live it. I don't know about the last one like, I just needed a third.
If, no when, they have sex, please please please make it fluffy.
I'm begging you, have a heart, preferably one made of clouds.
And make it sweet, slow and passionate.
If not, I'll slap you with my keyboard.
Author's Response: NAIIIIIrnNOT THE KEYBOARD!!rnI'LL DO ANYTHING!!rnrnAnd yeah, to start with, its gonna be a fluff relationship :)rnrnI'll make it all work, it'll be right!!
Date: 10/06/08 06:25 pm Title: 0011
Ha! Ha! That was funny. Poor Tom. He's gonna have to teach Bila to not jump into the shower with him. Update soon, please
Author's Response: :)rnrnAlready posted, just waiting for validation :)
Date: 10/06/08 05:56 pm Title: 0010
That's freaking awesome!!!
Date: 10/04/08 09:51 am Title: 0011
HAHA lol me likes!! can't wait for the next bit XD
Author's Response: Skank
Date: 10/04/08 08:35 am Title: 0011
Damnit, you made me lose the game D: I love robot!Bill and how he calls Tom "Daddy". You should bring that back XD
Author's Response: *giggles*rnsoreh!!!!rnrnWell, I would, but people complained cause it was too incesty ^0)rnand on this site, that's wierd???
Date: 10/04/08 07:15 am Title: 0011
I'm sure the things(positions:D) Bill learnt from magazines will be useful in later chapters! There are no words to express how much I love this! I will add this to my favourites:)
Author's Response: :D I'm sure they will ;)rnrnAnd thank you!!!! rnSqueeeee ^-^
Date: 10/04/08 04:59 am Title: 0011
Fuck you, the game is balls!
*pouts*
Bill is fucking cute, and fluffy, whether you like it or not.
More than cute actually, he's bloody adorable.
You're so going fluffy.
For some strange, strange fucked up reason, I don't want them to have sex, like, at all.
Well, I do, I always do, but Bill just seems to...I don't know what I should say there, pure sounds too gay, young is just fucking stupid and so are the other words that could go there.
You better continue this, I mean seriously, this better not be like your other things, WHICH YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
Author's Response: Teehee, don't worry kiddo, I'm going to have their relationship evolve so they can have sex… somehow.rnPishhh, I has ideas.rnrnFluff… I hate you.rnrnI'm gonna continue, I promise, I like this :)rnI'm gonna write some now and if I get time to, I'm adding to we're fucking :)
Date: 10/04/08 01:49 am Title: 0011
hahahaha that last part is hilarious!
aww this is cute!
i love it!
Author's Response: ^-^rnrnThanksies :)rnrn*gives cookie*
Date: 10/04/08 12:14 am Title: 0011
you did this on your cell?! I'm super impressed.
Loved this chapter. Bill's so funny. Great images of him mimicking the porn mags. And then getting into the shower w/ Tom. WOW!!! What's Tom gonna do about that? Especially considering he was jacking off.
Should Bill be in the shower? If he's a robot... isn't that bad? But then on the other hand he seems to have a pretty effective skin. If he's warm.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Well, I wrote it on my laptop, but uploaded it on my phone.rnrnYou see, I don't have the internet at home… so… y'know :)rnrnYeah, I'll explain about the water next chapter :)rnrnAnd I'm typing away now :)
Date: 10/03/08 11:08 pm Title: 0011
Robot Bill. Hm.
Author's Response: *plays with lip ring nervously*rnrnGood or bad ^o)
Date: 10/03/08 09:14 pm Title: 0011
OMG,it's so good!i love it,update soon!
Author's Response: Swueeeee!rnthanks :Drnrn*gives cookie*
Date: 10/03/08 07:58 pm Title: 0011
oh~~ spazzy Bill~~ i wonder what tom is going to say about Bill interrupting him XDD haah oh~~ i can't wait for more~~ :333
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait :Prnrn*cookies giving*
Date: 10/03/08 07:53 pm Title: 0011
hehe.... d:)
Author's Response: Lol, that emoticon looks like tom
Date: 10/03/08 07:44 pm Title: 0011
What game? I'm lost, I'm also ill and sleepy so I'm sorry this isn't a very good review but it's meaningful all the same.
Author's Response: The game, basically, when you remeber the game, you lose it :)rnrnTeehee, its fine. Get better soon!rn*gives get well cookies*
Date: 10/03/08 07:37 pm Title: 0011
haha.
wow. funny so far, u should definately write more!
Author's Response: Cheers :) I've never done funny before…rnrnO well, I'm writing more right now…rnWell, I would be, but I'm busy winding up abc ^_-
Date: 10/03/08 07:01 pm Title: 0011
I like it! Bill is kind of more perfect than humanly possible. ;) I hope you post again soon!
Author's Response: Awhh, he is anyway :)