Date: 10/03/08 11:28 am Title: 0010
I like robot bill good idea :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I like robo bikl too :p
Date: 10/03/08 10:55 am Title: 0010
I love this chapter:D Bill is so cute!
Date: 10/03/08 08:30 am Title: 0010
so sweet.... Daddy, huh?
and the assistant is mean...
Date: 10/03/08 06:24 am Title: 0010
AWWWW! Bill's so sweet, I just wanna hug him! Oh, and I liked how you described Bill's reaction to Sofia like the emoticon face. LOL. Nais. ;P Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 10/02/08 09:11 pm Title: 0010
aww... Bill is adorable~~ :33 Bill's childlike behavior is adorable~~ :DD *hugs him* LOL!! do i sense an Oedipus complex?? XDDD lol..jk~~ oh!! i can't wait for more~~ :DDD *gives cookies*
Date: 10/02/08 07:12 pm Title: 0001
I know I'm only on chapter one, but this is a really good fic
Date: 10/02/08 06:33 pm Title: 0010
Yay! ^^ So cute! I love Bila calling Tom 'Daddy'! So cute!! X3 Also, I was wondering if Bila is already showing affection of THAT kind toward Tom? It would seem so when he asked if he wasn't going to be touched. If that made no sense I'm sorry, some people read reviews first so I'm trying not to spoil it :P I can't wait for the next chapter!! ^^v
Date: 10/02/08 06:31 pm Title: 0010
OMG!! Bill's so cute! Tom got a nasty shock though. I guess he's more like Tom than was intended. I want him to stop this daddy stuff though. It takes out the potential fun they could (and hopefully will) have.
LOVE IT!
Date: 10/02/08 06:24 pm Title: 0010
I can haz cheezburger?
no but you can has review.
I love your story, I know I've laready said this but it's true and I love that you haven't made Bila more complex as it seems logical that intelligent programing would work from a childs level and let them learn rather than trying to program adults.
Date: 10/02/08 06:17 pm Title: 0010
i think bill looks prettier with green eyes if thats even possible XD thank you for the quick update!!!
Date: 10/02/08 05:22 pm Title: 0010
*sings**points* Sian likes fluff, which old fluff? The fluffy fluff.
I proped awed at this, I think I'm starting to rub off on you.
Persnaly, I think that's a good thing, the world can use more fluff.
I don't know if I want Bila and Tom to get together, not if he insists on calling him daddy. That's a little too weird, since it's not in the bedroom, and it's not non-con/rap.
You're just a sick girl
I don't like Sophia, she's a rate dirty slag. Just because she was mean to Bila.
You better keep updating, it will be good. IF there aren't ten month breaks between chapters.
Oh, one more thing, 'the ¬_¬ emoticon' and 'Basement 3' are big no-no's to me.
Author's Response: With a name like Sofia, no one likes her :PrnrnDon't worry, he'll stop with the daddy thing soon, its just a bad habbit of mine.rnrnI swear I'll keep updating. And its not fluffy!!! Is it?rnShitter x__x lolrnrnSo, it should be 'basement three' and I like the emoticon thing, it was meana show a level of computerness.rnLemme lone!! I'm gonna prod you :PrnrnLolrnrn*gives cookie*
Date: 10/02/08 12:14 pm Title: 0001
:D can't wait for the next chapter, it's a really great idea.
Author's Response: Ew, yer skank =__=rnrnLol!rnrnIly really :)rnrnI need to find the rest of my zimmer dvd for you……rnBad sian *hits self*rnrnHit me at school to continue thsi
Date: 10/02/08 11:54 am Title: 0001
This seems interesting! I love this original story idea! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: n_n
Date: 10/02/08 06:51 am Title: 0001
I love it already! It's a very interesting idea! Bill as a robot... I can totally imagine. ;P Ooh, and nice touch with the B.I.L.A thing. Hehe. Can't wait to see where you'll take this! Please continue! :D
Author's Response: :)rnI can't wait to see where I'm taking it!rnGod, I plan badly...rnrn*iz continuinh right now :)*
Date: 10/02/08 05:19 am Title: 0001
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Lobes it already.
Author's Response: n_n
Date: 10/01/08 10:34 pm Title: 0001
Really interesting beginning! I totally can't wait for more! the idea of Tom being totally brilliant and creating Bill (based off of himself infering Bill would be brillinat too) is great! I hope they don't hurt Bill, if sound bothers him I'd imagine other things would too.
Update soon.
Author's Response: It was designed more to be the fact it the alarm was annoying, but your review gave me a few ideas :) thanksies :)rnrn*gives cookie*
Date: 10/01/08 09:47 pm Title: 0001
ooooh!! i want more~~ :DDD
Author's Response: Working on it :)
Date: 10/01/08 09:39 pm Title: 0001
Shit, how intense. I live for these kinds of fics.
Author's Response: :DrnThanksies!!!!rnYou can haz cooki?rn*gives cookie*
Date: 10/01/08 08:07 pm Title: 0001
Ahhh, I want more. Great start and it seems like it's going to be a very interesting read. Looking forward to part 2! :D
Author's Response: I want more too!!! Lol, I'm half way through chapter 2 now :)
Date: 10/01/08 06:24 pm Title: 0001
DANGGIT! I so hope you get the next chapter out soon! This is REALLY REALLY good! I'm so upset that it ended right there! I'm so hooked! ^^v
Author's Response: SqueeernYour review mademe happy :)