Date: 04/30/10 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't often disagree with other reviewers, but I'm going to disagree with asdjkh. I think you did a wonderful job. I don't thik that researching any more would make it better. I think it was stunning as is and I really enjoyed it. I did. I thought the emotions were portrayed perfectly and just enough info was put in to make it effective. I think the effect would have been lost if you'd added more information on Bill's bulimia.
I really enjoyed this, especially since it had a sad ending, and I think it was gorgeous :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) It means a lot <3
Date: 09/30/09 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is intense, and I love it :D I mean, I don't want Bill to die, but lately I've been killing off my characters in my non-fanfic stories, so I don't mind so much...this is a very emotional and touching story, good job :)
Date: 06/12/09 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I also thought this story ended too abruptly. Eating disorders are a very sensitive topic and I think it would have been better for you to do more research on the subject before trying to write another story involving an ED.
Author's Response: It was just an idea that came into my mind, and at the time I didn't know what I was talking about. I'm sorry if it offended you. I honestly didn't think that many people would read this anyway, and if I had known, I would have put forth a little more effort. I will probably rewrite this soon, seeing as my knowledge of the topic has expanded, and I realize now that it sounds a bit insensitive, and I apologize. But I do thank you for the review, and again apologize for the offense.
Date: 12/04/08 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooooh wait he died
Author's Response: Yeah, he did :(
Date: 10/02/08 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes, that means it's good ;) rushed like you said, but good nonetheless. But sad :(:(:(
Date: 10/01/08 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
:O geez... :(
Author's Response: ...I hope that means it's good...? :/
Date: 10/01/08 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1
it was good, a little rushed, but the plot was very good. It was well written and the emotions were amazing. It was just a little rushed. This would have been better, I think, as a long story, but that's just me. Anyway, awesome job!
Author's Response: Yeah, it was just a quick idea that came to me. I'm finding ways to improve it, though. Thanks so much :D