Date: 06/17/09 02:22 am Title: Goodbye? Already?
no wishful thinking...... ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *screams in pain and envy*
Date: 06/17/09 02:20 am Title: Lucky Crowd
*shaky breath* no wishful thinking, no wishful thinking, no wishful thinking...
Date: 06/17/09 02:14 am Title: Unexpected
*sob* wishful thinking shall be the end of me!!
Date: 04/21/09 11:16 pm Title: Das Ende
lol. it was funny. i liked it
adens kinda a bitch tho.
just sayin
Author's Response: looool that's coz I AM kindof a bitch. teehee ;D but thanks.
Author's Response: looool that's coz I AM kindof a bitch. teehee ;D but thanks.
Date: 03/16/09 10:06 am Title: A Ticket In
I really should but I just can't leave my lovely computers side... *choke* *remembers to breath*
Oh and I was joking about the porn thing btw... XD I'm not that kind of person and I woldn't risk the computer viruses. Nasty stuffs, lol.
Author's Response: hahaha then just remember to bring a paper bag with you or something. xDD yes i'm sure u were...sort of...;D
Date: 03/12/09 06:29 pm Title: A Ticket In
I'll make a guess here and say that a monitor face is when you're so focused on the computer that it looks like you're possessed or something...like a Zombie...
I know that sometimes I'm so into something on the computer (not porn btw ;D) I've stopped breathing once or twice. That's bleeding scary! XD
Author's Response: lol well yeah that's a possibility. o daaamn. now i'm gonna take a guess here and say that that's not too healthy for ya! haha. i suggest that wen u sense ur not breathing, step away from the computer. o and about the porn thing, don't worry, i'll keep ur secret ;D
Date: 03/11/09 02:28 pm Title: A Ticket In
Wow, you're on a role!
I must agree with you on the drug thing, I'm addicted to this site. I get withdrawal whenever i'm not on here...lol
You're welcome btw ;)
Author's Response: ditto!!! lol my parents have called me on that, too. my dad was like 'u've got a computer addiction. everytime i see u uve got ur monitor face on.' i just wish he'd explain wat a 'monitor face' is...hmmm...x]
Date: 03/10/09 04:23 pm Title: A Ticket In
I know I heard that! That's probably why I'm still skinny even though I eat crap all the time, I'm constantly giggling, I'm not kidding. XD
Aww, you're welcome then! I still need to write my first fic (I'm trying but it's sooo hard to get them in character!), but just don't ask me what it's about, I doubt you'd like it. Just think 28 days later and lets leave it at that shall we... o.o
I'm morbid...lol
So ya, I'm reading Anything you can do over again, because now it makes more sense! And your fics always make me laugh the most. I should be thanking you! You're so good at this writing stuff! ;D
Author's Response: haha well there ya go! screw the gym, just laugh. hmm...i may just make that my slogan ;] well, i'm sure u'll get it eventually. it's so much fun once u do. it's sooo amazing when u see that other ppl rd ur stuff. i can't even explain it. it's like...addicting. haha, Tokio Hotel Fiction, my anti-drug. there's another slogan! oooooo yay! i'm glad u appreciate my funnynessness (i made that up). hurray i feel loved!! -does happy dance-
Date: 03/08/09 01:53 pm Title: Das Ende
Oh my god, this is just as good as 'Anything you can do'! Maybe even bettar... ;D Very close contest.
I can't believe I didn't read this first, I can't stop giggling, I'm getting on my sisters nerves now thank you very much!
Oh god, I loved Tom in this, I cracked up every single time he spoke, Aden was so mean to him! Ya, this is definitely my new favorite fic. ^.^
*still laughing*
Author's Response: awww thanks! that actually means a lot coz this was my first fanfiction i ever wrote x] haha i'm glad i helped u annoy ur sister--that's always fun. haha yeah it was definitely fun to write about Tom and Aden bickering. i miss writing it. xDD thanks for the love!!! and never stop laughing, it's good for the soul (and it apparently helps u lose weight! =O)
Date: 02/20/09 09:23 pm Title: A Ticket In
Very Welcome! :]]]
Date: 02/19/09 11:31 pm Title: Das Ende
Yo this is by far the best fic i've read!Beyond Uhh-Mazing! Love It! GREAT JOB!
Author's Response: ty ty ty x]]]
Date: 01/25/09 11:05 pm Title: Das Ende
It took me my entire Saturday and Sunday to fordge the time in order to read this fanfiction -- and none of it, I repeat, NONE OF IT was a waste of time! I'll admit, the start was a bit far-fetched and a bit quick in my opinion, but it didn't matter in the end. I love your character; she's not a Mary-Sue, which I have seen a couple on here, and her own attitude makes me laugh. There were times where I was laughing so hard that my parents thought something was wrong with me!
Not only that, but you used "couldn't care less", which makes you my hero...ine? Most people get that wrong and say "could care less" which goes against what they're trying to say. Oh, one note, in earlier chapters you said that Aden had wavy hair and then towards the end changed it to straight. I doubt anyone but me noticed that...
But it was a really good fic that made me laugh moreso than any other fic that I read. Not only that, but it was long, so it didn't give that sudden dropped feeling. Although I didn't quite like some of the ending chapters, I enjoyed most of your story. Tom and Georg are completely believable, I can so see them acting like that. Bill and Gustav were mostly believable, but there were times where I couldn't picture him doing or saying something. Nothing big, though.
Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fiction and I hope that you enjoy writing more. I can only imagine how much effort you placed in this 40-chapter fic.
Author's Response: thank u soooo much!rnthis was my first fanfic ever, so it was sort of a trial thing for me. i enjoyed writing it tho, that's for sure.rno and yes i kno that i changed the type of hair that she has. sadly, though, i noticed that much too late V.Vrnwell, nothing i can do about it now.rni'm glad u liked it =] it definitely was the longest story i've ever written, but it was worth it for me to see that i could actually finish something like that. haha.rnthanks for the awesome review!!
Date: 11/27/08 12:46 am Title: Das Ende
PENIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HA!
you crack me up!
Author's Response: i'm just too damn funny, huh? lol. jk. thanks for rding my story ;D
Date: 11/06/08 12:56 pm Title: A Ticket In
Can I please - please - pretty please put your story up on my forum?? http://zimmer-483.proboards83.com ?
I'd be very greatful !!!
Author's Response: surely! =]
Date: 11/03/08 04:20 pm Title: Das Ende
U really do have to put humor in the end don't u? xD
Author's Response: why yes i do lol u kno me, it wouldn't be me if there wasn't humor xDD
Date: 11/02/08 01:55 pm Title: News Alert
"It’s too corny, like the end of a Full-House episode."
lol actually that's a simile - you used the word 'like'
=P
Author's Response: lol i realized that only after i already posted the chapter. i hate when that happens to me!! o wells, we'll all just have to live with it. xD
Date: 10/29/08 04:32 pm Title: A Ticket In
i also love ' good morning sunshine, the earth says hello ! ' .. i srsly can't stop laughing xD '
anyway, keep writing ff's like this, i love you the way you write ^^
Author's Response: o lol that one gave me the chills. he reminded me A BIT too much of michael jackson. xDDrnaww thank u! i've been wondering if my writing sucked lately, and this is just the ego-boost i needed. lol jk.
Date: 10/29/08 04:27 pm Title: Das Ende
GREAT STORY !!
Author's Response: thank ya =]]
Date: 10/29/08 03:09 pm Title: Auf Wiedersehen
i love that you qoute johnny depp " children, that is called ‘cannibalism’ which is frowned upon in most societies " xD haha
Author's Response: lol yup definitely one of my fav quotes ever.
Date: 10/26/08 02:05 am Title: Das Ende
noo i want mroe bill and A
Author's Response: i'm thinking of doing a one-shot of them in the future, but that might take me a while coz i'm working on other things. sowwy =[