Date: 02/09/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
These chapters are getting better as they go along, good job.
Author's Response: Hehehe. Thanks! ;D
Date: 02/08/09 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is the first review I've left as this the first time I've read either of your stories.
And that sucks for me 'cause i was missing amazing characters and a very amazing, origanal plot. You're very very very good at writing and your characters are beautifully defined.
I didn't see any errors btw.
-sacred
Author's Response: That made me squeak. Lol. Thank you so much for reviewing. :D And I'm happy you like it. :) -melts- I love great reviews. :D
Date: 01/21/09 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 8
haha i love the ending of this chapter. its so cute....loved this whole chapter, cant wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. (:
Date: 01/21/09 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
*grins* that was cute. Yay. And Simone sucks lol. Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Yes she does. Thanks. (:
Date: 01/20/09 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
I loved supernatural and this story to I have been reading since matchmaker. I hope gustav becomes friends with bill. I like the last line where bill said he knows how to clear a table. and tom saying he's hot that's why girls can't leave him alone was cute. it was funny towards the end. I like that you remember to update this story. love this sequel.
Author's Response: Awww! Thanks. :) I worked hard on Supernatural. (: I'm so happy you like them both! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/20/09 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
I loved it :D Bill is the perfect table clearer xD Lolz xD I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Lolz. Yes he is. :) Though I wouldn't talk away, I'd stay and watch! :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/20/09 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
Psssht, if I saw two boys as fit as them kissing I wouldn't flee, I'd stay and stare, then druel some and probably squee a hell of a lot.
I didn't like the that the whole thing seemed to have an aura of foreboding about it. The chapter itself was amazing, but little sentences and that I was like hmmmm. Ohh shit. Please no.
I loved Tom in this, his character is so mint.
Tom's ‘come here and I’ll fix everything’ look made me smile aww and squee so much.
It was too cute.
I don't necessarily think that Simone's getting like Mallory, but she's getting bad, and I proper don't want her to. The train shouldn't even go near Simone, never mind run her over, but if she gets worse I'm afraid you'll be getting pestered by me to kill her.
Or hurt her.
I like that Colin's back, I want Tom to attack him, make his life hell for what he did to Bill.
There's nothing that makes me swoon more than Tom defending Bill's honour. I love it.
And then Tom scoops Bill into his arms and walks off into the sunset.
Oh, the fact that Mallory got grounded, proper made me lol, I loved it.
But trains can't come into houses, not when little old Norma is there.
I really do love her, she's proper mint!
Even thought she wasn't in this chapter, I love that when she's mentioned by Tom it's always done with love and respect.
So cute.
*sigh* Shit review again, sorry.
Author's Response: I hate when you say that. This isn't a shit review! It's awesome. :) And I love hearing from you! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means a lot. ♥ And this is a shit response. Lolz.
Date: 01/20/09 09:48 am Title: Chapter 8
AWWWW! *melts* how cute!
Author's Response: :) Thanks!
Date: 01/20/09 08:59 am Title: Chapter 8
Haha, well I'm glad you decided to update =]
And so enters GUSTI! :) I'm trying to figure out if that's a good or bad thing, ahaha. Colin...is a jerk.
Hope you can update again, soon!
Author's Response: Lolz. You'll find out. :) Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 01/20/09 02:09 am Title: Chapter 8
If Bill's mom becomes anything like Mallory, I will be forced to push her in front of a moving train, haha.
:)
Author's Response: Lolz. Don't worry, Ivy. Things will end up the opposite of whatever you're thinking. :) Thanks for reviewing> :)
Date: 01/20/09 01:39 am Title: Chapter 8
I really enjoyed this chapter. I was so happy to see an update on the story.
Author's Response: :) I wanted to please my amazing reviewers. :) Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 01/16/09 03:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Gosh I love this story, I'm glad Bill is now showing Tom affection at school. I hope Tom beats Colin's ass.
Author's Response: Lolz. He might just have to. You never know. :) Thanks for reviewing. ;D
Date: 01/16/09 02:05 am Title: Chapter 2
They are just too cute together and I can't believe Mallory would say such thing to her own son.
Author's Response: Hehehe. I know, aren't they? (; She did 'cause I said so. xDxDxD Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/05/09 04:24 am Title: Chapter 7
More please?
Author's Response: It's coming soon. ;D Thanks for reviewing. :]
Date: 01/04/09 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
*smiles* Yay. Favorite line...“Talk to me at school, kiss me, hold my hand and let me slap your ass,” Tom grinned." That made me happy and squeal. Update soon doll!! Amazing!
Author's Response: Tom likes Bill's butt. And not just because that's where sex would take place. BILL JUST HAS A CUTE BUTT! xDD I'm so happy you liked it. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/04/09 11:10 am Title: Chapter 7
I love it :D I have to say sorry for such a late review...I was busy too :( No internet for the whole freaking holidays! *glare at parents* I hope you continue soon though ^^ And thank god that Bill isn't going to be with Colin, Greg or Steve :)
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Hehehe. :) It's okay. I'm just happy to see you liked the chappie. :) Good holiday gift from tokiobillhotel, aye? xD Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/02/09 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
lmfao. that sounds like lee and i. xD
i'm lovinggg this story. ;D
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Author's Response: Hahaha. You and Lee are a lot like this story. In some ways. Other than fucking like rabbits. Thanks for reviewing. ;D
Date: 01/02/09 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good start out chapter. ;D
I saw I hadn't reviewed before and I felt bad. ):
So there! :D
Author's Response: Awww. :) Well thanks! :D
Date: 01/02/09 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
Gahh, I thought they were going to break up! ):
I was so freaking scareddddd.
Update really soon! :D
Author's Response: Lmfao. Nope, not breaking up. ;D Thanks for reviewing! ;D
Date: 12/31/08 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
when will there be more ?(A) :D:D:D
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now. (; It's January 1st, xD Thanks for reviewing.