Date: 06/28/09 11:57 am Title: Chapter 13
OOK SO PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON I'M GOING TO DIE IN A VERY UNHEALTHY WAY IF UDON'T UPDATE love the story xx keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Update coming soon. ;)
Date: 06/26/09 12:18 am Title: Chapter 13
I wasn't expecting Collin... what I did expect was him thrown in front of a train.
:D
I love Bill for standing up to him. Yay! And I always love some Bill and Tom fluff, haha.
Author's Response: Fluff is pretty nice, huh? (:
Date: 06/25/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awwwww.
I shit myself when I read my name. I wasn't expecting it and I was like wtf. But ehh, she's gonna be forgiven soon, right?
Tbh, if she wasn't called charlotte, I'd be like, 'burn her!!!!'
Nooooo, it's gotta be longer than 9 chapters, it's too good and the boys are too cute for it to end.
You're including the holiday, or them running away or however you're gonna wirte it, aren't you? Please, and when they're there they fuck like rabbits, on the hardwood floor.
Seriously, Tom needs to beat the shit out of Colin an his cronies. Please! I'm begging you. It'd turn me to much, just think of how adorable it would be, Tom fighting for Bill.
Loved the chapter, as usual as well as the fast update.
Author's Response: Actually, I'm not sure she'll be forgiven. :P Yes, nine more. I am including the holiday. I have to! xD Hahaa. Maybe. I don't know though because that'd be very OOC for Tomi. Thanks for reviewing. ;)
Date: 06/25/09 09:55 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved it!! :D I hope you continue soon!! *searches cold shower, it's so freaking HOT here ¬¬* *not because the guys though xD* *...maybe a little...*
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: The chapters are gonna keep getting hotter too! Mwahahaha. xD Thanks for reviewing. ;)
Date: 06/25/09 06:31 am Title: Chapter 13
Awwwww! That was soooooooooooo amazingly sweet and fluffy! AWWW!
Author's Response: Hahaa. Thanks. xD
Date: 06/24/09 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
I loved it!!! :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi!
Author's Response: I am! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/24/09 04:39 am Title: Chapter 12
did tom and chantelle make out in his car there whores lol good story
Author's Response: hahha. yes. xD thanks for reviewing. ;)
Date: 06/23/09 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
fucking chantelle.
>:O
she looks like a slut.
eh, i sound like a hater, but i've never liked her, and her music sucks.
can't wait for the next chapter.
:D
Author's Response: Awww! I don't know. She's got good taste in boys... (; Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/23/09 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Sex tonight yes?
God it feels like forever since this has been updated, or is that just me?
I wont be able to review properly, since my laptop's on the shop, and will be until god knows when, so this will have to do.
I loved how they were getting hot an heavy. They're so cute together. I can't wait until they finally do it, it's gonna be amazing.
Oh, and I love that you've not written Tom with cornrows, the dreads should stay *nods*.
Seriously, I awwed so damn much throughtout this chapter. It was beyond adorable.
When you update next I'll leave a proper review if the laptop's back.
Author's Response: It has been foever. :P Haha. No sex tonight but there will be sex by the end of the story. xD I hope you get your computer back soon! ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/23/09 08:59 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh my, you updated! Holy shit. I just had to collect myself a little, lol. It was amazing, I love how you always show the shy side of Bill, even though their moving a little bit further. I’m still so shocked that you updated, but like I said – still amazing.
Author's Response: Yes! ^_^ You inspired the new chapter too! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/23/09 04:37 am Title: Chapter 12
Awww i feel all pink and fluffy! Awwww that was sooo sweet!
Author's Response: This review made writing it worth it. ;) Hhahahaha. Thanks for reviewing <3
Date: 06/22/09 05:27 am Title: Chapter 11
Ahh, even though you said your muse was gone. I really hope the new album will help you find her again. This story is way too beautiful to finish, and I love the characters, Norma, is so sweet and loving. And as you said, she is inspired by your aunt, and I have always felt that the readers can relate to real people, because they’re real.
So I hope that your muse will return, because I feel this story is to amazing to forget. It really should get some more attention.
Author's Response: I think I just saw my muse pocking her little head out! I might, MIGHT be able to do a short chapter! Omg! I'm going to go write NOW! :D:D:D:D THANKS SO MUCH!
Date: 06/06/09 10:03 am Title: Chapter 11
I loved all the chapters including the one I read way too late because school is a bitch that won't let me go...I really did love them :D I hope you continue soon!! (and forgive me for being too late?)
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: forgiven! i'm happy to see that you came back to read it after so long. ;)
Date: 05/03/09 10:57 am Title: Chapter 11
Those boys are far too cute (:
Author's Response: xD
Date: 04/22/09 02:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Guuuuh, finally.
They needed to get back together.
But to be honest, they needed to get back together two seconds after Bill ended it.
Once again, fucking Charlotte.
When's she gonna be nice again?
I'm still pissed at Bill for not listening to Bill.
And Mallory, that fucking train needs to come and flatten her.
How can she hit Tom, fair enough he hit her, but I love Tom in this, and tbh, he can do no wrong.
And the stupid cow shouldn't have wanted Tom to go with the girl.
But then again, even if that did happen, Tom shouldn't have blamed Bill.
The bloody idiot.
And before I finish, awww at him not having laughed in days.
Author's Response: :D thankssssss.
Date: 04/21/09 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
awww chessy and sweet lol
yess there back together :D
Author's Response: (; i couldn't keep 'em apart!
Date: 04/21/09 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww ♥ love this story!
Author's Response: oh good ^_^
Date: 04/21/09 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
GOD HOW SWEET!!!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 04/16/09 01:32 am Title: Chapter 10
blah
im qoinq to shot someone here -_-'
but i loved the ending :D
Author's Response: xDDD! thanksss
Date: 04/03/09 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
They... broke up...
What... why...
When are they getting back together?
Author's Response: Awww. They'll be together someday ^_^