Date: 12/11/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ok so far this story is really good BUT you need to chill out on the pet names,you skip the story around to much (you make something happen then all of a sudden its a week later ETC.) and you need to get your dates stright! at first you said they were together for 4 months THEN you said a year THEN you said a month and a half THEN you went back to 4 months! get it right! you cant do that.it makes the story kinda bad!
Author's Response: If you look you'll notice this story was started in '08 and finished in '09. Not only did I not want to even write it (I only did because I was asked) but it was continued from the first story I ever wrote and finished here. I realize that not everything flowed but that's simply because when it takes an author a year to finish a story and it isn't written all in once sitting, some minor or major details are forgotten along the way.
Date: 07/07/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
I have read this story and first part as well during today and I have to say, it was really great.
I liked the way the guys were acting and how they were to each other. I like their characters, really.
And I'm really glad it ended how it ended. They were put a lot of but I'm happy they managed to go through all of it. They deserve to be happy and to be honest I have to say I'm little bit sad it's over fot this story. I liked it a lot!!
Date: 03/07/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
ahh.. cool.. Sick chapter (sick is good)
Date: 03/07/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
I do like this story... It's really good and It flows nicely..
Date: 03/07/10 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha.. Great start..
Date: 01/02/10 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
Aww that was cute... but your end notes kinda just put a downer on it *has images of them break up in college* xO
Great story! A lot of typing errors lol but great story xD
Author's Response: Thanks. n_n
Date: 01/02/10 09:34 am Title: Chapter 2
O.O wow is Mallory bi-polar or something?? Or pregnant? or has acute paranoia >.>
Tomi and Billa are sooooo cute together,, but I sense Colin is about to some and ruin it all ¬.¬
Author's Response: Extremely bi-polar. Lol.
Date: 12/28/09 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Haha, who wants sex when you have hot kisses!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 12/24/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
[What was he supposed to say? ‘I’m thinking about seeing your dick, Bill,’]
Lol, great thought!!! :DD
Author's Response: I thought so too. ;)
Date: 11/14/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
is that ture about wonderfull match or did you just make it up? that would be so fucking halarious!!! well not for those poeple that got matched 2 criminals...that would suck :)
story was amazing loved it!
Author's Response: Lol. No WM is a completely made up website. n_n
Date: 09/13/09 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
I'm not dead!! I'm finally able to get back into reading all my favorite stories after more than a month. I've had to go back and read everything basically from the beginning, haha. I'm so sad to see this story and this series come to an end, but it was so good!
:)
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back and reviewing. ;) Annnnddddd, don't be so sad just yet. ;)
Date: 08/03/09 05:43 am Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
I loved it!! I'm sure gonna miss this :) And please do notify me when you ever write that one-shot ;P I'll look anyway, but whatever xD ;)
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I'll let you know ;) thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 07/19/09 04:42 am Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
*claps* Amazing ending hunny! Wonderful Match was my first story on the site and the series was outstanding. I'm sad to see it end, but it ended beautifully.
Author's Response: Thanks ^__^ And I'm honored to know WM was the first story you read heere. :):):)
Date: 07/14/09 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
-sniffle-
I see them living happily ever after. =D
I'm a sucker for a sappy endings.
This story has been a joy to read. Maybe there will be a oneshot someday -shrugging- but I love the ending in my mind. Thank you =)
Author's Response: They do, of course. ^__^ Maybe a oneshot or something. xD Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 07/14/09 09:10 am Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
ah, I can't believe this is done. A couple of months ago I thought I would never see that little 'yes' on the description. This has been an amazing journey, and I’m so proud to have followed you through it.
I will just say one thing; I’ve seen you grow through this, even though I don’t know you that well, we readers can still feel it :) Hope you just continue to write in that inhuman speed, or in another way; don’t get a life. Love it, adore it.
Author's Response: That second part made me feel awesome. :) Thanks so much for reviewing, it means a lot.
Date: 07/14/09 02:02 am Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
awww....I love it.
Author's Response: I'm glad. :D
Date: 07/14/09 01:43 am Title: Chapter 15 - Epilogue
God! This was so amazing and I loved it so so much! In my mind, they grow up and get married. I don't like breaking up when they are so perfect together! Thank you so much for writing both this and Wonderful Match!
Author's Response: In my mind they get married too. :) Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 07/12/09 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 14
Bleh, I imagine enough :P I vote for a sequel xD That can take place years after this :P I loved it!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I don't want to do another sequel. I am honestly sick of these characters. Thanks for reviewing though. :)
Date: 07/12/09 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
Awww that was soooo sweet! I loved it so much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Date: 07/11/09 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 14
It can always continue in a sequel too.
Awww, they're so frikken sweet together!
I'm well jealous.
And dammit, they need to have sex, they're too cute not to.
It'd be the most amazing, loving thing ever.
Who gives a crap about OOC?
I'm sure none of us would.
And daamn, this has changed from what you said ages ago, you promised sex and people liking Charlotte.
Fuck the Charlotte thing, just the sex, pleeeeease.
It's lovely that they're not shy with one another anymore, it's like heart-swelling stuff.
I don't want you to write the next chapter, that means this coming to an end...
Author's Response: I don't want to do another sequel. I am honestly sick of these characters. :P No sex. :P Sorry! Thanks for reviewing.