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Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

i love bill... but u made colin come back and tom will get so frustated!

Author's Response: Hahahah! Yes he will. (: And that's what I want. (: Thanks for reviewing. :D:D:D

Reviewer: KaulitzTwinsLover17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/19/08 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

*lips pooch* No Bill, don't let Colin ruin things for you and Tom! I loved this.

Author's Response: Bill's a dumb little boy sometimes. :/ Haha. Thanks for reviewing. (;

Reviewer: gurr730 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/08 01:15 am Title: Chapter 3

i really liked this chapter!! it was cute. i cant wait to read the next one!!

Author's Response: I'll try to update soon. :) Thanks for reviewing. :D:D

Reviewer: pumaqueen64 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

OMG great chapter!!

Author's Response: Danke! :D:D:D

Reviewer: mestup1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

i'm not pissed :) i'm happy :) i love your story... and good luck with the awards :D i'll have to go and vote then ;)

Author's Response: That's so sweet. :) Thank you so much! Time two! :D ♥

Reviewer: rach-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love this chapter and can't wait until there is more.

Author's Response: (: I'll have more as soon as I can. :D:D:D Thanks for reviewing. (:

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, gosh. *groans*

Bill is being....*strangles* He can't ignore Tom at school! Poor Tom won't know WHAT'S going on, and if Bill doesn't explain, I'm sure a few things shall get 'rocky.' Colin is an asshole. And Simone is a buttface! >=) She was s'posed to be hanging out with him! Not boning Gordon! XD Tom is absolutely adorable in this, and SO SWEET! But if I were him, I'd totally be asking questions. It's not fair to him. *shakes Bill*

ILoveThis! =] (In case you didn't know) Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Bill is being fucking stupid, that's what he's being. I feel terrible for Tom and I'M WRITING THIS! ughh. I make no sense. Lmfao. She shouldn't have fucked Gordon but when I was in study hall I got the idea and HADDD to use it. (: lmfao. I'm glad you love this! ;D That makes me happy. I'll have more as soon as I can. (: thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: abc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I know, reviewing twice, there's nothing I hate more, both doing it and getting it, but, do you want me to beta for you?

Author's Response: I would love you ten times more if you would. (: Thank you so much, Charlotte. ♥

Reviewer: abc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 3

Before I forget, I don't mean this in any way bad at all, but there were quite a few mistakes in that, and some sentences didn't make sense. I just thought that I should point that out.


Moving on, I don't like Bill being like this! *pouts*whines*stamps foot*
I don't want anything to happen to their relationship.
They're not meant to have a rocky one, but smooth sailing, all the way up until they get married, and then decades after that.

SEX! Whoot! At least they're thinking about it, which is a start.
Will there be any in this? I fucking well hope so.

Simone needs to get her life sorted out, I don't care if she's happy, well I do, but Bill should be her first priority. Not some guy she's only known how long.

Colin=Dirteh Slag. That's all that I have to say on that matter...until next chapter that is...if he's mentioned or in it. Once again, I fucking well hope not.

*Sigh* Tom's so fucking sweet! I love how you've wrote him, and sometimes Bill too, but atm, he's pissing me off to no end.

I really really do love this, I hope you know that, I can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: Abc, I know. I'm disappointed in myself for not being more careful. I wrote this chapter in a matter a few hours though and I wanted to thanks whoever that nominated me as soon as possible. I'm planning on finding a beta soon. :) I love that you're so pissed off at Bill. (: I'm trying to get everyone pissed at him, actually. Mwahahha. I want everyone to hate Bill. :D:D haha. Not really. I'm just trying to get across the point that not every relationship is perfect. Understand me? Simone needs to learn how to lock her door as well. I'm going to try and fix her as the story continues, how knows if I can fix her. Mallory wasn't in this one! :D:D:D Excitement right? Colin's back! :D:D:D but he won't be mentioned again for a while. Tom can't stay mad at his Billa. :D:D:D Hehehehe. I'm so glad you love it. (: And like always, I enjoy seeing that you liked the chapter. :D:D:D

Reviewer: inlovingmemory Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/08 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

'I-I love you.' So cute. :]
I almost died when I realized I HADN'T reviewed. I feel like a jerk now. Forgive me? I hope.
Can't wait until after the 27th. :]
Great chapter.

Author's Response: You've been forgiven. (: Thanks for reviewing. :]

Reviewer: mestup1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/08 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

the train was an awsome idea :D i can easily imagine her get hit by a train and me smiling on the side :)

Author's Response: I'd smile as long as I didn't get blood on me. (: Thanks for reviewing. (: [An update for those of you lurking in my reviews, new chapter to come AFTER I see our loved babies again on the 27th.]

Reviewer: Made-Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 2

<3<3<3 Why did I not see this come out sooner?

My gosh, I am on cloud nine! *dances a jig*



Author's Response: Yay! :D Lmfao. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: gurr730 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/08 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

aww this was a really cute chapter!! i love this story already. great start to a sequel. cant wait for the next chapter!! -)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: rach-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/08 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

This chapter made my day. More soon please.

Author's Response: I'm glad. :) Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: shylyte329 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/08 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

I swear! I will personally throw Mallory in front of a train if necessary... oh wait... I'll throw Colin in front of one too! I bet he's up to something. I can feeeeeeel it.
DD:

I hope Bill isn't really distancing himself and Tom is just being paranoid. I would have to cry if Bill was doing that.... like a monsoon of tears. It would be a really bad sight...
._.

And on a completely random note... I want to punch the girls sitting near me that are playing their music at an obnoxious level.
:[

Author's Response: They'll both be thrown. :) Of course he is. Why wouldn't he be?! Hahahaha. Just wait and see, love. :) Stupid girls and their rudeness. Thanks for reviewing. ♥

Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/08 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

yeap i enjoyed that thought... it was great imagine a train passing trough her!!! XD

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 2

Omg, will Bill have a steaming hot sex-dream? PLEASE? :D

xD

Author's Response: He was thinking naughty about Tom but really, who doesn't? Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: abcd1234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/08 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

AWWWWW

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: pumaqueen64 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/08 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

awww that was so cute and omg that bitch should really get hit by a train!!! lol

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: cobraaastyle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/08 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 2

Naww, that was so cute (:
I'm getting all attached to them. I hope nothing (too) bad happens to them.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)

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