Date: 11/10/08 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hehehe so cute!!! I love where this is going and simply can not WAIT for you to update more!!!XD
Author's Response: Aww! :D Thanks so very much! :D I love where I'm taking it too... ^_^
Date: 11/08/08 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
OH NO!
this remind me of the oc.
shes like julie cooper.a bitch.
:)
this is raelly pretty. and that colin character scared me.
Author's Response: Hahaha. Drama is amazing, huh? (: thanks so much for reviewing. oh, don't let Colin scare you. ^_^ he's only in the story to ruin everyone's lives.
Date: 11/02/08 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
the bitch is back... now be careful lol ...
Author's Response: Bill and Tom are gonna have to be. (; Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 11/02/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Fuck Mallory up. (:
That would make me so fucking happy. (:
She's an asshole anyways.
Why not mess with her head a little bit? (:
Author's Response: I'm gonna try my best! (: They are so going to. You'll ready about that in the next chapter too. (; Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 11/02/08 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh their so cute. (;
And messing with Mallory.. Jeeze.
I'm so glad you updated! (:
I'm actually happy right now! :D:D
Author's Response: The next chapter should make you happy as well. (: Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 11/02/08 08:03 am Title: Chapter 4
The bitch is back, huh? XD
It's a really good story, I love it. :D
Post more sooon.
Author's Response: Yes, she is! :D:D:D Thanks so much. (; I'll really try too. :] Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/02/08 03:20 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, Erika... whyyyyyy??? Why is Mallory backkkk???? I believe that I might cry because of this. Okay... well not really, but you know.
Tylenol seems like a very "Mallory" kind of way to end your life. She should have had to suffer more than that, haha. I will punch her... just like I will punch Colin in his dumb face.
If Mallory breaks them up, I swear I will jump into your story and kill her myself. Anywaaaay, I'm curious as to what Tom has got up his sleeve. I'm sure it's a pretty good plan... and lalala.
Excuse me while I go die from my mysterious illness.
DDD:
Thanks for updating. It was such a good chapter. I'm also glad that I had the ability to stay awake long enough to read this because I think I might be dying... which has nothing to do with your story.
Kthxbi.
Author's Response: Because I love drama. Drama is my best friend, I swear. Lmao. Don't cry! You'll really love me inna few chapters. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/02/08 01:13 am Title: Chapter 4
ohh godd.
im terrified of what mallory's going to do.
D:
DONT LET THEM BREAK UP!
DX
Author's Response: What if they do break up...? ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/02/08 12:33 am Title: Chapter 4
Amazing. Tom makes me smile and Bill's so bad. "Let's mess with her." lol.
Author's Response: That was pretty funny, aye? (; Thanks for reveiewing! :D
Date: 11/01/08 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
this was such a cute chapter...i loved it. please update soon!!!
Author's Response: I'll try my best! :D:D:D Thanks for reviewing. (:(:(:
Date: 11/01/08 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Every time I've logged on in like...the past week, I've looked for this to be updated.
I proper buzzed when I got the e-mail.
Mallory is a dirty slag.
Come on, they got the train back! She could have slipped and fallen when she was getting on, and the train could have pulled away, then poof! No more bitch.
I must say, I like how this continues from the previous chapter, but isn't day in day out, if the fic doesn't need that, then it fucking kills me.
The 'I love yous' I grinned so much each time they said it :D
And the kissing in front of everyone, orr it made my insides tingle.
:D:D
I'm still seeing dating website adverts, and each time I'm still like, 'eee Wonderful Match'
I think you should've had Tom walk out of the hospital and leave her there when she said that she was moving near them.
But the O.D and dumping made me well happy, more than happy!
I really, really liked how if Mallory tells Tom to do something then it's always done. Tom being nice to people (either really old and small, or really young and small) when he looks to big and menacing just makes me go ga-ga.
*Sigh* still love this.
Sorry if this review's shit and short, I feel like they're all getting like that now.
Author's Response: I love seeing your reviews. ♥ They all make me smile! :D Something will happen to Mallory, don't worry. (; I'm just not sure what yet... Thanks so much for reviewing! :D:D
Date: 11/01/08 11:15 am Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for The next chapter.
Author's Response: Wooh! :D Thanks for reviewing. (;
Date: 11/01/08 10:45 am Title: Chapter 4
Haha, God. Mallory is such a biatch xD
But I'm glad Bill and Tom got to mess with her head a bit. Serves her right. I don't want her trying to break up Bill and Tom, though. *sigh* Now they have Mallory AND that...other guy to worry about.
Damn.
Author's Response: Don't worry, Nia. (: Thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 11/01/08 07:09 am Title: Chapter 4
Hahaha! Evil Bill is coming out! xD
She's not going to be having a fun time if Bill is after her! xD
Author's Response: Absolutely! (; Bill can be such a bitch. These next few chapters will be fun. :D Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 11/01/08 03:58 am Title: Chapter 4
O-o
I hope their mother isn't even more of a bitch now.
Can't she just let them be?
Author's Response: Nopeeeeee. Her job is to efff everythingggg uppp! :D:D Thanks for reviewing.! (;
Date: 10/22/08 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can't believe you, tbh.
Bill can't just ignore his boyfriend at school...
That's happened to me...
I know how it feels...
Don't make Tom suffer from that...
It's cruel...
Author's Response: Awww. ): I'm so sorry! I hope it wasn't Lee Curtis. That'd be sad! Well, I'll see what I can do! :D Thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 10/22/08 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
WONDERFUL CHAPTER! (:
I LOVE YOU, TOKIOBILLHOTEL! :D
I don't like the word faggot either. ):
People use it against me a lot. :P
Anyways, I really love their relationship. (:
Author's Response: They are pretty great together huh? (; I love you too, johnnyboylovesleecurtis. (; That's a long penname! :P Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 10/22/08 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I haven't reviewed yet and I apologize.
I love their relationship! I wish my boyfriend was like Tom.
So sweet and caring. Awww! :D
Anyways, I love this story and it's totally my favorite. (;
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much jbllc. (; that makes me feel sweet. :D Thanks for reviewing. I hope you see your reviews a lot more. :D:D:D
Date: 10/22/08 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
WHAT IS BILL'S PROBLEM!?
I don't understand that boy anymore.
He promises himself to show his love for Tom at school then chickens out?!
Faggot! Faggot! Faggot!
Okay, that was uncalled for but I'm so upset with Bill. ):
Great chapter though.
Author's Response: Who knows? Bill thinks Colin will throw TOM in front of a train. That's his thinking. YOU'RE A FAGGOT TOO ILM! (; Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 10/21/08 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm just going to go ahead and kill Colin... then Bill won't have to worry about anything, haha. I had an awesome song about killing him, but I forgot most of it, haha. It rhymed and everything!!
:D
I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!! Now it's time to go catch up on the billion stories I haven't had time to read.
DD:
Author's Response: Kill him?! NOOOOOOO! I NEED HIM FOR MY EVIL STORY! ): hhaha. No killing Colin, I'm sorry. Thanks for reviewing! :D