Date: 11/27/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh My Fucking GOD!!!! In Tom's dream Bill pushed Mallory out in front of the train! I like!
Author's Response: Don't you wish that would really happen? (: Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 11/27/08 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
HAPPY BROWN CHICKEN DAY TO YOU TOO!!!
*Picked it up from my baby cousin who cant say thanksgiving lol*
Author's Response: HAPPY BROWN CHICKEN DAY! xDxDxD I wish I knew what you thought of the chapter. :P Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 11/27/08 02:12 am Title: Chapter 6
Ohhhh yay!!! *claps* I must agree with you on this chappie, it was really, goooood! =)
Author's Response: I felt good about it too. ^_^ I'm happy you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 11/27/08 12:17 am Title: Chapter 6
i loved this chapterr.
it was great.
:D
update soon.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you did. :) Thanks for reviewing. :D I should have a new chapter in a few days. (By the 5th of December or Dec. 8th at the latest.)
Date: 11/22/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
One mistake~
When Bill is getting his present you say that him and Tom are in the cafeteria (at their school I'm guessing), but then Tom collapses onto Norma's couch.
I don't think Norma moved into their school's cafeteria, sa maybe you're mising a scene seperation mark?
Besides that I'm interested and can't wait to know what happens next! :D
Author's Response: It was a separation mark. xD I had two spaces between the sections but I guess it was still confusing. :P I fixed it though. :) Thanks for reviewing. xD
Date: 11/19/08 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
please throw her in front of the train
Author's Response: Ahahahaa. I'll see what I can do. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing. xD
Date: 11/19/08 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
So making out with a boy is so hot. Considering I do it all the time. Haha. Too personal? Sorry if it is. (; Well, I was thinking, would it be hot to read on? And I hadn't found one to read without reading like a million chapters. So I just said 'Unprepared should have a make out in it someday.' Then I went to my email today in class and screamed a little. I saw this had been updated three days ago! I can't believe I missed it.
So really, it is just as hot to watch as it is to read. (:
Especially because it's Bill and Tom. ♥
If I had the chance I'd do 'em both.
Anyways, I'm getting off topic from the review, so um...
Great, amazing, perfect, sexy chapter! :D
Author's Response: I'm not going to say anything to that. I'm just going to pretend I read the last line only. Thanks for reviewing. (;
Date: 11/19/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Tom is pretty sexy. [:
I'm starting to fall in love again. ^_^
Mallory will be dead soon though.
I plan on hacking your account and changing the ending of the story.
Whenever this story ends.
Though I hope it never ends...
hahaha.
Sorryyyy!
I love it. (:
MAKE OUT MAKE OUT!
moreeee?
Author's Response: No hacking me! I've already been hacked once. :P Nothing was changed, but they reviewed my own story from it. Lmfao. Thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 11/19/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
i'll help bill to kill her!!! yeeeeyyy can i help?
Author's Response: If I let you help, everyone else will want to. :P Plus, I need her for my storyyyy! :P Lmao. Thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 11/19/08 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
i do really hate her you know??
Author's Response: Hahaha. You're allowed to. (: Thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 11/19/08 12:17 am Title: Chapter 5
Tehehe! I nearly peed when I saw this had updated! It was a great chapter! the make out scene was sexy as hell and I'm SO sad about Bill's mom... poor thing. Keep em comin! :P
Author's Response: You almost peed?! Yay! That means I'm doing my job. (: Thanks so much! And I'm happy you liked the make out. (; I thought it was sexy but sweet at the same time. (: I know! She's mean for forgetting. And I've gotta be a bitch for thinking it up. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 11/18/08 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
*giggles* I loved the makeout! That was awesome. Great chapter!!!
Author's Response: That giggle made me think of Bill! xD Don't even ask why. :P thanks for reviewing!!!! :D:D:D:D
Date: 11/18/08 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
haha aww this was a cute chapter.... i kinda know what Bill felt like, my dad wasn't there on my last birthday and my sisters threw a little party for me. but i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: :D I'm sorry about your birthday. :/ Thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 11/18/08 07:34 am Title: Chapter 5
:O I'll go throw her in front of train for you Bill.
**scoffs** Yeah, she really needs to come back.
anywhooo.... it was good.
so post more soon. :D
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing! xD
Date: 11/17/08 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
i'll love next chapter? really? i can't wait then lol... i already loved this one... can't wait for more ;)
Author's Response: LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE next chapter. ^_^ thanks for reviewing. (;
Date: 11/17/08 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
Four months is definitely long enough to wait!!
:DD
I shall never be happy that Mallory is back, haha... but I don't hate you for it. It makes me happy when Bill and Tom are mean to her... I must be an evil person.
:/
Sorry I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a while. I died for a while... but now I'm back!!
:DD
Anyway... that was a really good chapter. Your writing is so awesome!
Author's Response: :D I'm so glad. I was terrified for a while there. >_> I thought people would be upset. Haha. You will be happy sooner or later. ^_^ I absolutely promise. You aren't evil! :D Oh it's okay. (: You reviewed now, so it's all good :D Thanks so much for reviewing! :D
Date: 11/17/08 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Pssht! Why on earth would you ever apologize for a make-out session?!
I was expecting sex from the authors notes
Psssht, don't apppologize, twas good.
I hope Simone's ok, or not, I can't decide, but tbh, I want an extreme of either. Like, she couldn't get signal but got married to Gordon, or she's at death's door and couldn't. Either way works.
Mallory, the fucking slag head bitchin whore.
She needs to die, Bill NEEDS to throw her under a train.
And awww!
The 'God, I love you' at the end jut made me melt, as this whole fic tends to do, I really really fucking love it!
I wanna know who the OMC is that does...something with Bill, I really really wish it was rape, since then there'd be no chance of him cheating on Tom, which is bad, very very bad.
I get such a warm tingly feeling when I read this, it's...wonderful :D.
Sorry, about the bad pun.
I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Because I thought some people would be upset. Some people seemed to like their relationship without 'I love yous' and without making out. :/ But I think they needed a step forward. Simone may or may not have a good reason for forgetting Bill's birthday. ^_^ Mallory = dead? Maybeee. (; ^_^ The OMC comes in around chapter 11 or 12. (: Thanks so much for reviewing. ^_^
Date: 11/17/08 10:43 am Title: Chapter 5
oh mein GOOTTTTT!!!! How cute! I can't believe Bill's mutter forgot his birthday!!! how cruel of her...
And what the hell are Mallory doing?
Like the train thingy! ;D
Author's Response: It's a surprise! xD Thanks for reviewing! xD
Date: 11/17/08 08:14 am Title: Chapter 5
*clears throat* Ahem.
First off...
YAY! :D Nooo, we're not mad about the makeout! -at least I'm not!- Heck, 4 months IS a good enough amount of time. (For some people 4 DAYS is good enough xD) And it was really cute, too! =]
Bill's mom is soooo messed up. Forgetting his birthday? Geez. There have been times where I've forgotten my bday and my mom has had to remind me xD I'm glad Tom and Norma were there to make him feel better, though :D
And Mallory? Blech. I seriously wanna HELP Bill throw her in front of the train. She just had to go and ruin everything, didn't she? *shakes head*
Lovely chapter! :D Really sweet.
Author's Response: All 5 reviews so far have said the same thing! xD I'm soooo glad to hear no one is mad yet ^_^ Ahhh Mallory and Simone's actions will be explained soon enough. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing! xD
Date: 11/17/08 07:09 am Title: Chapter 5
This story is The best one ever. Cannot wait until The next chapter.
Author's Response: >_> I wouldn't say that. I've read better. Lmao. But I appreciate that. ^_^ I should have another by the 27th. (: Thanks for reviewing. :D