Date: 12/29/08 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Haha, aww! I was nervous for a second, there.
Colin
Author's Response: Colin's a buttttttttttfaccccccccccceeeeeeee! :D thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 12/28/08 02:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for updating. More please.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 12/27/08 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
i actually forgot what this story was about at first, i had to re-read the alst chappie!
BUT... aweeeeeeeeeeeeee! >=D
i completley loved the ending to this =P haha ahhhhh
Author's Response: NO FORGETTING ABOUT BILL AND TOM! ): At least you read it. xD (I'm kinda not surprised you forgot. It had been nearly a month since the last update! ): That's too long and I apologize.) Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 12/27/08 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
I thought colin was in Berlin!?!
:O
well anyways, thank god you've finally updated!
x)
Author's Response: It's called, skipping-school. xD Hahaha. Yes, thank God. I wouldn't have ever gotten it done. xD Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 12/27/08 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
more soon?
pleeeeeaaaaseeee(a)
Author's Response: Of course. :) By January 11th I'm sure there will be a new chapter. :) Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 12/27/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
@___@
yay
Author's Response: yay is right! :D thanks for reviewing. ;]
Date: 12/27/08 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh dear... I was going to have to punch Bill if he made Tom break up with him, haha.
Anddddd, like I've said 5000 times before... I will murder Colin!
DD:
Author's Response: Lmfao. Bill is just a confused boy. ): Don't be mean to him! And Yes, Colin needs to be murdered. maybe i'll bring you into the story to do just that. xD jkkkk. :) thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 12/27/08 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
You know, I was itching for an update, and I think I'd have waited until Monday before I came to pester you, but I was so fucking glad when I saw that this was updated.
Even though I shit myself when I opened it up.
Instead of seeing it on the recent page it from the e-mail I got, and it didn't register that you'd been putting quotes in the author's notes. So the "I think we're done..." scared the shit out of me since I thought that you were ending the fic prematurely or something, but then I realised, but then, I thought, 'oh shit, they're gonna break up or something'.
I've got one word to say about that, meanie.
Then I read that Charlotte was in it, and I forgave you instantly, and grinned like a fucking retard.
I love how Tom was, how he is even in this. He's so cute with Bill, and the thought that he'd be intimidating to others just made me smile. Just the thought of Tom being a thug, but nice to Bill makes me swoon. And I know that that isn't really the case in this, but to other people in the fic it probably is, and that's good enough.
Ok, so, you know that I really hate Mallory? Ima leave that for a while.
TOM NEEDS TO BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF COLIN WHEN HE EVEN TOUCHES BILL.
I swear, if you do that, I think I'll fall at your feet and kiss you/them.
But it's your fic and I can't wait to see what you do and where it goes.
*cough*update soon*cough*
Author's Response: Kiss my feet, Charlotte! I know, I was taking a longgg time but I'm super sorry about that. ): I felt terrible!! TERRIBLE I SAY! TERRIBLE! I'm gonna have to do better with it. I'm gonna try too. :) Charlotte is gonna be in the next few chapters a lot. :D Well, I hope you liked this chapter. And kissing my feet. :) Thanks for reviewing. :DDDDD ♥
Date: 12/27/08 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
I will forgive you! I know how that stuff can occupy you;D lol. Great comeback chappie! I was actually thinking that it was completely over with them and I was soooooo ready to yell at you, but I'm not now. Thank you!
Author's Response: Hehehe. :) Nope, they aren't gonna break up. Maybe one'll die though. It'd be easier than a break up. OHH THAT'S A GOOD IDEA! maybe i'll kill off Tom... THANKS FOR REVIEWING AND GIVING ME A GREAT IDEA FOR THE ENDING! xD
Date: 12/23/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
I wanna read more of this one !!! :D
Author's Response: I'll have more as soon as possible. :D Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/02/08 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
OO!!! malorey sucks!!! ich hate her. lol. u should make him really throw her into the train!!! lol im evil!!
grr. tomi is the evil tickle monster haha!!!
Bill should kick her ass!! lol. or they should move! faaar away! something. then bill and tom wouldnt have to deal with all the shit lol
wonderful chappie!!! now updaye... SOON!!
Author's Response: Aww! :D Thank you so much. :) I'll have an updated as soon as possible! :D
Date: 12/02/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
more
Author's Response: I'm working on it. :) Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 11/29/08 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love the story :D Gott, they're both sooooo cute
Author's Response: Aww! :D I'm so glad. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 11/28/08 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
I can't believe their mothers suck that badly. *sigh*
Author's Response: Hahaha. I know. It's funny though, right? xD Bill and Tom aren't insane! :D -smiles- Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 11/28/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
*grin* I'd be the same way over Tom's abs lol. And that's some bullshit that Simone's getting married so soon. I loved this chapter. Amazing job hunny!!
Author's Response: -giggle- I'm so happy you liked it! :D I know. But she's a bitch. What're we gonna do? :P Hahaha. Thank you so much for reviewing! :D
Date: 11/28/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Nice chapter, cannot wait until The next.
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much for reviewing. :D
Date: 11/28/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 6
I am going to leave the longest review I possibly can. (:
I've seen a picture of Tom's abs and damn, they make me wanna be Bill for a day so I can play with them. ^_^ (My boyfriend is gonna get abs like that, I'll make him. :D )
I really love how Bill shoves Mallory in front of the train. I mean, we've been wanting that since the last story! I just hope it happens for real soon. But unfortunately there is no warning about death so I think I may be getting my hopes up. :P
Oh gosh. The Notebook makes me cry too. >_> It's such a sad movie. THEY BOTH DIE IN ONE ANOTHER'S ARMS! That's just sad. :/
I want more drama, as weird as that sounds. ^_^ I want to see Bill and Tom like, get into a fight or something. That'd give the story some more flavor. Because the mothers and Colin are doing a wonderful job but I wanna see BILL AND TOM right. xD
Well, that's all I can think of. (:
I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving. ^_^
I sure as hell did. xD
AMAZING CHAPTER!
Author's Response: Aww! :D If he does get abs like that, let me play with him. :) JUST KIDDING! xD I want her to die but you know, I'm not going to do that. :) It's so sweet at the same time. ;) Thanks for the long review. I had an awsome Thanksgiving as well. ^_^
Date: 11/28/08 09:37 am Title: Chapter 6
Simone is nearly as bad as Mallory. She's forgetting birthdays then not telling anyone about her fucking wedding.
I'm about to just jump into the story and murder them both. then go find Colin and kill him so he can't fun anything.
THEN! I'll go to Bill and Tom and tell them to stop being stupid and fuck already. (:
I think that would be a shitting story but oh well, It'd be funny to read. :D
Anyways, that was an awesome chapter and I loved Tom's dream in the beginning. ^_^
Author's Response: She's a bitch. :) Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 11/27/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
this chapter was awesome.... i absolutely loved it, very good twist. i cant wait to read the next (even if it will get me hating you, which i dont think will happen by the way)
Author's Response: ^_^ I'm glad you liked it. (: Yeah, I think people will start hating me from 6 on out. xD Thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 11/27/08 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
I've just deleted the review that I was about to leave *unamused face*
But, me likey, me likey me likey, I'd have liked it more however, if that scene at the beginning wasn't in italics, and did actually happen.
Even if it'd have made Bill a murderer it'd have been worth it.
Simone seems to be beginning to act alot more like Mallory, not nearly as bad, but she's taking tiny steps towards how she acts.
*sigh* Tom's abs. They need to be touched, by Bill, when they're laying in bed together. It's too cute.
I love movie scenes so god damn much! They make me aww like mad.
Personally though, I can't what people find so sad about the Notebook, sure, my eyes were the tiniest bit wet, but that was it.
I don't want to hate you over next chapter, actually, you think that people will hate you because of big steps in their relationship don't you? So, if that's the reason, then GOOD! But if it isn't then it's bad.
Right I'm starting to ramble.
Moving on.
I really wanna know who the OMC is that Bill get's with.
I hope he's fit, and it's rape, or along them lines, just so that he isn't cheating on Tom.
Is it that man Mallory was with?
Okay, I'm not going to lie, I'm grasping at straws, but I just really wanna know.
Is that the reason why we'll hate you in the next chapter?
I DON'T WANT THE FLUFF BETWEEN TOM AND BILL TO END.
Please don't make it, I love it too much. But, if it makes them even closer and even more fluffy, then I'm more than happy to read it.
And Tom makes everything better. ^.^
Author's Response: When I first started reading this review I thought you were going to say you hated the chapter. :P I would have cried if you didn't like it. ): Simone is becoming very Mallory like, hmm? I'll have to fix that. Hahaha. Yeah, Bill's going to touch more of Tom further on in the story. ^_^ (I think this story will be like 25 or more chapters from the looks of things...) I think you may hate me though. Things start going down hill from here... :/ You'll know who the OMC is by chapter 13, I think. Somewhere around thee. xD A big step could drive readers away, exactly. ): I don't want that. No that is not the reason. The OMC comes in around 13, like I said. xD ^_^ The fluff ends soon, unfortunately. I think I've said too much. >_> THANKS FOR REVIEWING! :D