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Reviewer: Monsoon_483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 14 - A Heater

YAY NO HIV! i love you you rock!


TEAM BILL

Author's Response: Aww...thanks!!!

Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 14 - A Heater

YUMMY!! That was an excellent chapter! I can't wait for more!! ^,,^

Author's Response: I'm actually looking forward to writing the next chapter...which is unusual for me and the stories I write. Anyway, I hope I can find the time to write it, the next few days are going to be extremely hetic!

Reviewer: RockChickSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prolouge

I need more! please please please

Author's Response: More's coming!

Reviewer: 10soley Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 11:48 am Title: Chapter 14 - A Heater

I definitely need myself a tom-heater !

Author's Response: Ah me too...

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 03:43 am Title: Chapter 14 - A Heater

O.O

Author's Response: O_o

Reviewer: Ciren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 02:17 am Title: Chapter 14 - A Heater

I'm into ur story now too plz update quick

Author's Response: I will...but exams, and work...my life is packed full right now!

Reviewer: kissmeimvegetarian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/08 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

OMG...I just started reading this story today...and it's AMAZING!!!
More soon please!!!

Author's Response: Ok :D!!!

Reviewer: LondonFire Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/08 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

Oooooooh!!

Oh, this has to be the best chapter yet!

Amazing, more soon!



Author's Response: Thanks...I'm almost done the next chapter, so it'll be out soon!

Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/08 10:22 am Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

The lyrics were amazing! (Again!) And... wooooooow... that was completely and totally... just... wooooow... WHAT THE HELL, GUSTI!!!! What's wrong with him?! He's not supposed to be kissing on Alyssa. I would've thought that Bill would've given before Justchel... what's up with that?!

Author's Response: Thank you!rnAnd...I don't know exactly what's up with it...it just seemed right.

Reviewer: Intersteller Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

The songs were great, not boring at all. Excellent story by the way.

Author's Response: Awww...thank you!!!

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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GUSTI KISSIED HER!!!!!!!!! d:)LOVE!!!

Author's Response: YAY!

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

No, when I read your lyrics, I found myself singing them out loud and the way I imagined it being played on a guitar or something is really good! Great story too!

Author's Response: *gasps* YAY!!! Someone besides me can imagine the music to my lyrics...I'm not crazy after all!rn(it does have a really strong guitar part!)

Reviewer: Sissi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

Hahaa :D This is great
Write more!

Author's Response: Thanks, I will!

Reviewer: veggielover13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

your beautiful lyrics never bore me! This is really sweet i love it. I want more!!! =D

Author's Response: Thank you sooooooo much :)!!!

Reviewer: incognitoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

they don't bore me at all!! they're good!!

I can't wait to see what happens when tom and lyssa share a room!!!

please hurry with the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Lots of drama...the next chapter shouldn't take more than a few days...

Reviewer: likewhoa10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Kiss

Good chapter!!!
I liked the lyrics!
They sound so awesome! :D
Continue soon!!!

Love, Emily

Author's Response: Thank you!rnThank you!rnThank you! :)rnI will!

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/08 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'

MORE!

Author's Response: Ok

Reviewer: Sissi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/08 07:00 am Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'

HIV! Oh my God! That's pretty serious!
This was really great! Write more! :D

Author's Response: It is serious, most definitely not a laughing matter...

Reviewer: LondonFire Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'

Oooh, interesting!

I wonder if she has HIV?

Update soon!!



Author's Response: I will!

Reviewer: veggielover13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'

OMG you should have seen me when i read that. I almost burst a lung with my huge gasp. HIV?!?! OMG she might have it OMGOMGOMG
(they had sex SEVENTEEN times? wow =D)

Author's Response: Don't burst a lung please...then I would lose a reviewerrn(I know...at first it was 27, but I changed it for some reason that I can't remember)

Author's Response: Don't burst a lung please...then I would lose a reviewerrn(I know...at first it was 27, but I changed it for some reason that I can't remember)

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