Date: 10/13/08 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'
WOOOOOOOW... that was a surprise alright. totally INSANE!! LOOOOVE IT!!! ^,,^
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: 10/13/08 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'
OMG HIV!!!!!!!!!! MORE!
Author's Response: Ok :)
Date: 10/13/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'
OMG! dont come back positive!
TEAM BILL
Author's Response: Team _______!!!!
Date: 10/13/08 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'
please don't have it!!!!!!
Author's Response: Pretty please!!! Hmm, but I can't let my emotions interfere with the story...
Date: 10/13/08 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A 'WHAT?'
cant wait to the next chapi comes :0
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/12/08 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
meanie tom.........
Author's Response: big meanie Tom
Date: 10/12/08 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
cant wait to the next chapi :DD
Author's Response: I can't either :D It'll come soon.
Date: 10/12/08 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
I like the song a lot! Very good lyrics!
And I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait to write about what's going to happen next!
Date: 10/12/08 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
This is very good!
You have to write more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/12/08 07:56 am Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
tom..... -_-"
Author's Response: He's a bad boy.
Date: 10/12/08 12:01 am Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
NOT VERY GOOD MY BUTT!!!! Those lyrics were AMAZING!!!! Loved the new chapter! It gets better every one naturally!!!
Author's Response: Thanks sooo much!!!!! For both :)
Date: 10/11/08 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
question: do those amazing lyrics have a title?
Author's Response: Answer: Not yet...I was thinking maybe 'You Alone' or 'Free to Be Me'. Hm....
Date: 10/11/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
DID YOU REALLY WRITE THOSE LYRICS?!?! I thought you were good, but god, i didn't know how wrong i was. You are not good. YOU ARE SO FUCKING UNBELIEVEABLY INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG THOSE LYRICS ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! You have serious talent!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for more =]
Author's Response: Aww...thank you! You are a very good reviewer yourself :)
Date: 10/11/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
that song was good!!! I don't know what you're talking about!!!
DRAMA!!! I love it!! MORE MORE!!!
and FASTER and LONGER!!! =]
Author's Response: Tee hee...why thank you! I'm an amateur songwriter, as well as a writer...and I promise more drama soon!
Date: 10/11/08 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Horror
Hey, i love your story i just started it today and already finished, i can't wait for the next chapter, i like your story lots its so unique, please please post more soon, i will keep reading and reviewing
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/11/08 02:53 am Title: Chapter 10 - A Second Time
please continue. and FAST!! I'm dying here!
Author's Response: Ok :)
Date: 10/10/08 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Confession
Well, after I read the first paragraph, I was extremely shocked that Tom said he might love her. I just thought "Oh boy..."
And then that thing about virgin, Alyssa telling about her loss of virginity, etc etc just ruined everything for me.
You started Tom like a "rapist" and then he's all Romeo. I mean, it's surreal!
Not to mention that she is working for them. I don't think her job description says to have romantic affairs with them. It's the first rule of employment, no dating the clients.
Don't take it the wrong way, but I like to be honest. Sorry, I won't be reading anymore :/
Author's Response: Ok then, sorry to hear that
Date: 10/10/08 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 6 - An Incident
*laughs stupidly* Frying pans... self-defense... *LOL*
I'm so stupid I hadn't realized you had updated so I have lots of reading to do, yay!
Oreos, milk, and hugs! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/09/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 10 - A Second Time
no definately not a filler =]
AAAAHHHH! GEORG LIKES HER?! Wow, a love triangle. This is so exciting! But again, you left me hanging when they were about to talk. And i dont even know WHAT they're going to talk about. I think my blood pressure has gone up just from reading this lol =]
Author's Response: Oh..I'm sorry. I didn't even mean to make it a cliffhanger this time.
Date: 10/09/08 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 10 - A Second Time
omg georg how dare you
more plzzz
Author's Response: Ok...I'll try to write when I can.