Date: 10/06/09 12:12 am Title: Taking What's Mine.~For You.~Fake.
You did a beautiful job w/ everyone's perspectives. They were all perfect. Georg's totally evil, Bill's healing slowly, and Andi's seeing sense but it might not turn out well for him. You did a great job, I can't say that enough.
Date: 10/05/09 11:12 pm Title: Taking What's Mine.~For You.~Fake.
;__; I'm not sure what to say... but this chapter makes me sad! D"X
However... I feel all warm and fuzzy inside whenever Tom kisses Bill ^-^ The same thing happens when I write my own scenes xD lol
Date: 10/05/09 08:26 pm Title: Taking What's Mine.~For You.~Fake.
i do like it... man those are some messed up kids... i hope they turn out ok... and georg needs to see a therapist... like seriously... hell maybe andi can become fdriends with bill and they can help each other since they are alike
Date: 10/05/09 08:04 pm Title: Taking What's Mine.~For You.~Fake.
thanks for the update! =)
Date: 10/05/09 06:35 pm Title: Taking What's Mine.~For You.~Fake.
Oh... ;-; I'm glad that Bill is getting better with Tom's help, but now poor Andreas. :[
Oh and Georg is just so evil!!! >:[
Nice update otherwise, I really like this story. :]
Date: 10/05/09 05:26 pm Title: Taking What's Mine.~For You.~Fake.
“Look Alicia.” Tom said in a tone I had never heard him use, “I think it’s best if you leave Bill alone now. Besides, I don’t understand why anyone would fuck with a girl like you. I would be afraid of catching something.”
“Excuse me?” Alicia seemed shocked beyond words. I looked at her.
“You heard him. And if I ever hear you call him Tomi again, I’m going to beat your ass.” I spoke up.
LMFAO!!! Looked sOOOOOOOO good in my head xD
Liked Andi´s POV!
Still need 2 get da new TH and Paramore album :( Lack of money and stupidity called "we don't have the delux version till the end of the month" came in my way >.<
Great update! More soon pleaseeeee!
Date: 10/05/09 04:14 pm Title: Taking What's Mine.~For You.~Fake.
Wow! This was quite a chapter. George is really a sick person. He's just really scary and I'm worried. Bill really does seem like he's getting better or at least trying to fight for his life back. Tom is so wonderful and I know he can continue to help if George doesn't try to kill him first. Poor Andreas but good for him getting away from George and his sadistic ways. It will cost him in a way but I hope he can help Bill. I really can't wait to read what happens next. I curious and worried for Bill so much.
Date: 09/17/09 11:09 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
yay. :D
a new chapter.
:P it's been up for awhile, but I haven't gotten around to post a review. :P
amazing chapter. (:
Date: 09/17/09 12:05 am Title: Save Me...Tomi.
well i luved it!! its been long i just saw u added a chappie n haha went to read it! things are gettin betteeer YAY!!
Date: 09/08/09 08:29 am Title: Solitude.
MORE! NOW! I want more now! You get it? NOWWWW!!!!
Author's Response: ahhhh! Trying! lmao. Don't worry, there will be more...just not now haha *hides*
Date: 09/05/09 04:43 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
Woah. New reader here, *waves*, and I've read this from the beginning in one sitting. I loved it. Someone I knew had a "problem" like Bill's, so this kind of hit home for me. Made me tear up a bit. And everything else, god damn, lol. It's a very good story. So sad, so intense at times, but it's written well and I wasn't bored once. Good job
Much love
Author's Response: Hallo! *waves back*.Glad to see a new reader haha. I like how people can relate to Bill's character in this story. Bill is easy to write but thats only because I kind of base his emotions a little on my own crazy mood swings lol. Anyway, I'm sorry it made you tear up...wait...is that good or bad? *hugs you*. I'm sooooo glad that you didnt get bored! Thats like one of my biggest fears for this story hehe. Thank you so much for the review though!rn
*Returning the love*rn
Fragile.
Date: 09/02/09 07:20 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
i am glad you are working on this story again, i really like it. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank You! *hugs*
Date: 09/02/09 12:30 am Title: Save Me...Tomi.
Oh I loved this chapter, Bill was relatively ok, they're together now, Bill's away from Georg, this was good.
Date: 09/01/09 09:09 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
*squeeeeee* What a cute chapter. x]
I really like this story and I can't wait for more updates. :D
Date: 09/01/09 09:08 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
oh my god thats so sad but im happy that he let tom save him
Date: 09/01/09 07:18 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
ooh happy bday twinz=] plz update soon thx=]
Date: 09/01/09 06:26 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
Aww. Tomi :) He's so cute! They are so cute together. I'm glad that Bill wants to get better and I'm even happier that Tom can help. I just hope George doesn't rune it all. Update soon :)
Date: 09/01/09 06:12 pm Title: A Promise Broken, A Promise Kept.
I wnted to say this in the last chapter:I used to have a Tomi too... but not anymore
Date: 09/01/09 05:22 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
just plain lovely.
:')
can't wait for the next chapter!
i bet its georgs.
:O
Date: 09/01/09 04:24 pm Title: Save Me...Tomi.
Nice update! Was thinking of you a few days ago! Sweet ending :D
Author's Response: hhh!I've been thinking of you too twin! whats up? I've been waiting for emails from you but they never came haha. Thnks for the review though!